Descriptive words for the characters in Hill’s I’m the King of the Castle TASK A: Choose a different colour to represent each of the five characters below. Match the words and the characters with corresponding colours. SELFISH ARROGANT MANIPULATIVE VICTIMISED INSENSITIVE SENSITIVE CUNNING NAÏVE RESPONSIBLE DISTANT IMPATIENT SUPERIOR POWERFUL DECEPTIVE MYSTERIOUS SCHEMING IMPERTINENT VILLAINOUS OBSTINATE FRUSTRATING CONSIDERATE MATURE APOLOGETIC GRAVE INDEPENDENT MALICIOUS HUNTER PREY VINDICTIVE SEGREGATED SELF CENTRED WEAK SPINELESS CALCULATING TAUNTING AUTHORITATIVE SHARP CARING IMPOSING PLAYFUL IGNORANT SHALLOW PROUD VULNERABLE DEFEATIST CONTROLLING INEFFECTUAL IMAGINATIVE EMOTIONALLY RESTRAINED LOW SELF ESTEEM INSISTANT MISERABLE UNRELENTING DISTRESSED STUBBORN POWERFUL DEMANDING WELL-BALANCED EVIL RETIRING SARDONIC PERSISTANT HYSTERICAL SCORNFUL EMPHATIC STERN ANIMATED BITTER VOLATILE FRIENDLY INEFFECTUAL PANICKED CONTEMPTUOUS TRIUMPHANT FORCEFUL MRS. Kingshaw MRS. BOLAND FIELDING HOOPER KINGSHAW MR. HOOPER TASK B: Now try and complete 10 sentences (two for each character) using words taken from the ideas above. Support all of your sentences with reasoning, evidence and original thought. Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk GCSE mock feedback and student evaluation What grade did you achieve in the mocks for English? ____ What grade did you hope to achieve? _____ What were identified as your strengths? List your targets for improvement - TOP TIPS FOR SUCCESS (all taken from mock feedback!): TASK 1: Based on the advice above, look at the three examples of work over the page. For each piece name one strength and one target for improvement. TASK 2: On the next page you’ll find an extract from an exam answer: rewrite the section, improving it as much as possible… Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk Year 11 Self evaluation (January 2007) NAME: 1. Potential________________________________ 2. If you are not performing to your potential, what is the ‘interference?’ 3. What do you can do well in English? 4. What would you like more help on? 5. What grade are you hoping to achieve for Lit and Lang.? 6. What are you specifically going to do to try and help yourself gain this? (BE HONEST!) 7. What do you hope to do in the future? (after GCSEs/dream job/university degree in what – be specific…) Year 11 Self evaluation (January 2007) NAME: 1. Potential________________________________ 2. If you are not performing to your potential, what is the ‘interference?’ 3. What do you can do well in English? 4. What would you like more help on? 5. What grade are you hoping to achieve for Lit and Lang.? 6. What are you specifically going to do to try and help yourself gain this? (BE HONEST!) 7. What do you hope to do in the future? (after GCSEs/dream job/university degree in what – be specific…) Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! Examine the presentation of family life and the portrayal of the English middle classes in the novel. Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! To what extent do you hold Kingshaw responsible for what happens to him? Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! In what ways could it be argued that I’m the King of the Castle is a novel about the need for communication and understanding between people. Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! How do the experiences, feelings and thoughts of Helena Kingshaw and Joseph Hooper contribute to the events in I’m the King of the Castle? Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! How effective is the language, structure and style of I’m the King of the Castle? Refer to specific sections in the novel Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! Look closely at the events that take place in Hang Wood. What does this section reveal about the characters of Kingshaw and Hooper? Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! Examine the significance of the world of nature, both living and dead in this novel. Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! What is the importance of Fielding in this novel? Examine his character, his relationships with Hooper and Kingshaw and what he represents. Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! Many readers have deemed the end of the book ‘unacceptable’. Justify Susan Hill’s ending with close reference to Kingshaw’s character and state of mind. Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! Is there any explanation for Hooper’s treatment of Kingshaw? How is it possible that his conduct is not stopped by the adults? Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! Examine the relevance and impact of Warings. Consider the house itself, the surroundings and what the house means/represents to each character. Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! Susan Hill makes use of symbolism in the novel. Choose three examples and examine their importance in detail. Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! What values and emotions does Susan Hill focus on in I’m the King of the Castle? Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! To what extent is it possible to interpret the novel as ‘adult failure’ as opposed to ‘childhood cruelty’? Give reasons for your answer. Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk I’m the King of the Castle exam questions WALT: Plan effectively by writing down as many initial thoughts on the question as you can WILF: Share ideas and try to overcome ‘exam question panic’! Look closely at the trip to Leydell Castle where Kingshaw utters the words ‘I’m the King of the Castle’. What events lead up to and follow this that help to shape our understanding of the novel? Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk TRACKING THEMES – I’m the king of the castle THEME QUOTES (inc. page numbers), ANALYSIS, NOTES Loneliness Lack of communication Family relationships Power Spite/malice/bullying Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk THEME QUOTES (inc. page numbers), ANALYSIS, NOTES Copyright © 2007 www.englishteaching.co.uk + www.english-teaching.co.uk