Central Bucks School District – Narrative Writing Rubric based on PA Core Standards Students will write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events. Focus (10) Writing clearly to convey a well-defined controlling point Organization (10) Purposeful sequence Content (20) Ideas developed through facts, definitions, concrete examples, explanations, etc. Voice and Style (5) Choice, use, and arrangement of words and sentence structure create tone and voice Conventions (5) Engages and orients the reader by stating a distinct problem, situation, or observation and its significance, establishing one or multiple points of view, & introducing a narrator and/or characters. (10-9) Establishes a clear problem, situation, or observation and provides one or multiple points of view while introducing a narrator and/or characters. (8) Establishes a simple context and point of view and introduces a narrator and/or character(s). (7-6) Does not establish an identifiable context or point of view Does not introduce an identifiable narrator and/or character(s). (5-0) /10 Creates a smooth progression of experiences or events using a variety of techniques to engage the reader and sequence events so they build on one another to create a coherent whole and build toward a particular tone and outcome Provides a clear endpoint that follows from and reflects on what is experienced, observed, or resolved over the course of the narrative (10-9) Blends narrative techniques of dialogue, description, and pacing, to enhance experiences, events, and/or characters Uses precise and artful words and phrases, relevant descriptive details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, settings, and/or characters. (20-18) Creates a progression of experiences or events using techniques to sequence events so that they build on one another to create a coherent whole Provides an endpoint that follows from and reflects on what is established over the course of the narrative (8) Organizes a sequence of events Endpoint is not distinct (7-6) No logical structure (5-0) /10 Uses narrative techniques such as dialogue, description, and/or pacing, to develop experiences, events, and/or characters Uses words and phrases, relevant descriptive details, and sensory language to capture the action and convey experiences and events. (17-15) Uses figurative language to improve the narrative in appropriate places. Understandable writing Varies sentence structure Awareness of audience Thoughtful, appropriate word choice Establishes an appropriate tone (4) Little use of narrative techniques Little or irrelevant detail (14-11) No attempt at using narrative techniques Experiences, events, and characters are non-existent (10-0) Writing is somewhat difficult to understand Repetitive/incorrect sentence structure Limited understanding of audience Limited word choice Tone is random (3) Writing is difficult to understand Flawed sentence structure Lack of audience awareness Slang/Inappropriate word choice (2-0) /5 Adequate control of grammar, mechanics, spelling, usage, and sentence formation Errors in conventions do not significantly impact meaning (4) Limited control of grammar, mechanics, spelling, usage, and sentence formation Errors in conventions impact meaning (3) Little to no control of grammar, mechanics, spelling, usage, and sentence formation Errors severely impact meaning (2-0) /5 Uses precise language and figurative language to enhance the tone and depth of the narrative Clear and understandable writing Sophisticated and varied word choice and sentence structure Strong awareness of audience Establishes and maintains an appropriate and engaging tone. (5) Evident control of grammar, mechanics, spelling, usage, and sentence formation Paper is virtually error-free (5) /20 Central Bucks School District – Narrative Writing Rubric based on PA Core Standards Students will write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events.