Holes John Willmott School Year: 8 Objectives Reading: 4. review their developing skills as active, critical readers who search for meaning using a range of reading strategies; Term: Week: 1 LESSON 1 5. trace the development of themes, values or ideas in texts; 10. analyse the overall structure of a text to identify how key ideas are developed, e.g. through the organisation of the content and the patters of language used Word/sentence activity (10 minutes) Introduction (10 minutes) Development (30 minutes) Plenary (10 minutes) Discuss devices authors might use in their opening paragraphs to hook the reader Shared reading of photocopied version of opening page of Holes. Identify devices Sachar uses to ‘hook’ the reader. Pupils to write on whiteboards/paper, devices that an author might use to ‘hook’ the reader. Drop that clause. What is Camp Green Lake really like? Discuss initial impressions and place key points on board. Read up to chapter 7. Teacher choice Possibly use commercially produced materials e.g. Badger Starter kits Narrative technique. Read chapter 7, the story of Stanley Yelnats. Pupils annotate the rest of the chapter in pairs. (Pupils then move on to write their own opening to a novel, focusing on ‘hooking’ the reader by using similar devices to Sachar. (Again, refer to pupil prompt sheet, if necessary). Pupils, individually or in pairs, to make notes on Camp Green Lake under headings such as food, dormitories, other inmates, those in authority, work, ‘rules’, etc. Focus on pupils using evidence/quotations to back up their points. Place helpful page references on board. Opportunity for guided reading. Pupils to analyse the similarities and differences between the stories. Focus on themes, etc. Pupils then to find a way of representing both plots diagrammatically. (See prompt sheet – weaving the story). LESSON 2 LESSON 3 Each pupil/pair to read out a quotation and comment on what it reveals about life at Camp Green Lake. Pupils labelled A and B. A tells the Elya story and then B tells Stanley’s story. Differences/similarities summarised on board. Homework Pupils to draft an opening paragraph about their school or place they live in the style of Holes. (See sheet). Holes John Willmott School Year: 8 Term: Week: 2 LESSON 1 LESSON 2 LESSON 3 Objectives Sentence: 1. combine clauses into complex sentences, using the comma effectively as a boundary signpost and checking for fluency and clarity, e.g. using non-finite clauses; : 2. explore the impact of a variety of sentence structures, e.g. recognising when it is effective to use short direct sentences; Reading: 10. analyse the overall structure of a text to identify how key ideas are developed, e.g. through the organisation of the content and the patterns of language used; Writing: 17. integrate evidence into writing to support analysis or conclusions, e.g. data quotation; Speaking and listening: 2. tell a story, recount an experience or develop an idea, choosing and changing the mood, tone and pace of delivery for particular effect Word/sentence activity Introduction Development Plenary (10 minutes) (10 minutes) (30 minutes) (10 minutes) Varying sentences for different Place pages 41-42 on an OHT transparency (in pack). Analyse devices Sachar uses to make the yellow spotted lizard sound believable? Also, how does he make it sound menacing? Recap the hardships Stanley endures at Camp Green Lake. Collate on board. Then move on to the ‘video diary’ activity. Teacher to model first or provide and example from a virtual reality television programme such as ‘I’m a Celebrity…..’ See ‘The Fiction Pack’i Complex sentences and commas Collate pupils ideas about the warden on board – role on the wall. Pupils to create a sinister creature of their own, employing similar techniques to those used by Sachar. Read up to, and including, chapter 12. Remind pupils that in chapter 9 Stanley writes to his mother to tell her about Camp Green Lake. In the letter he doesn’t tell her the truth because he doesn’t want to worry her – so he tells some white lies. Recap the lies he tells. Following teacher modelling, pupils should complete the letter. (See pupils prompt sheet). Explain you will be reading chapters 13 – 16 and adding ideas to the role on the wall. Shared reading at times to highlight key points and identify how Sachar uses language to create character. (See examples of extracts in pack). Pupils to write about how the Warden is presented in Holes. Emphasise the need to provide evidence to support points. Re-cap the devices Sachar used when describing the yellow spotted lizard. Apply criteria to own animals. Pupils read each other’s work . Identify devices used to make Camp green Lake sound better than it is. Devices used by Sachar to create character. Homework Complete letter Holes John Willmott School Year: 8 Objectives Term: Sentence: 1. combine clauses into complex sentences, using the comma effectively as a boundary signpost and checking for fluency and clarity, e.g. using non-finite clauses; Reading: 7. identify the ways implied and explicit meanings are conveyed in different texts, e.g. irony, satire; Writing: 6. experiment with figurative language in conveying a sense of character and setting: Speaking and listening: 15. explore and develop ideas, issues and relationships through work in role Week: 3 LESSON 1 LESSON 2 Word/sentence activity (10 minutes) Introduction (10 minutes) Adjectives to describe villains. Read up to, and including, chapter 20. Discuss how the author establishes character in chapter 20. Consider words/phrases that made the Warden appear powerful and/or sinister such as the use of powerful verbs to describe Mr Sir’s pain on page 91; sentence length and structure; the fact many of her acts appear harmless but then turn out to be vicious, etc. Shared reading. In pairs, pupils to write another chapter focusing on the sinister nature of the Warden. Formative assessment piece They could place her in a different context in order to reveal her sinister, sadistic nature. (See pupil examples in pack). Opportunity for teacher modelling and guided writing. Read chapters 21-24. On a photocopied version of page 111, pupils to identify 6 words or phrases and comment on what they add to the text. Teacher may underline relevant words/phrases beforehand. Pupils to records their ideas on a table like the one enclosed. Read to the end of the first book.. LESSON 3 Development (30 minutes) Analyse the Kate Barlow story. In groups pupils should tell the story from the point of view of one of the iii other characters. ‘The Fiction Pack’ Plenary (10 minutes) Homework Share chapters. Identify ways the Warden has been made to appear sinister and powerful. Analyse one of the descriptions of female villains in ‘The Fiction Pack’ii Volunteers to underline one word/phrase on OHT version of extract and comment on the effect it has on them as readers. Pupils to identify similarities between the Kate Barlow story and the story of Stanley. (See ‘Digging into the past’ for ideas). Write the newspaper report that would have been written about the Kate Barlow incident. Holes John Willmott School Year: 8 Term: Week: 4 LESSON 1 LESSON 2 LESSON 3 Objectives Sentence: 6. devise their own ways to improve their spelling, building on strategies from Year 7 including: b) applying spelling rules and recognising exceptions; f) drawing on word structures, families and derivations; Reading: 4 review reading strategies; 10. analyse the overall structure of a text to identify how key ideas are developed, e.g. through the organisation of the content and the patterns of language used; Writing: 8. develop an imaginative or unusual treatment of familiar material or established conventions, e.g. updating traditional tales; language used Word/sentence activity (10 minutes) Introduction (10 minutes) Development (30 minutes) Plenary (10 minutes) Homework Words related by root or spelling. Discuss with pupils – what are their expectations of part 2 of the novel? In pairs, pupils list devices Sachar uses to create tension in part 2 of the novel. Predict how they think the story will continue – use clues to support views. Teacher to decide Recap events so far in Holes. Begin ‘the story starts when…’ each pupil/pair to contribute where previous pupil/pair leave off. Place key words/phrases on board. Spelling rules: revise. Then ask pupils to write lists of examples starting with Stanley Yelnats. Explain that not all authors tell their stories chronologically; some choose to do something different in order to create atmosphere/interest, (e.g. Wuthering Heights). In pairs, arrange the story outline boxes in chronological order. Read chapters at the beginning of Chapter 29, Louis Sachar develops a mini-climax. Shared reading and text marking to identify ways Sachar does this. (See annotated version). Pupils should then complete enclosed spider diagram to show how Sachar creates tension in chapters 29-32. Discuss how Louis Sachar organised Holes and why he chose this method. Design a flow chart, to show the structure of the story. Pupils could then look at ways of restructuring a well known story such as Cinderella (see enclosed). Pupils to complete enclosed grid on the significance of the Big Thumb, etc. Role on wall activity for the Big Thumb, etc. What are pupils certain of? What are they inferring? What are the clues? Read chapters 32-36. Ask pupils to consider the significance of Big Thumb, the Mary Lou and the peach flavoured ‘sploosh’ as they read. Discuss. Discuss the importance of story structure. What other devices might an author use to create greater interest? Holes John Willmott School Objectives Sentence: b) applying spelling rules and recognising exceptions; readers who search for meaning using a range of reading strategies; Reading: 5. trace the development of themes, values or ideas in texts; Writing: 3. use writing for thinking and learning by recording ideas as they develop to aid reflection and problem solving; Speaking and listening: 10 use talk to question Year: 8 Term: Week: 5 LESSON 1 LESSON 2 LESSON 3 Word/sentence activity (10 minutes) Introduction (10 minutes) Development (30 minutes) Plenary (10 minutes) Spelling rules: revise then ask pupils to write lists of their own examples Spray diagram on board to collate ideas on what pupils have learned about the relationship between Zero and Stanley. Provide page references so pupils can refer back. Place the words ‘then’ and ‘now’ on the board. Pupils, in pairs, think up words to describe how the relationship between Zero and Stanley used to be and words to describe how their relationship is now. Role on the wall – Stanley’s character. In pairs pupils add a word, which shows what they know about Stanley (outside) and a word which shows what they think about Stanley (inside). Teacher choice Read chapters 40-42. In pairs, pupils think up questions to ask Stanley about his experience, especially those that may clarify an issue raised in the starter activity. Read chapters 36-9. Explain the focus will be looking at how the relationship between Zero and Stanley has developed. Teacher might enlarge a particular extract which lends itself to close scrutiny. Pupils to work in pairs to track the changing relationship between Stanley and Zero (See worksheet). Less able pupils will need page references and sentence starters to support their learning. Hot sear Stanley. If time allows, hot seat Zero also. Possible assessment piece Place the definition of the word ‘theme’ on board. In pairs, list what they think are the main themes in ‘Holes’. Discuss Pupils may come up with some of the following: friendship, magic, the past influencing the future, destiny, etc. Identify other places in the novel where these themes can be identified. Groups research one particular theme and report back. Alternatively, whole class, in pairs, study the theme of power in Holes English and Media Centre ‘The Fiction Pack’ 2002 English and Media Centre ‘The Fiction Pack’ 2002 iii English and Media Centre ‘The Fiction Pack’ 2002 i ii Homework Add/amend ideas to role on the wall. See worksheet entitled ‘empathising with the characters’. Summarise in one sentence what Sachar is saying about power in his novel? Identify common themes from Almond Eyes.