Unit 2 Narrative Writing Workshop: Big Ideas Writers will develop their stamina by going deeper personal narrative- students will write longer, more significant and ‘graceful’ pieces. * Write leads that include setting and introduce characters * Organize series of events across time * Develop characters by including their feelings and actions * Develop a plot that makes sense and ends with a solution to the problem * Use descriptive and literary language Unit Standards 3.10.6.6Acquire and use accurately grade-appropriate conversational, general academic, and domain- specific words and phrases, including those that signal spatial and temporal relationships (e.g., After dinner that night we went looking for them). (Throughout whole year) 3.6.3.3 Write narratives and other creative texts to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences. a. Establish a situation and introduce a narrator and/or characters; organize an event sequence that unfolds naturally. b. Use dialogue and descriptions of actions, thoughts, and feelings to develop experiences and events or show the response of characters to situations. c. Use temporal words and phrases to signal event order. d. Provide a sense of closure. 3.10.4.4Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and multiple-meaning word and phrases based on grade 3 reading and content, choosing flexibly from a range of strategies. a. Use sentence-level context as a clue to the meaning of a word or phrase. b. Determine the meaning of the new word formed when a known affix is added to a known word (e.g., agreeable/disagreeable, comfortable/uncomfortable, care/careless, heat/preheat). c. Use a known root word as a clue to the meaning of an unknown word with the same root (e.g., company, companion). d. Use glossaries or beginning dictionaries, both print and digital, to determine or clarify the precise meaning of key words and phrases. 3.6.5.5 With guidance and support from peers and adults, use a writing process to develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, drafting, revising, and editing. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1–3 up to and including grade 3 on page 41-42.) 3.10.2.2 Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing. a. Capitalize appropriate words in titles. b. Use commas in addresses. c. Use commas and quotation marks in dialogue. d. Form and use possessives. e. Use conventional spelling for high-frequency and other studied words and for adding suffixes to base words (e.g., sitting, smiled, cries, happiness). f. Use spelling patterns and generalizations (e.g., word families, position-based spellings, syllable patterns, ending rules, meaningful word parts) in writing words. g. Consult reference materials, including beginning dictionaries, as needed to check and correct spellings. (throughout year) 3.10.1.1Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking. a. Explain the function of nouns, pronouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs in general and their functions in particular sentences. b. Form and use regular and irregular plural nouns. c. Use abstract nouns (e.g., childhood). d. Form and use regular and irregular verbs. e. Form and use the simple (e.g., I walked; I walk; I will walk) verb tenses. f. Ensure subject-verb and pronoun-antecedent agreement.* g. Form and use comparative and superlative adjectives and adverbs, and choose between them depending on what is to be modified. h. Use coordinating and subordinating conjunctions. i . Produce simple, compound , and complex sentences. Grammar Capitalize appropriate words in titles. Use regular and irregular plural nouns. Ensure subject-verb and pronoun-antecedent agreement. Writing Resources Lucy Calkins’ Writers Workshop Units of Study Book 2 Wondrous Words by Katie Wood Ray How’s it Going by Carl Anderson The Revision Toolbox, by Georgia Heard Hidden Gems, by Katherine Bomer Mentor Texts: Molly’s Pilgrim by Cohen Come on, Rain by Karen Hesse We Had a Picnic Last Sunday Past by Jacqueline Woodson Assessment 6 Trait Rubric on published work Narrative Writing Continuum Writing conference notes Self-Reflections as a Writer of Personal Narrative Notes Writing Unit __2__: _____Exploring Narrative Writing___________________ Unit Bends in the road POSSIBLE Teaching Point Using a Writers Notebook and Generating narrative Ideas Reading with a Writer’s Eye: Exploring Mentor Texts Crafting and Revising Good Narrative writing Writers get ideas for writing by looking BACK into their writer’s notebook. Writers plant seeds by brainstorming with a partner. Writers look for seed ideas that are meaningful and that they remember with crystal clarity o Thinking about “… the first time…” o Thinking about “… the last time…” o Thinking about a turning point in their lives Writers reread their seed ideas, thinking of the importance of them Writers orally tell their stories to friends before writing them Writers create timelines of events and emotions for their stories Writers use a story mountain to plan their writing Writers read the work of authors they admire, asking, “What did this author do that I could also do to make my own writing more powerful?” Writers name and define the qualities of good narrative writing by looking at mentor texts Writers plan, draft and revise their writing by referring to a mentor texts Writers tell the story as they see it unfolding, looking through the narrator’s eyes Writers can always make improvements –this is called revising Writers write their narrative using first person Writers organize their story by planning along the story mountain (story arc) Writers reenact the story to include the details Writers revise their writing by sharing with a partner and getting feedback Writers tell the story bit-by-bit rather than summarizing Writers show not tell by adding dialogue to the story Writers zoom in by finding the heart of the story Editing and Publishing Our Stories Writers improve their writing by trying several leads (mentor texts). (Setting, dialogue, actions, character description) Writers improve their writing by including strong feelings and thoughts Writers improve their writing by trying several endings (mentor texts). (Final action, feeling or dialogue) Writers edit by doing the following: Using pronouns correctly Checking that verb tense is consistent throughout Checking their writing for complete sentences Checking their work for correct punctuation and capitalization Grammar Publishing and Celebrating our stories Capitalize appropriate words in titles. Use regular and irregular plural nouns. Ensure subject-verb and pronoun-antecedent agreement Authors celebrate by reflecting on themselves as writers of a particular genre (writing folders) Authors celebrate by respectfully appreciating the work of others Unit 2: Personal Narrative Grading Rubric Report Card Standard Grade 1 1 point Develop characters by including their feelings and actions The writer put the picture from his mind onto the page. He had details in pictures and words. (Overall) The writer wrote about when he/she did something. Develop a plot that makes sense with a logical solution (story mountain) (Lead) The writer tried to make a beginning for his story. (Ending) The writer found a way to end his story. Use descriptive words The writer used labels and words to give details. MidLeve l 1.5 pt Grade 2 2 pt MidLevel The writer tried to bring her characters to life with details, talk and actions. MidLevel The writer wrote about one time when he/she did something. MidLevel The writer thought about how to write a good beginning and chose a way to start his/her story. She chose the action, talk or setting that would make a good beginning. MidLevel MidLev el The writer chose the action, talk, or feeling that would make a good ending. The writer chose strong words that would help readers picture his story. MidLeve l 2.5 pt Grade 3 3 pt MidLevel 3.5 pt Grade 4 4 pt MidLevel The writer added more to the heart of her story, including not only actions and dialogue but also thoughts and feelings. MidLevel The writer wrote the important part of an event bit by bit and took out unimportant parts. MidLevel The writer wrote a beginning in which he/she showed what was happening and where, getting readers into the world of the story. MidLevel The writer worked to show what happen to (and in) his characters. MidLevel The writer told the story bit by bit. MidLevel The writer wrote a beginning in which he helped readers know who the characters were and what the setting was in his/her story. MidLevel The writer chose the action, talk, or feeling that would make a good ending and worked to write it well. MidLevel MidLev el The writer not only told her story, but also wrote it in ways that got readers to picture what was happening and that brought the story to life. MidLevel The writer wrote an ending that connected to the beginning or the middle of the story. The writer used action, dialogue, or feeling to bring the story to a close. The writer showed why characters did what they did by including their thinking. The writer made some parts go by quickly or slowly. The writer included sensory details or figurative language. Used a storytelling tone through description, phrases, dialogue and thoughts. Score