OUSD History/Social Studies Harper Building 314 E. 10th St. Oakland, CA 94606 Directions for Counter-Argument 1) Explain the importance of counter argument. 2) Go over the model helping students to see what words signal a counter argument. 3) Have students write the first paragraph of the argument on language in India. 4) Before having students write the second paragraph with the counter argument, ask students to practice orally. For example, have one student give an argument in favor of English and then ask another student to respond using one of the sentence stems. Continue with this until you feel students are comfortable with how the stems might be used. 5) Have students write the second paragraph. 6) Read “The Spread of the English Language” and have students underline all the words that indicate a counter argument. This is a complex reading and may require some vocabulary work. 7) If you wish, you can ask students if they have changed their minds about the topic after hearing the counter arguments. OUSD History-Social Studies / Preparing for Spring 2010 Assessment / 10th grade World History / p. #1 Practicing Counter Arguments Writing a strong persuasive essay means that not only do you convey your own ideas clearly, but you also discuss the ideas on the other side of the argument. This can be difficult to do. Below is an exercise to help. MODEL Today in schools there is disagreement about whether students should be allowed to bring cell phones. Below are some of the major arguments. Arguments for cell phones It’s safer in the event of an emergency Cell phones are a new technology. We have to accept it and make it part of our lives. Parents want us to have cell phones so they can reach us at school. Arguments against cell phones When the phones ring in class it’s disruptive to the whole class. Cell phones allow people to cheat on tests. Students are so busy texting that they’re not paying attention to what is going on in class. If your thesis is “Cell phones should not be allowed in school” below is an argument that someone could make without using the counter argument. Cell phones should not be allowed in school. Students find it extremely disruptive when they are trying to learn something new and someone’s phone starts ringing. In addition, teachers are annoyed when they are giving a lecture and discover that instead of listening and taking notes, students are texting each other. Finally, the use of cells and texting means an increase in the amount of cheating. In addition to being immoral, cheating hurts all those students who really did study. For all these reasons, cell phones have no place in school. If your thesis is “Cell phones should not be allowed in school” below is a model of an argument that does acknowledge the argument on the other side – in other words the counter argument. Underline the sentences that have the counter argument. OUSD History-Social Studies / Preparing for Spring 2010 Assessment / 10th grade World History / p. #2 Cell phones should not be allowed in school. Even though some parents want their children to have phones, having them in the class is simply too disruptive. For example, it is hard to learn something new when someone’s phone starts ringing. It is true that cell phones are a new technology, but that technology does not belong in the classroom. Teachers are annoyed when they are giving a lecture and discover that instead of listening and taking notes, students are texting each other. Finally, the use of cells and texting means an increase in the amount of cheating. In addition to being immoral, cheating hurts all those students who really did study. For all these reasons, cell phones have no place in school. Why did you underline the sentences you did? Now that you have read the model you can practice the skill of counter argument in a paragraph about India. Practicing Counter Argument India is a nation of many languages. Currently English and Hindu are the only two official languages. The majority of Indians speak Hindu, but the use of English is controversial. Below are arguments for and against having English as an official language in India. Arguments for English English is spoken all over the world Scientists use English as a common way to communicate new ideas Over 90% of international organizations use English as one of their official languages India has over a hundred languages and needs one common language or no one can communicate. Almost all educated people in India speak English in addition to their native language. It costs too much money to have lots of different native languages – we would have to print books, sings, everything, in too many languages. Arguments Against English English is dominant because England and now America dominate the world. This is an evil legacy and to rid ourselves of our colonial past we must also rid ourselves of English. OUSD History-Social Studies / Preparing for Spring 2010 Assessment / 10th grade World History / p. #3 To make English the dominant language is to adopt Western ideas. We want our own ideas and language. Each language is rich and unique. If one language like English is dominant, the other languages will die off. Half the world’s languages died between 1800 – 2000. We don’t want that to happen to India. When you stop using a language the culture is lost as well. We want to preserve all the cultures in India. To make English the dominant language is to favor the rich people – because they have learned English already and the poor people haven’t. Write a short paragraph taking a stand about whether English should be an official language in India. Do not use the counter argument in this paragraph. Check the thesis you are going to write about. The thesis should either be: _____I believe English should be an official language in India or _____I do not believe English should be an official language in India. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ OUSD History-Social Studies / Preparing for Spring 2010 Assessment / 10th grade World History / p. #4 _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ Below are some sentence stems that writers use when they are making a counter argument: But Nevertheless However On the one hand On the other hand Even so, While It is true Despite In contrast Yet, Moreover To some extent Now, try re-writing your paragraph. This time, however, include the counter-argument. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ OUSD History-Social Studies / Preparing for Spring 2010 Assessment / 10th grade World History / p. #5