Rubric Final Photo Essay: Related to Theme of First Generation Item TOT PTS Excellent Fair Poor Incorporates a theme related to being a first or a unique experience Helps us look at the story/ expression in a creative way Has an intro, middle and end Connection to theme, but connection is not strong Some creativity involved No connection to theme Story is pretty much complete incomplete Uses a picture the student has created and the connection is clear Uses a picture, but the connections is not clear Clear and thoughtful, some creative wording Not very clear and language does not support insight Flows/Transitions 5 and connections Uses a picture the student has manipulated themselves, and that connects to theme in a meaningful way Uses enough complex language and phrasing to make the essay content clear Uses appropriate transitions and essay flows well Transitions are done well and essay flows okay Lack of transitions and disjointed writing Grammatically Accurate Grammatically correct –minimal errors Some errors but still not many Too many errors that drag down the writing Incorporates all the needed citations and references Some error, but most important references are there Spotty references and citations Okay Presentation, a little rocky Difficult presentation, need to practice more 120-105 B or C Theme related to First Generation 15 Creative 10 Tells a story 15 Employs a personal picture Clear in expression References and Citations 15 5 5 5 Presentation 75 Smooth presentation TOTAL 150 150-121 A Not very creative 104-00 D or E