7th Grade English – Peer Revision Checklist Essay #______ Reviewer’s Name___________________Writer’s Name___________________ PSSA FOCUS CONTENT AREAS 1. FOCUS Is there a thesis sentence?_____ Is it in the intro?____ Does it list 3 sub-topics (essay map)____ Is it re-stated in the conclusion ____ 2. CONTENT Body paragraph 1 contains specific details_____ Body paragraph 2 contains specific details_____ Body paragraph 3 contains specific details_____ Does the author seem to know what he/she is talking about? 3. ORGANIZATION Does the essay have an introduction?_____ Are there 3 separate body paragraphs?_____ Does each body paragraph contain transitions?_____ Is there a conclusion?_____ Does the introduction and each body contain a clincher at the end?____ Does the essay begin and end with a hook? 4. STYLE Does each sentence begin in different ways?_____ Are certain words over-used____(mark them) Is the verb tense consistent throughout the essay? _____ 5. CONVENTIONS Does each sentence begin with a capital letter?_____ Does each sentence start and end with the proper punctuation?____ Are there any misspelled words?_____ Are there any fragments or run-on sentences?_____