Handout: Introduction to Argument: Claims, Evidence, Warrants and Stakes The argument or arguable claim is the type of statement we will spend the most time and attention on in this class, and which you will be working through in your written assignments. This is a statement that intends to persuade, convince, argue, prove or suggest something to a reader or to someone who does not necessarily agree with you initially. This includes essays in which authors are trying to persuade the reader that their readings, ideas, theories or applications are valid. The basis for all your formal academic writing will be this type of a claim. Academic Argument Non-academic argument, or what most people mean by argument, is usually a polar opposition: I’m right/you’re wrong; I win/you lose; you’re a Democrat/I’m a Republican; I’m right/you’re left; I’m pro-choice/you’re against choice (Even this small example makes rhetorical choices – writing “against choice” instead of “pro-life” already makes an argument; displays a specific tone in the writing and reveals authorial assumptions/opinions.) Academic arguments are different – they are built on more complex, specific and detailed claims supported by evidence (usually from our readings). The evidence in an academic argument must be analyzed in your writing to show how it supports your claim or, in other words, how your evidence warrants the ideas you present. An academic argument is not a quarrel in which the winner has the right answer and the loser has the wrong one. An academic argument is an exploration. In academic argumentation opposing viewpoints are all valid as long as there is credible textual evidence to support one’s claims. 1) The claim In this course, we’re going to use a model developed by Stephen Toulmin, who sees arguments as having three parts: the claim, its support and associated warrants/assumptions. These categories are both what to look for while you are reading and to keep in mind while you are writing. The claim is the main argument or the main point of your academic essay. It is similar to a thesis but at the university level it should be more specific, original and arguable than a thesis. It should also not be too obvious or general. A claim IS: The main argument of an essay. It is probably the single most important part of an academic paper. The quality of the entire paper hinges on the claim, so if your claim is boring or obvious, the rest of the paper probably will be too. Argumentative. When you make a claim, you are arguing for a certain interpretation or understanding of your subject. A claim must be debatable and defendable with textual evidence. Specific. It makes a focused argument (MTV’s popularity is waning because it no longer plays music videos) rather than a general one (MTV sucks). A claim must be small enough to argue within the page limit you are given. Original. An argument must be your own – if it’s been argued already it’s time to find another angle, another text or another theoretical angle. A claim is NOT: A statement of opinion. Lobster is delicious is not a claim. There is no way to argue against it, because it is subjective. Overly general. The Seattle Seahawks had a bad defense last year is not a very good claim. A better one would be: Last season, the Seattle Seahawks’ defensive problems resulted largely from the offense’s short possession times. Limited necessarily to one sentence. If you have a complicated claim, it may take several sentences or even a whole paragraph to articulate it. Always followed by three supporting paragraphs and a conclusion. The “fiveparagraph essay” is a genre that is not capable of conveying the complexity of an college-level academic argument. Obvious. Using scientific evidence, expert interviews, and close reading of meteorological texts, you could successfully argue that it rains a lot in Seattle but this might not be the most interesting of arguments. Example of an appropriate Claim for an Academic Argument: The media is an influential force in our society. It carries the power to shape our thoughts and close or accommodate our perception of a particular event. In many cases, the media will shape an event around norms in society focused on a particular group of people, many times masking real and complex social issues that truly gave rise to the incident. These ‘master narratives’ oversimplify events and fail to tell the whole story in order to provide predictability and comfort to society or a group of people. This was the case during the Los Angeles riot of 1992. 2) The Support/Evidence These are statements that back up your claim. This can take many forms: facts, data, personal opinion, expert opinion, or evidence from other texts and sources. The more reliable and comprehensive your support, the more likely your audience is to accept your claim. The support for your papers in this class will be primarily textual evidence from our readings coupled with your own analysis of these passages. Additionally, the use of other critical texts written by academics can help support or provide a counterargument to your own. Academic argument excludes the following as support: Because I think so Because it is my opinion Because my friends or relatives or heroes think so Because most people think so Because it is morally right Examples of opinions: I like dance music. I think Virginia Woolf is a better writer than James Joyce. Examples of arguments or arguable claims with support: Dance music has become popular for reasons that have nothing to do with the quality of the music; rather, the clear, fast beats respond to the need of people on amphetamines to move, and to move quickly. Virginia Woolf is a more effective writer than James Joyce because she does not rely on elaborate language devices that ultimately confuse and alienate the reader. What are the differences? 1. An argument is supported by evidence, which can be debated/challenged. Opinion is supported by more opinion (and ultimately you end up with something along the lines of “Well, just because, okay?”). 2. Something more than statement and support: an arguable claim also goes on to address the “so what?” question, the implications and why we should care in the first place. 3) Warrant/assumptions Assumptions include the beliefs, values, inferences and/or experiences that you assume your audience has in common with you when writing essays. These are what readers and writers bring to the text. If your audience doesn’t share the assumptions you are making about your support, then it won’t be effective. In your analysis you will show how the textual evidence you use supports your claims – this includes explicitly discussing in detail the reasoning that warrants your use of that evidence. Example: Someone warns you, “Don’t eat the mushroom – it’s poisonous!” The claim: You shouldn’t eat the mushroom. Its support/evidence: The mushroom is poisonous. The warrants/assumptions: You speak the same language as the warning. You aren’t immune to poisonous mushrooms. You don’t already know it’s poisonous. You want to live. You trust the speaker’s knowledge of mushrooms. You don’t know of some other medicinal use for that mushroom. 4) Stakes We will add stakes to Toulmin’s three parts of an argument. The stakes of an argument answer the question, “So what?” The stakes are what make the essay important to write or read. These should be made explicit in your writing. It is good to let the reader know why your essay matters and any real-world applications there are for what you are arguing. Example: The stakes of the above sentence: Someone will die if the mushroom is eaten. 5) Counterarguments In arguing a claim, you should always consider potential counterclaims and counterarguments. A counterclaim denies the validity of your claim. It is rhetorically useful to address counterclaims in your writing because it strengthens your paper by showing that you’ve taken the ideas of others into consideration. Arguing against these ideas shows your rhetorical power and shows other ways to think about them. Example: The claim (from above): Dance music has become popular for reasons that have nothing to do with the quality of the music; rather, the clear, fast beats respond to the need of people on amphetamines to move, and to move quickly. Counterargument: You’re wrong. Dance music is popular because of hegemonic advertising forces. Using the counterargument in your paper: Although some say that dance music is popular because of the “need of people on amphetamines to move” (citation), the hegemonic force of advertising is a much more powerful motivation to buy records.