Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment Ancient Civilizations Unit: Context: Social Studies Ancient Greece, Roman Empire, and the Inca Sixth Grade Whole group/small group/individual Mini-lesson: Whole Group I started by asking my students what they thought the following vocabulary words meant: civilized, civilization, technology, culture, custom, and tradition. I asked students to write their definitions in their Social Studies Notebook. I then had students work in small groups to come to a consensus about what they thought the words meant. Following small group discussions, we then discussed as a class what we thought the definition for the vocabulary words was and came to a consensus as a class. I then had students to follow along as we read the first three pages of the article “Body Rituals Among the Nacirema”. I asked them to determine whether this culture was civilized based on our class’s definitions. Following the reading, we then discussed the characteristics of this culture and then the class determined that the civilization was not civilized. I then began to ask the students to compare certain descriptions of different types of people in that culture to those in ours. Once we began this discussion students began to realize that the article was about Americans. I asked students what areas they felt were the most important to the development of a civilization. Students (with some guidance) decided that these areas were architecture, agriculture, government, religion, and technology. From this point I introduced the essential questions of the unit: o What is a civilization? o What are the characteristics of civilizations that flourish? o What are the characteristics of civilizations that collapse? I explained to students that we would be researching Ancient Greece, the Roman Empire, and the Incan Empire looking for commonalities. Student Research I began class by reviewing concepts previously introduced including vocabulary and essential questions. Next I gave student their graphic organizers to research each civilization. I explained that over the course of the next few weeks, we would be using a variety of sources to research each civilization (Roman, Greek, Incan). I decide for the research on Ancient Greece, to divide students into five small groups to correspond with the five areas we identified as important to the Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment development of a civilization. (architecture, agriculture, government, religion, and technology) Each group would rotate through a center that dealt with each area. The description of the centers is as follows: o Architecture: Students logged into their student email accounts to access the homework drop box for this assignment. In this assignment, students accessed a link to a web site that explained the different types of architecture present in Ancient Greece. I asked them to pay attention to the types of columns and when they would be used. They then had to write a description of each column and on what type of building it would be used. Then it was submitted to me electronically (email). o Agriculture: In this center, students used books and websites to investigate the foods that were eaten, grown, and what animals were raised as well as how these things were accomplished. o Religion: Students completed a “Who’s who of Greek Mythology” worksheet to give them basic knowledge of Greek gods and goddesses. They also had access to books containing many of the Greek myths. Upon completion of this research, students were then required to create a new “look” and modern day profile for a god or goddess of there choosing, keeping in mind the god’s or goddess’s special ability. o Government: Students researched the 3 basic types of government that existed in Greece (oligarchy, democracy, and monarch/dictatorship). They had to then identify at least one city-state that had that government. o Technology: The assignment in this center was to research various technological advances made by the Ancient Greeks. Then they had to choose 2 that they believed were the most important to draw a picture of and write a paragraph explaining why they were the most important. For research on the Roman Empire, students were again divided into five groups again with each group assigned an area to research. Once they completed research on their area, the groups were then re organized so that one member from each of the previous groups was in the new group. Students then had to work with the other students to share information they had discovered. Following the completion of research on each civilization, students then explored the website http://www.learner.org/interactives/collapse/index.html. On this website, students were able to explore artifacts from the Mayan culture to look for clues about why the civilization collapsed. Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment Lesson Plan: Shared Writing I began by asking students “What is poetry?” to determine their ideas about what is poetry and what is not. I played parts of the songs “All Star” by Smashmouth and “Wonderful” by Everclear, and then asked the students if the song was poetry. Following the discussion of what poetry is I asked students what kinds of poetry they were familiar with. Ex: Haiku, Free verse, rhyming poems, concrete, etc. This discussion was followed with a reading of the book I Am the Mummy HebNefert by Eve Bunting. In addition, several poems from the book Ancient Voices by Kate Hovey were read as an introduction to “I” poems. With the reading of this book we discussed perspective and the different literary elements present in the poems. Have students help create an “I poem” about Zeus. As we are construction the poem, discuss word choice with students. After creating a class I poem, I then asked students to use the research they did on the three ancient civilizations to create their own I poem. Students, then, worked with two other students to edit and revise their poems, paying careful attention to word choice, the number of facts present, and grammar and spelling. I provided assistance and monitored groups as needed for word choice, structure, and information about students’ chosen topics. Students typed and printed their poems using our mobile lab as well as creating an illustration to go with their poems. These will be displayed in the hallway outside our classroom. Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment Invitation Ancient I am timeless I wonder where my people are I hear the echoes of what once was I want to return to a time long forgotten I am timeless. I pretend it is the Golden Age, Pax Romana I touch the lives of those who once worshiped here. I feel the ages descend upon my temples I worry I shall be forgotten never to be heard from again Am I timeless? I cry at all that has been lost to the ravages of time. I understand my stones are wearing away I speak to those who would remember. I invite you to learn of my world. I will be timeless, again. (On front) Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment Invitation (continued) On Back Please join me in an exploration of the Ancient World. 1. We will be using websites, videos, and books to research Ancient Greece, the Roman Empire, and the Incan Empire. 2. Write your notes in your note book and on your research chart. 3. Upon the completion of your research, you will choose one topic to write an “I” poem about. 4. Be sure to use poetic forms in your poem. Include at least seven facts about your topic. 5. Have fun! Rubric: Ancient Civilizations “I” Poem. 1. Includes seven facts about topic. 2. Information displayed in “I” Poem format. 3. Creates illustration that is relevant to topic. 4. Uses poetic forms. 5. Uses appropriate grammar, spelling, and mechanics. 0 No evidence of factual information. Poem not written in I poem format 1 Evidence of 4-7 facts. I poem format attempted 2 Evidence of 7 or more facts. Poem is written in I poem format No illustration included. Illustration is included, but it is not clearly relevant. Information shows 3 poetic forms. Illustration is included and relevant to topic. Information shows more than 3 poetic forms. 0-1 grammatical, spelling and/or mechanical errors. Information shows 1-2 poetic forms. 4 or more grammatical, spelling and/or mechanical errors. 2-3 grammatical, spelling and/or mechanical errors. Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment Pre-test: (Students wrote this in their journals and then we discussed as a class.) What do the following words mean to you? civilized civilization technology culture custom tradition You should be able to answer the following questions at the end of the unit. 1. What is a civilization? 2. What is a culture? 3. Why are some civilizations successful? 4. Why are some civilizations unsuccessful? 5. Are there similar patterns in the development of different civilizations? 6. How is each civilization unique? Post-test: Ancient Civilizations Unit Test Multiple Choice 1. A civilization is a. A group of people with a high level of technological and social development. b. A group of people living in the same area but not working together. c. A group of people going to war against each other. 2. A culture is a. how a group of people work together b. the customs and beliefs of a group of people c. the food someone eats. 3. The five areas of development in a civilization are a. technology, agriculture, architecture, husbandry, and houses b. life style, religion, farming, hunting and war c. agriculture, architecture, religion, technology, and government True/False _____ 4. Polytheism is the worship of many gods. _____ 5. One reason ancient civilizations were able to develop is because they learned how to farm. Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment _____ 6. The Inca, Greeks, and Romans all made homes from straw. Post-Test (continued) Short Answer 7. Identify three things in the Inca, Greek, and Roman civilizations that were similar. Explain how they were similar. 8. Identify two ways that the Romans, Greeks, and Inca were different. Explain your answer. 9. Identify two characteristics of a successful civilization. Explain why these two characteristics are important to its success. Student Graphic Organizer: Research Notes Name_________________ Ancient Topic__________________ Civilization:________________________________ Agriculture Architecture Government Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment Technology Religion Pictures of Process: Shared Writing (Picture A) Picture A: Template used to help student’s begin to write our shared writing on Zeus. Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment (Picture B) Picture B: Beginning of 1st period’s I poem on Zeus, King of the Greek Gods (Picture C) Picture C: Beginning of 2nd period’s I poem on Zeus, king of the Greek Gods. Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment Student Published Poems: Students’ Independent Work Sample A-notes taken in class. Sample B-Individual I poems with Illustrations Sample C Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment Bibliography: Books: Bunting, E. (1997). I am the Mummy Heb-Nefert. Harcourt Books: New York. Hovey, K. (2004). Ancient Voices. Margaret K. McElderry: New York, New York. Articles: Miner, H. (1956). “Body Rituals Among the Nacirema”. American Anthropologist. 58(3). Websites: http://www.learner.org/interactives/collapse/index.html. Retrieved March 26, 2010. Song: “All Star” by SmashMouth “Wonderful” by Everclear Poetry Analysis: Poetry Project: One the first day of the unit on Ancient Civilizations, I wrote several vocabulary words on the board and asked students to write them along with what they thought the words meant in their Social Studies notebooks. They had to define civilized, civilization, technology, culture, custom, and tradition. Upon the completion of the “pretest”, in small groups they discussed what they felt were the definitions and came to a consensus as to the meaning of the words. When the students were satisfied, one person from each group wrote their groups definitions on the board. Following this, the class discussed what they thought the meanings were for each of these vocabulary words in order to form a class meaning for each word. It was apparent that the students had a limited knowledge of what Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment these words could possibly mean. The class’s discussion developed as I expected it too. The one thing that surprised me about the discussion was the level of enthusiasm displayed in class. I would have thought that a discussion of vocabulary would not have been received well. This however was quite the contrary to what happened. The class was eager to share their opinions and seemed to enjoy debating the meaning of the terms. One thing that was challenging with this project was finding the time to implement everything in a timely fashion so as to not lose momentum. During this time of the school year, I teach remediation to several of my classes. This leaves me with only about two days a week to teach my content areas, science and social studies. In addition to that challenge, we do a lot of testing during this time of year as well. Two weeks of computer lab time was taken away due to this testing in grades three through six, making it almost impossible to conduct thorough research on ancient civilizations. Impact on Student Learning: In teaching this unit, it has become apparent that disruptions to the schedule do have an affect on student ability to comprehend what they have been researching. It also causes issues in maintaining their interest in the project and completing the project in timely fashion. Within my classroom, it is essential for student success that the unit not be divided as it has been each week. In addition to that, as I have taught the lessons along the way, I have discovered a few things that will be changed for next year. One thing that needs to be changed is the time of year in which I teach this particular unit. I can not foresee the schedule difficulties that have arisen this year, which has had an impact on student learning, changing next year. As for changes to the unit itself, having students discuss and determine their own categories to be researched for their assigned Tara Gilleland RE 5130 Poetry Assignment civilizations may provided students with an increased incentive and keep them actively engaged in the project. I also believe the unit would be much stronger if I could collaborate with the Language Arts teacher. Not only would the students be learning about topics in Social Studies, they could also see how what they are learning in one content area is related to what they are learning in a different area. It would also provide them with necessary relevance and connections that are required for deeper understanding of the curriculum. On a positive note, I found it very helpful that most of my students had already worked on “I” poems in their Language Arts class earlier in the year. This meant that most of my students needed less scaffolding to create their own poems. The mini lesson became more of a review of I poems and allowed me to focus more on the content. Students also enjoyed expressing what they learned in a creative way versus the traditional method of a multiple choice test (which we did take later). In light of this, I plan to incorporate poetry as a genre for students to choose when we do this unit next year as a multigenre project.