Hints & Clues for Working with the First Folio by Mr. Long (thanks to Neil Freeman) MAJOR PUNCTUATION: As a general rule, motivating a short pause at major punctuation is appropriate. Lots of major punctuation close together usually means a brain-storm or breakdown is about to happen. . A period is the end of a complete thought. Beat change. Switch tactics. ! Exclamation marks are extremely rare. If you get one, feel cool. ? Question marks don’t only appear at the end of questions. They sometimes mark the end of a thought like a period…but not always. Sometimes it just means the character is not sure about what they just said (but it doesn’t mean you should say the sentence as a question necessarily). : In general, colons mark a logical connection between thoughts ; In general, semi-colons mark an emotional connection. Because of the power inherent in the point discovered, the character is left with some emotional difficulty. MINOR PUNCTUATION: As a general rule, minor punctuation keys you into a new thought, but does not require a pause. , If your character is using more commas than normal in a certain section, it could be deduced that they are drawing attention to small details, or needing every little breath…or perhaps something else. If there is a lack of commas, that may signify a lack of control…or perhaps something else… - Dashes on either side of a thought are usually a tangent. ( ) pretty self-explanatory usually RHYTHM: If your piece is in iambic pentameter (10 syllables per line), then you must always pay attention to when your lines fall out of that basic rhythm. It usually means something emotional is going on with your character. If you have 12 or more syllables in a line, it’s a hint that the character’s inner volcano is bubbling over. So much feeling, so little time to express it. If you have 9 or fewer syllables, for some reason Shakespeare has written in a pause. Is the character hesitant? Confused? Unsure? Waiting for a response? Lines with 11 syllables are not necessarily a huge hint…although, multiple ones in a row will draw focus to the next regular 10 syllable line and make it more meaningful. Look for patterns. OTHER HINTS: Monosyllabic lines (ie. lines in which all words are only one syllable). Give these the space they need. Draw focus to every word. Only the naked truth is being spoken. Spelling issues. Words that are spelled longer than they should in the first folio (ie. shee instead of she or sonne instead of son) indicate that there is some sort of emotional connection to that word for the character. Capital words in the first folio indicate that the character chose the word deliberately. Their brain is working hard. Usually, they are being quite intellectual. The ratio of capitalized words (intellect) to unusual long-spellings (emotion) can help you figure out how rational and thought-out your character is being (or not being).