Creative writing Feedback for Gothic Fiction
Name: ________________ Date: ______________ Teacher’s initials: _______ Level: _______
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o You used a variety of sentence lengths – some
long ones that add detail and some shorter
ones to build suspense
NCT to hit your target
o You need to use a variety of sentence lengths
– some long ones that add detail and some
shorter ones to build suspense
o
You punctuated successfully
o
You need to punctuate carefully
o
You used varied punctuation – like semi colons,
exclamation marks and question marks
o
You need to use varied punctuation – like semi
colons, exclamation marks and question marks
o
You used Gothic features to make your story
interesting (like mystery, suspense and
strange events)
o
You needed to use Gothic features to make
your story interesting
o
You need to paragraph
o
You paragraphed successfully
You didn’t always keep the reader engaged and
o You kept the reader engaged and interested
interested
Additional information: _____________________________________________________
o
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Creative writing Feedback for Gothic Fiction
Name: ________________ Date: ______________ Teacher’s initials: _______ Level: _______
WWW
o You used a variety of sentence lengths – some
long ones that add detail and some shorter
ones to build suspense
NCT to hit your target
o You need to use a variety of sentence lengths
– some long ones that add detail and some
shorter ones to build suspense
o
You punctuated successfully
o
You need to punctuate carefully
o
You used varied punctuation – like semi colons,
exclamation marks and question marks
o
You need to use varied punctuation – like semi
colons, exclamation marks and question marks
o
You used Gothic features to make your story
interesting (like mystery, suspense and
strange events)
o
You needed to use Gothic features to make
your story interesting
o
You need to paragraph
o
You paragraphed successfully
o You didn’t always keep the reader engaged and
o You kept the reader engaged and interested
interested
Additional information: _____________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________
Creative writing Feedback for Gothic Fiction
Name: ________________ Date: ______________ Teacher’s initials: _______ Level: _______
WWW
o You used a variety of sentence lengths – some
long ones that add detail and some shorter
ones to build suspense
NCT to hit your target
o You need to use a variety of sentence lengths
– some long ones that add detail and some
shorter ones to build suspense
o
You punctuated successfully
o
You need to punctuate carefully
o
You used varied punctuation – like semi colons,
exclamation marks and question marks
o
You need to use varied punctuation – like semi
colons, exclamation marks and question marks
o
You used Gothic features to make your story
interesting (like mystery, suspense and
strange events)
o
You needed to use Gothic features to make
your story interesting
o
You need to paragraph
o
You paragraphed successfully
You didn’t always keep the reader engaged and
o You kept the reader engaged and interested
interested
Additional information: _____________________________________________________
o
_______________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________
Creative writing Feedback for Gothic Fiction
Name: ________________ Date: ______________ Teacher’s initials: _______ Level: _______
WWW
o You used a variety of sentence lengths – some
long ones that add detail and some shorter
ones to build suspense
NCT to hit your target
o You need to use a variety of sentence lengths
– some long ones that add detail and some
shorter ones to build suspense
o
You punctuated successfully
o
You need to punctuate carefully
o
You used varied punctuation – like semi colons,
exclamation marks and question marks
o
You need to use varied punctuation – like semi
colons, exclamation marks and question marks
o
You used Gothic features to make your story
interesting (like mystery, suspense and
strange events)
o
You needed to use Gothic features to make
your story interesting
o
You need to paragraph
o
You paragraphed successfully
o You didn’t always keep the reader engaged and
o You kept the reader engaged and interested
interested
Additional information: _____________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________