2015 Guidelines for Writing Rhetorical Analysis 1. Read and dissect the prompt carefully, looking for clues to the speaker, occasion, audience, and purpose. 2. Read the text critically—more than once! Read all the way to the end! Usually, there is a powerful strategy the author uses at the end to hammer home his point. 3. Annotate the text by labeling the strategies/appeals you see and noting in the margin the intent of the speaker/writer in each part of the text. Is he criticizing, explaining, comparing, contrasting, or appealing to shared values or instilling feelings of …? 4. Be sure to consider the audience. Is it a general audience or a specific audience? What does the audience already know or think about the topic at hand? What don't they know? What is the historical setting? (Might it have any relevance?) Are there any significant events that the audience has recently experienced? What seems to be the audience's attitude or mindset before the speech or essay begins? After Reading: 5. Plan your essay. First, review your annotations and make a decision regarding the author’s purpose that you will then support with an analysis of the strategies he uses to convey his purpose. The best thesis statements have a what and a why! Tip: use in order to or because 6. Decide how you will structure your essay. 3 Possibilities: Structure of the Text plan – follow the structure of the speech, letter, essay, or column, to provide the framework for your analysis. In other words, you will discuss the author’s intent paragraph by paragraph or section by section. The Unifying Principle Plan – the central purpose of the text is defined in the introduction and used as the unifying principle. The secondary intents that contribute to the overall purpose are then explored in the body paragraphs. The Rhetorical Appeal Plan – paragraphs are organized by the appeals created by the writer/speaker 7. Do not waste time with a lengthy INTRODUCTION. Develop 1-3 complex sentences which mention the rhetorical situation (speaker, the subject, the context, audience, purpose). Do not include rhetorical devices anywhere in the introduction. End your introduction with a purpose statement. Again, do not mention specific strategies in the thesis statement for a timed writing. (You must, however, mention specific strategies in the body of the paper.) 8. Begin your BODY PARAGRAPHS. Every analysis paragraph MUST include a topic sentence with an assertion you will prove. Do not list devices in the topic sentence! Instead, try to give the writer’s intent in the section you are analyzing followed by evidence and sentences explaining what the words accomplish. Identify the strongest rhetorical strategies used in that particular section. This includes blending specific text examples with your own words. Do NOT try to discuss every strategy the writer uses; pick the strongest! Clearly and specifically explain how the rhetorical strategies are used to help the writer achieve his purpose and reach his audience. Use strong verbs such as the “Kennedy conveys,” or “the repetition creates a sense of … End the paragraph with the intended effect on the audience. These items must be woven together seamlessly into one sophisticated chunk of a body paragraph. A sample format is below: FORMAT and EXAMPLE [from Pres. Reagan’s speech after the space shuttle Challenger explosion in the 1980s]: 1. The first sentence identifies which section of the text you are discussing and the main idea of that section. (Writer’s last name) (transition word) his/her (type of text) by (strong verb) that (main idea of this section of the text). Reagan begins his tribute to the Challenger astronauts by acknowledging that the shuttle accident has appropriately postponed his planned State of the Union address and by expressing the depth of his personal grief. 2. The second sentence conveys the writer’s support for the main idea by identifying and providing a specific example for one rhetorical strategy used by the writer. [This sentence is repeated if you want to discuss more than one rhetorical strategy.] He appeals to the mournful emotions of the audience by admitting that he and Nancy are “pained to the core”, and that today is rightfully a day of remembrance and grieving. 3. The third sentence explains how the rhetorical strategies you discussed in the previous sentences help the writer achieve his purpose by using an in order to statement. He joins in this time of mourning in order to unify the nation and by sharing his own feelings, he hopes the citizens will feel comfort knowing their leader understands their pain. 4. The fourth sentence identifies the effect of the writer’s use of these rhetorical strategies on the audience. This outpouring of emotion from the president conveys a calming tone that reassures the Nation that their grief is both understandable and proper. Put it all together and this is what one paragraph of the body of a rhetorical analysis essay might look like: Reagan begins his tribute to the Challenger astronauts by acknowledging that the shuttle accident has appropriately postponed his planned State of the Union address and by expressing the depth of his personal grief. He appeals to the mournful emotions of the audience by admitting that he and Nancy are “pained to the core” , and that today is rightfully a day of remembrance and grieving. He joins in this time of mourning in order to unify the nation and to comfort the citizens. This outpouring of emotion from the president conveys a calming tone that reassures the Nation that their grief is both understandable and proper. [Repeat the format with another piece of evidence/strategy for a longer paragraph]. 1. Focus on the predominant strategies the rhetor uses and how those strategies affect the audience. A rhetorical strategy is anything that a writer does that has the potential to change the thoughts or feelings of his audience. Consider the following: • Figurative language (e.g., metaphors, similes): These creative comparisons can be used to help the audience better visualize the author's ideas. • Analogies (or comparisons in general) • Emotional Appeals (how does the writer target the audience's emotions?) • Logical Appeals (how does the writer target the audience's intelligence?) • Appeals to shared values • Use of repetition: If they repeat it often enough, people tend to believe it. Also, repetition aids memory recall. • Diction: Emotionally-charged words can be extremely effective. Also, a writer might use patterns of words to establish a theme or message. • Imagery – what image comes to mind because of certain comparisons or contrasts? • Tone (consider how effective sarcasm can be) or Tone shifts • Cause-effect argumentation (if this happens, then....) • Addressing the opposing viewpoints or objections • Use of historical precedents (this falls under analogies but is worth noting separately) Use of historical, cultural, literary and biblical allusions (this falls under analogies but is worth noting separately • Contrast (sometimes a writer best shows his position by contrasting it to another, weaker view) • Selection of Detail (remember, the person making the argument chooses what you see and don't see) SATIRE: If you get a satirical piece, be sure to look for the human weakness/societal ill or evil the satirist is criticizing or poking fun of and analyze devices like exaggeration, caricature, sarcasm, parody, mockery, understatement and tone such as sardonic, facetious, mocking. self‐deprecating, tongue‐in‐cheek, urbane, irony, paradox, understatement, hyperbole 10. In the CONCLUSION, reiterate the author’s purpose. Do not repeat the strategies. Reflect on the author’s feelings/ideas/thoughts. If the prompt asks for an evaluation of the author’s rhetorical effect, then end with such analysis. Style Tips: 1. Write in 3rd person active voice. Not, “Kennedy is instilling,” but “Kennedy instills…” 2. Avoid the 2nd person pronoun “you.” 3. Be concise. Replace “He starts off…” with “He begins…” and “He goes on to say…” with “He claims, argues, denounces, ( strong verb for analyzing purpose) that,…” 4. Identify the audience – don’t simply say “the audience,” but name them, i.e., “the steel company executives.” 5. Use connective tissue in your essay to establish adherence to the question. i. Try using echo words (synonyms) to build cohesion of ideas without redundant repetition (town/village; bland/ordinary/undistinguished) ii. Use transitions between paragraphs: A. Numerical: first, second, third, primarily, secondly B. Sequential: initially, furthermore, ultimately, in conclusion, to conclude C. Additional: furthermore, moreover, similarly, additionally D. Illustrative: for example, for instance, to illustrate E. Contrast/comparative: nevertheless, conversely, instead, however, none the less, on the contrary F. Cause and effect: therefore, consequently, as a result, accordingly G. Affirmation: of course, obviously, indeed 6. Replace vague pronouns like this and it with more specific nouns. 7. Avoid use of contractions like don’t and can’t. 8. Replace the word, thing, with specific nouns. 9. Separate words clearly. 10. Every day is one word unless used as an adjective in front of a noun. 11. Avoid using absolutes like everyone, always, all the time. Instead, use words like some, many and often. 12. Do NOT use the following phrases or words in your analysis: “the author is saying that,” “the author believes that,” “this means that,” “this shows that,” “the author uses,” “this literary term is used to,” or any variation of the above!!! Notes: it’s = it is; its = possessive; there= preposition; their =possessive; they’re = they are