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Core Summer 2010 Synthesis Project FORM Rubric SEED INTRODUCTION No thesis No context No summary of points to be explored in body SPROUTING BODY CONCLUSION MECHANICS Unconnected to introduction Unsupported opinions used to develop argument No use of text references to support claims No conclusion to summarize major points Or conclusion introduces new information Many spelling errors that could have been detected by spellchecker Many grammatical errors Absence of clarity and concision Ideas connected to introduction/ but organization is unclear Claims based on texts but ideas not explored Or, claims made but do not support an overall argument Some use of text references to support claims APA FORMAT Incorrect citation format Incorrect reference format Past tense not used Active voice not used Thesis stated Little or no context And/or no summary of the argument to be explored in the body Or, thesis is unclear LEAFING FLOWERING Thesis clear Context addresses what and why Summary of argument is included (i.e., overview of points to be discussed in body Introduction engages the audience and signals the intent of the paper/ presentation Clear, relevant thesis stated Context is clearly developed Summary of argument is included Each paragraph Parallel or slide clearly construction connected to Appropriate use of introduction or to text references to preceding support claims paragraph(s) or Thorough slides development and Claims based on exploration of texts claims Claims build an argument Good use of text references Conclusion Reviews major reviews all major points in points interesting way No conclusion Offers conclusion related to thesis about thesis Conclusion includes some major points No conclusion offered related to thesis Spelling or grammatical errors but not both Lack of noun/pronoun agreement Lack of subject/verb agreement Or other consistent grammatical errors Inconsistent clarity and concision Some citations in correct form Some references in correct form Past tense used Active voice used Few spelling or grammatical errors or errors that spell check could miss Writing is clear and concise Correct spelling No grammatical errors Writing is elegant Most citations in correct form Most references in correct form Past tense used Active voice used Correct citations Correct reference list format Appropriate use of past and present tense Active voice M.Ed. Core Summer 2010 Synthesis Project CONTENT Rubric SEED SYNTHESIS: No or inaccurate THE IMPACTS discussion of the OF BRAIN relationships FUNCTION, Offers separate LANGUAGE, summaries of ideas AND CULTURE from the texts but no ON ACADEMIC generalizations, ACHIEVEMENT explanations, or conclusions. KNOWLEDGE Most statements ABOUT HOW indicate lack of THE BRAIN knowledge about brain LEARNS terminology and functions OR Important brain terminology and functions missing SPROUTING Attempts at synthesis indicated through combining ideas from the various domains. However, no conclusions or generalizations are offered. 1-2 domains synthesized but not all 3 Explanation how neurons work; no explanation of learning (Piaget and Vygotsky) Description of brain parts not connected to roles in learning No discussion of memory or learning cycle Overgeneralizations KNOWLEDGE ABOUT L1 & L2 ACQUISITION Inaccurate, missing or partial description of acquisition L1 or L2 described but not both Similarities and differences between L1 and L2 not developed The role language proficiency plays in academic achievement not addressed or under developed Stages listed, no elaboration or teaching implications Some similarities and differences between L1 and L2 development offered Vague or over-generalized description of the role language proficiency plays in academic achievement KNOWLEDGE ABOUT IMPACT OF CULTURE ON STUDENT LEARNING No or inaccurate explanation of what constitutes culture No or inaccurate explanation of pedagogy that is both culturally relevant and reflective of national and state teaching standards Adheres to color blind notion of student identity Accurate explanation of culture Initial summary of pedagogy that is both culturally relevant and reflective of national and state teaching standards LEAFING Conclusions or generalizations offered but not both All 3 domains addressed in relationship to academic achievement FLOWERING Ability to relate knowledge from several areas and draw conclusions Explanation of neurons & learning (Piaget and Vygotsky) General description of learning cycle Little about memory Explanation: role of emotion in learning Explanation: learning preferences & brain physiology Well synthesized explanation about brain structure, functions, relationship to learning (Piaget and Vygotsky) & implications for teaching Well synthesized description of acquisition and specific teaching implications Similarities and differences between L1 and L2 development accurately described Well developed description of the role language proficiency plays in academic achievement •Provides Elaborated discussion of description of the implications for complexities of curriculum reform cultural identities (close gap) Explanation of •Explanation w/ ex. specific teaching practices that are both of culturally culturally relevant and relevant pedagogy reflective of reflective of national national and state and state teaching teaching standards standards Clearly moves beyond the status quo to a position of advocacy Clear description of acquisition and general teaching implications Similarities and differences between L1 and L2 development accurately described Generally accurate description of the role language proficiency plays in academic achievement