Peer Response: Text ANALYSIS RUBRIC Draft 2; to be revised This rubric is used for grading the paper you read, but to remind you of all the elements you need to examine in your partner’s as well as your own writing. Please boldface the comments appropriate to the paper you read and then give your own explanation. You can also ignore the comments and just write your own. CATEGORY Main Argument Paper by: The idea(s), scope and suggested structure are all clear. Also, the argument is interesting, original and well-supported. Peer Response by: One of the following elements is missing: main idea, clear structure and/or reasonable scope, Two of the following No main argument. elements are missing: main idea, clear structure and/or reasonable scope, and strong support. and strong support. Analysis identifies most elements of the plot to support its main argument, which is convincing but in need of elaboration. Some important elements of the text are not identified. Presents an argument is not yet convincing. Several textual elements are missing. Understanding of the text is not adequate The paper discusses one context but there is a gap between the No sense of context. Analysis (& Support of Details) Analysis identifies all elements of the text to support its main argument, which is insightful and original. My responses Ways to develop and support the ideas? Analysis (Contextualiza tion)--later Analysis is placed well in a literary, critical or historical context (i.e. of the author, a One of the following contexts is discussed: literary context of the critical trend or issue, or a period). author, critical context and historical context. More explanation may be better. analysis and this context. The introduction is inviting, states the main topic and thesis which suggests the structure of the paper. The introduction clearly states the main topic and previews the structure of the paper, but is not particularly inviting to the reader. The introduction states the main topic, but does not adequately preview the structure of the paper nor is it particularly inviting to the reader. There is no clear introduction of the main topic or structure of the paper. A variety of thoughtful transitions are used. They clearly show how ideas are connected. Transitions clearly show how ideas are connected, but there is little variety. Some transitions work well; but connections between other ideas are fuzzy. The transitions between ideas are unclear or nonexistant. The conclusion is strong and leaves the reader with a feeling that they understand what the writer is "getting at." The conclusion is recognizable and ties up almost all the loose ends. The conclusion is recognizable, but does not tie up several loose ends. There is no clear conclusion, the paper just ends. The language is lucid and The language is lucid. expressive. Writer makes 1-2 Writer makes 4-6 errors in grammar, spelling, errors in grammar or The language is hard to understand at some parts. Writer makes The language is hard to follow. Writer makes more than 10 errors in grammar or My responses Organization -Introduction My responses OrganizationTransitions My responses Organization -Conclusion My responses Language and Mechanics (MLA Conventions) capitalization or punctuation that distract the reader from the content. My responses My general responses spelling, capitalization or punctuation, but the paper is still easy to read. 10 errors in grammar, spelling, capitalization or punctuation that catch the reader's attention and interrupt the flow. spelling, capitalization or punctuation that distract the reader from the content.