MLA In-Text Documentation Taken from Doing Research by Dorothy U. Syler. McGraw-Hill, 1999 Student Paragraph According to law professor Franklin Zimring, the United States needs to severely limit handgun ownership or face the possibility of seeing handgun ownership increase “from 35 million to more than 50 million within 50 years” (54). Zimring points out that Americans are sharply divided “on restricting handguns and that enforcing such laws would cost many billions of dollars." He concludes that the benefits would not be seen immediately but that the restrictions “would probably have a cumulative impact over time” (54). Although Zimring paints a gloomy picture of high costs and little immediate relief from gun violence, he also presents the shocking possibility of 50 million guns by the year 2040. Can our society survive so much fire power? Clearly, this student paragraph demonstrates adequate acknowledgment of the writer's indebtedness to Zimring. You may wonder about the amount of direct quoting used by this student, but he wants the power of Zimring's words and statistics to build on. Notice that the placement of the parenthetical page reference acts as a visual closure to the student's borrowing; then he turns to his response to Zimring and his own views on the problem of handguns. MLA In-Text (Parenthetical) Citations The student paragraph above illustrates the most common form of parenthetical documentation in MLA style, that is, parenthetical references to author and page number, or just to page number if the author has been mentioned in an introductory tag. Because a reference only to author and page number is an incomplete citation (readers could not find the source with such limited information), whatever is cited this way in the essay must refer to a specific source presented fully in a Works Cited list that follows the text of the paper. General guidelines for citing are given below and on the next few pages, followed by examples and explanations of the required patterns of documentation. You need a 100 percent correspondence between the sources listed on your Works Cited page(s) and the sources you cite (refer to) in your paper. Do not omit from your Works Cited any sources you refer to in your paper. Do not include in your Works Cited any sources not referred to in your paper. Guidelines for Using Parenthetical Documentation The purpose of documentation is to make clear exactly what material in a passage has been borrowed and from what source the borrowed material has come. Parenthetical documentation requires specific page references for borrowed material. Parenthetical documentation is required for both quoted and paraphrased material. Parenthetical documentation provides as brief a citation as possible consistent with accuracy and clarity. 1 The Simplest Patterns of Parenthetical Documentation The simplest parenthetical reference can be prepared in one of three ways: 1. Give the author's last name (full name in a first reference to an author) in the text of your paper and place the relevant page number(s) in parentheses following the borrowed material. Frederick Lewis Allen observes that, during the 1920s, urban tastes spread to the country (146). 2. Place the author's last name and the relevant page number(s) in parentheses immediately following the borrowed material. During the 1920s, “not only the drinks were mixed, but the company as well” (Allen 82). 3. On the rare occasion that you cite an entire work rather than borrowing from a specific passage, give the author's name in the text and omit any page numbers. Tuchman argues that there are significant parallels between the fourteenth century and our time. Each one of these in-text references is complete only when the full citation is found in the Works Cited page, thus: Allen, Frederick Lewis. Only Yesterday: An Informal History of the Nineteen-Twenties.. New York: Harper, 1931. Tuchman, Barbara W. A Distant Mirror: The Calamitous 14th Century. New York: Knopf, 1978. The three patterns just illustrated should be used in each of the following situations: 1. The work is not anonymous-the author is known. 2. The work is by one author. 3. The work cited is the only work used by that author. 4. No other author in your bibliography has the same last name. 5. The borrowed material is either quoted or paraphrased. Placement of Parenthetical Documentation The simplest placing of a parenthetical reference is at the end of the appropriate sentence before the period, but, when you are quoting, after the quotation mark. During the 1920s, “not only the drinks were mixed, but the company as well” (Allen 82). Do not put any punctuation between the author's name and the page number. If the borrowed material ends before the end of your sentence, place the parenthetical reference 2 after the borrowed material and before any subsequent punctuation. This placement more accurately shows what is borrowed and what is your own work. Sport, Allen observes about the 1920s, had developed into an obsession (66), another similarity between the 1920s and the 1980s. If a quoted passage is long enough to require setting off in display form (block quotation), then place the parenthetical reference at the end of the passage, after the last period. (Remember that long quotations in display form do not have quotation marks.) It is hard to believe that when he writes about the influence of science, Allen is describing the 1920s, not the 1980s: The prestige of science was colossal. The man in the street and the woman in the kitchen, confronted on every hand with new machines and devices which they owed to the laboratory, were ready to believe that science could accomplish almost anything. (164) And to complete the documentation for all three examples: Works Cited Allen, Frederick Lewis. Only Yesterday: An Informal History of the Nineteen-Twenties. New York: Harper, 1931. Parenthetical Documentation for Complex Sources Not all sources can be cited in one of the three simplest forms described above, for not all meet the five criteria listed on page 161. Works by two or more authors, for example, will need somewhat fuller references. Each sample form of parenthetical documentation illustrated below is completed with a full Works Cited reference. Two Authors, Mentioned in the Text Richard Herrnstein and Charles Murray contend that it is “consistently. . . advantageous to be smart” (21). Two Authors, Not Mentioned in the Text The advantaged smart group form a “cognitive elite” in our society (Herrnstein and Murray 26-27). 3 Works Cited Herrnstein, Richard J., and Ch4rles Murray. The Bell Curve: Intelligence and Class Structure in American Life. New York: Free, 1994. A Book in Two or More Volumes Sewall analyzes the role of Judge Lord in Dickinson's life (2:642-47). OR Judge Lord was also one of Dickinson's preceptors (Sewall 2: 642-47). Note: The number before the colon always signifies the volume number; the number(s) after the colon represents the page number(s). Works Cited Sewall, Richard B. The Life of Emilv Dickinson. 2 vols. New York: Farrar, 1974. A Book or Article Listed by Title (Author Unknown) According to the Concise Dictionary of American Biography, William Jennings Bryan's 1896 campaign stressed social and sectional conflicts (117). The Time’s editors are not pleased with some of the changes in welfare programs (“Where Welfare Stands” 4:16). Always cite the title of the article, not the title of the journal, if the author is unknown. Works Cited Concise Dictionary of American Biography. New York: Scribner's, 1964. “Where Welfare Stands.” Editorial. New York Times 18 May 1997, sec. 4: 16. 4 A Work by a Corporate Author According to the report of the Institute of Ecology's Global Ecological Problems Workshop, the civilization of the city can lull us into forgetting our relationship to the total ecological system on which we depend (13). Although corporate authors may be cited with the page number within the parentheses, your presentation will be more graceful if corporate authors are introduced in the text. Then only page numbers go in parentheses. Works Cited Institute of Ecology. Man in the Living Environment. Madison: U of Wisconsin P, 1972. Two or More Works by the Same Author During the 1920s, 'not only the drinks were mixed, but the company as well' (Allen, Only Yesterday 82). According to Frederick Lewis Allen, the early 1900s were a period of complacency in America (The Big Chance 4-5). In The Big Change, Allen asserts that the early 1900s were a period of complacency (4-5). If your Works Cited list contains two or more works by the same author, the fullest parenthetical citation will include the author's last name, followed by a comma; the work's title, shortened if possible; and the page number(s). If the author's name appears in the text-or the author and title both, as in the third example above-omit these items from the parenthetical citation. When you have to include the title, it is best to simplify the citation by including the author's last name in the text. Works Cited Allen, Frederick Lewis. The Big Change. New York: Harper, 1952. ---. Only Yesterday: An Informal History of the Nineteen-Twenties. New York: Harper, 1931. 5 Two or More Works in One Parenthetical Reference Several writers about the future agree that big changes will take place in work patterns (Toffler 384-87; Naisbitt 35-36). Separate each author cited with a semicolon. But if the parenthetical citation would be disruptively long, cite the works in a "See also" note rather than in the text. Works Cited Naisbitt, John. Megatrends: Ten New Directions Transforming Our Lives. New York: Warner, 1982. Toffler, Alvin. The Third Wave. New York: Bantam, 1981. Complete Publication Information in Parenthetical Reference Occasionally you may want to give complete information about a source within parentheses in the text of your paper. Then a Works Cited list is not used. Square brackets are used for parenthetical information within parentheses. This approach may be appropriate when you have used only one or two sources, even if many references are made to the few sources. Literary analyses are one type of paper for which this approach to citation may be a good choice. For example: Edith Wharton establishes the bleakness of her setting, Starkfield, not just through description of place but also through her main character, Ethan, who is described as bleak and unapproachable, (Ethan Frome [New York: Scribner's, 19111 3. All subsequent references are to this edition.). Later Wharton describes winter as “shut[ting] down on Starkfield” and negating life there (7). Additional-Information Footnotes or Endnotes At times you may need to provide additional useful information, explanation, or commentary that is not central to the development of your paper. These additions belong in content footnotes or endnotes. However, use these sparingly and never as a way of advancing your thesis. Many instructors object to content footnotes or endnotes and prefer only parenthetical citations in student papers. http://www.columbia.edu/cu/cup/cgos/idx_basic.html 6