[Stone setting – Sith Temple. Joe is lying on the floor (he’s scarred?) while Diavo is with him, comforting him.]
JOE
<weakly> It’s over, Diavo.
DIAVO
My cousin, I’m sorry.
JOE
He’s unstoppable now…
[Close up on Diavo, then black screen.]
DIAVO NARRATION
To understand, I must go back. Back to the beginning. When this mess started.
[Nar Shaddaa cantina. The bar is along a wall. Diavo [wearing brown pants & white shirt w/ adventurer’s garb: suspenders & bandana] is standing in front of it fighting off some guys. He jumps onto the bar, dodges some blaster shots and Stormtroopers come in to get him. He evades them all, and bolts out the front door to the Streets of Nar Shadda.]
[Streets of Nar Shadda. Diavo is running down a Street. A speeder zips up to Diavo, who stops running. Sune -- a dark Jedi -- is driving and Boba Fett is standing on the front with 2 blasters. The speeder pulls up close to the Street and Fett walks onto it toward
Diavo. He fires a shot from each blaster which Diavo dodges (just barely). Fett fires a couple more times [camera close to Fett – no editing needed]. Diavo Force Jumps high up. SLOW MOTION: while in the air, Diavo Force Pulls both of Fett’s blasters, which he catches. //slomo. Diavo lands in front of Fett, guns pointed right at him. Diavo tosses the guns aside, and punches Fett. Fett fights back. Punches mostly, Diavo roundhouses?
Fett charges to throw a punch, Diavo dodges it, but Fett gets the upper hand – picking him up and tossing him against the wall. Diavo doesn’t get up.]
BOBA FETT
[to Sune] He’s all yours, Jedi.
SUNE
I’m no Jedi.
[Sune gets up, Force Pulls Diavo’s lightsaber; holds it in hand. Diavo shakes his head and realizes what happened.]
DIAVO
<angry> Hey!
[Diavo reaches out as if Force Pulling his lightsaber back. But he doesn’t. Instead he
Force Grips Sune and raises him out of the speeder’s “cockpit.” Then he swings Sune around to the Street, banging him against the wall, knocking him to the Street. Diavo approaches Sune.]
SUNE
He told me you’d be trouble.
[Diavo stops, Force Pulls his lightsaber into his possession. After a second, he lights it toward the ground sideways – it’s red. He raises it to strike position.]
DIAVO
You won’t have to worry about that now.
[SLOW MOTION: Diavo begins to swing down on Sune, but Fett flying kicks Diavo from behind. Diavo is knocked forward; his lightsaber comes out of his hand and turns off, landing on the Street. Diavo lies on the Street. //slomo.]
[Sune gets up, Force Pulls Diavo’s lightsaber, and then stands over Diavo. Diavo looks at him, and then looks away]
BOBA FETT
Good job, Sune.
[Screen goes black.]
DIAVO’S FLASHBACKS: white screen flash
Diavo vs Boingo saber fight start
white screen flash
Boingo’s Force Push during that fight white screen flash
Boingo Gripping Diavo white screen flash
Boingo standing over Diavo shaking his head (camera angled up to Boingo?) white screen flash
Space shot of Dromund Kaas white screen flash
Diavo laying down, surrounded by dark Jedi. (Sune, Twilik, Maria, Jerec, Yun?) white screen flash
Diavo laying down, dark Jedi stand aside, original Darth Boingo standing over him
Black screen: evil deep laughter from Darth Boingo.
[Sith Temple: grey and __?__ color themed (blue Bicycle playing cards?), stony with columns/pillars. Diavo is laying on a stone table on an altar several steps higher than the surrounding room. Sune is there, watching as Diavo wakes up.]
DIAVO
[shakes head, sits up, looks over at Sune] What the? <fast> Where am I—who are you?!
SUNE
It will come back to you. I am Sune.
DIAVO
<gasps: “huh!”> [he looks around] The Temple…
SUNE
It’s time…
DIAVO
What? No!
SUNE
You cannot escape your destiny.
[MUSIC CLIP: Bridge Blimp from Grim Fandango]
DIAVO
The power will be mine !
[Inside The Raven – Diavo’s ship c/o Joe. Joe walks up to HG.]
JOE
I couldn’t find Diavo on Nar Shaddaa.
HG
Odd.
JOE
How far is it to Dromund Kaas?
HG
We don’t know how to find—
JOE
<gesture: throws hands up> He never got the map from 8t-88.
HG
As I recall, correctly, that deal ended violently.
JOE
“Aggressive negotiations.”
HG
Naturally.
JOE
Who?
;P
[Sith Temple hallway/corridor. Outside? Diavo walking down the hallway. Sith Zombie with lightsaber hiding by camera?]
MUSIC: Halloween Ramble from Tyrian
MUSIC: breaks right into above music. Majestic/chaotic/choir music! [end of El Tango de Roxanne?]
[Sith Temple. Altar, bright red light. Majestic. Diavo walks up to it, is engulfed, and floats – like the Valley of the Jedi. Then Diavo crashes to the ground and lies there – music cuts out.]
[Space: The Raven in orbit of Dromund Kaas.]
[The Raven interior; Joe & HG. HG standing in front of the big computer screen.]
HG
Like before, I’m reading no life, no ships and no temple.
JOE
I’ll use the Force.
[Joe Force Sees <SFX: Force See loop> with his hands to his head, and the camera is close on him, his face. He turns his head quickly and screen flashes white (?) and cuts to:]
[Diavo lying on ground by altar. He turns his head and says:]
DIAVO
Joe. Find me.
[screen flashes white again and goes back to Joe who looks at HG, puts his hands down and says:]
JOE
I’ll find him. [pulls out his lightsaber from his back] Let’s land!
[Diavo lying on the ground by the altar. He wakes up, shakes head and gets up. He walks toward a corridor.]
[Diavo enters a room. A figure in the dark approaches him. It is a Sith Zombie – grey skin, aged face & clothes. He has a lightsaber which he ignites when he’s in good light – the blade is red. He approaches Diavo, saber raised to strike. Diavo raises his hands, and then points them forward [hands turned 90 degrees] at Sith Zombie, who flies back at a wall and collapses, saber falling to its side. It gets up and begins to stagger to Diavo. It
shoots a single bolt of Force Lightning at Diavo, whom absorbs it bluntly before it hits him. Diavo then raises his hands again and points them at the Sith Zombie. A ball of
Force Destruction power is hurled at Sith Zombie, who blows apart when it gets hit in the chest. Diavo is sitting, he huffs & puffs.
Diavo Force Pulls the Saber into his hand]
[Sith Temple area. Joe walks alone, until Sune pops out, lightsaber in hand.]
JOE
Where’s Diavo?
SUNE
Feeling wicked I suppose.
JOE
What did you do to him?
[Diavo walks on the scene]
DIAVO
Gave me all the power of the ancient sith!
SUNE
You’re unstoppable now. Kill him!
[Diavo raises his arms like when he did for Force Destruction]
JOE
Diavo, no!
[SLOW MOTION: Diavo brings his arms down to point at Joe, but then turns to face
Sune. //slomo Red Force Lightning blasts from Diavo’s hands. Sune goes flying back and slams against a wall, he doesn’t get up. Diavo huffs & puffs.]
JOE
C’mon!
[inside the Raven. Joe, HG, Diavo lying down on a table]
HG
What’s happened to him?
JOE
He has all of the sith power. It’s too much.
[Camera zooms on Diavo lying down. Screen goes black, we hear Darth Boingo’s evil laughter again. Diavo sits up suddenly]
DIAVO
NO! [Joe & HG look at him] He’s still alive.
HG
Who?
JOE
Can’t be.
DIAVO
He’ll use the power, he’ll be unstoppable!
Joe and Diavo walking around, meet up with Boingo (dramatic revelation). Boingo is robotic – his legs and torso are metal! Joe fights Boingo, Joe gets beaten up. Diavo goes to help Joe, Boingo leaves for the Red Light.
**continuing the opening scene**
[Stone setting – Sith Temple. Joe is lying on the floor (he’s scarred?) while Diavo is with him, comforting him.]
JOE
<weakly> It’s over, Diavo.
DIAVO
My cousin, I’m sorry.
JOE
He’s unstoppable now.
DIAVO
<dramatic> Not yet.
MUSIC:
[Sith Temple. Altar, bright red light. Majestic. Boingo is walking to the altar ready to jump in the light. Diavo runs into the room.]
DIAVO
NO!
[Boingo turns to Diavo]
BOINGO
Fool. You can’t stop me.
DIAVO
Oh yes I can.
[Diavo raises his arms, and points to Boingo – Boingo goes flying against a wall. Diavo walks over to Boingo, now putting himself between Boingo & the altar. Boingo gets up, looks L & R and looks ready to fight.]
BOINGO
The power heals.
DIAVO
Heal THIS!
[Diavo raises his hands, then a ball of Force Destruction hurls toward Boingo. Boingo jumps in the air, and in the air he shoots out a single bolt of normal light blue Force
Lightning. Diavo absorbs the bolt with his hand. Diavo then shoots 3 bolts of red Force
Lightning, first from L hand, then R, then L again. Boingo (standing) gets hit: 1, 2, 3.
Boingo stumbles back. He stops, and then looks at the red light altar. He begins to dash for it. Diavo sees this. //SLOMO: Diavo looks at Boingo running to the altar, and beats him to it. Diavo jumps into the red light again. //slomo.]
BOINGO
NOOOOOOOO!!
[Diavo is again engulfed in the red light. The light then goes out and Diavo comes crashing to the ground. Boingo was only watching.]
[Boingo pulls out his lightsaber and ignites it. He walks to Diavo who’s still lying on the ground.]
[Camera close to Diavo, his head turns.]
DIAVO
Heh heh.
[Camera on Boingo. Suddenly his lightsaber flies out of his hand toward Diavo (it turns off). Diavo, still lying, reaches up one hand and catches it.]
[Diavo, lying on his side, jumps up and spins (ala Neo in The Matrix fighting Agent
Smith in the subway after they emptied their guns). He never lands, but floats a few feet above the ground. On his way up, Diavo flips the lightsaber so it points at a downward angle toward Boingo, who is some distance away. Diavo puts his free hand out and he lands on the ground. He twirls his hand so the lightsaber is pointed up again.]
[Camera: panned out]
[We see Diavo’s back/side in the foreground and Boingo in the background.
Diavo runs with Force Speed toward Boingo, his lightsaber held high.
//BULLET-TIME: The camera pans clockwise around Diavo, the pivot point equidistant between Diavo & Boingo, until Diavo is running at the camera. //bullet-time]
[The camera shows Boingo from front/side. Diavo comes right at him and slices
Boingo’s head off, spins his lightsaber to pointing down and stabs Boingo’s body
(lightsaber sizzling SFX and gears-&-sparks SFX?). The camera is panned out to show
Diavo pull the lightsaber out of Boingo’s body and turn the lightsaber off. Diavo looks towards Boingo’s head. He then walks away.]
[Sith Temple, back where Joe is. Diavo approaches Joe, who’s lying on his back.]
DIAVO
It’s done.
JOE
[looks to Diavo, sitting up just a little] So… am I… [Joe lays back]
DIAVO
I can save you.
[Diavo kneels over Joe, putting his hands out over Joe. Choir-y music begins (or The
Matrix’s Anything Is Possible (mid-song). A glowing (red? blue? purple?) light appears around the two. Diavo moves his hands/arms a little and looks up. We see a luminescent glow transfer from Diavo to Joe. Diavo then falls back onto his back, and Joe sits up, gasping, huffing & puffing. He looks at Diavo.]
JOE
Diavo!!
[Camera: straight down on Diavo lying down. Joe is standing now. Diavo sits up, and slowly looks at Joe.
[Camera: side view]
DIAVO
[factually] I’m powerless.
JOE
And I’m alive. Thanks.
[HG appears in an orange [photon] light]
HG
C’mon guys.
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