Score Grammar Pre-Test Grade 6 Name____________________________________ Exceeds standard, 26-28 _____ Meets standard, 22-25 _____ Approaches standard, 18-21 _____ Below standard, 17 or fewer _____ Correct the following paragraph for all errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Remove or change any “dead” words (words that are vague or overused). Their are about a billion bicycles in the world. Can you guess which country has the most. Its china but the people use bikes primarily for transportation not recreation. Some common bikes are mountain bikes BMX bikes racing bikes and tandem bikes. People can ride mountain bikes on trails but the bikes fat tires help them roll over sticks and rocks to. BMX which stands for bicycle motorcross is an other name for dirt bike. BMX racing is popular here. There is a track near McAlder elementary school in Puyallup Washington. The first bicycles were made of wood and riders pushed with their feet pedels were added later. The first bicycles had one really big wheel in the front yet only a really small wheel was attached in the back. By the end of 1890 bicycles had began to look almost the same as they do today. 6th Grade Grammar Pretest Answer Guide Points Correction Rule 1 1 their question mark 1 It’s 1 1 1 1 3 1 1 China China, but transportation, not common mountain bikes, BMX bikes, racing bikes, and trails, but bike’s 1 1 2 1 2 1 1 2 change them to bikes or similar too BMS, which…motorcross, is another Elementary School Puyallup, Washington wood, and feet; pedals or feet. Pedals 2 1 1 omit really from big and small front, yet end of 1890, 1 28 Total began or had begun incorrect use of homonym question, not a declarative sentence apostrophe for contraction, it is proper name/noun compound sentence to set off interruption incorrect spelling comma to separate items in a series compound sentence apostrophe for possessive case unclear pronoun referent incorrect use of homonym commas to set off appositive incorrect spelling—one word proper name comma between city, state compound sentence run-on sentence and incorrect spelling of pedals dead words compound sentence introductory prepositional phrase incorrect verb tense