Learn. Lead. Serve. Succeed!
Draft 1 Revision - Scientific Accuracy
Name:
Name of Reviewer:
Are there at least SIX facts? Y N
Does the writing in each section give information about the correct topic? Y N
Does each paragraph have at least eight sentences?
List three pieces of important information?
Y N
Are there details and examples for each idea? Y N
Did the writer include scientific terms/vocabulary? Y N
If there are any NO’s circled, then go back over your piece and add information to revise.
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Draft 2 Revision
Interesting and Understandable
Name:
Name of Reviewer:
Is the information in the piece presented in a clear order? Y N
Read the piece once and then turn it over. What is something that you remember that you found interesting?
What is something you like about the piece?
Look at the piece and write any words that you don’t understand:
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What is a question that you had after reading it that you would like to know more about?
Put a question mark next to any part that doesn’t make sense.
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Draft 3 Revision
Grammar and Punctuation
Name:
Name of Reviewer:
Do all the sentences begin with a capital letter and varied end punctuation? Underline any mistakes.
Circle any misspelled words.
Do your sentences start in different ways? Y N
Do any of your sentences start with and or that ? Y N
Do the verbs and nouns match (ex: he do his homework/ he does his homework) Y N
Put a question mark next to any section that is confusing.
Are there any final suggestions you would make before submitting it?
Once the piece is error free you are ready for your final draft!
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