English 1 PORTFOLIO RUBRIC HOW WELL DO YOU REFLECT? Exemplary Proficient Developing Emerging Insufficient Evidence MAIN IDEAS, UNDERSTANDING, INSIGHT Does your reflection show your growth as a learner in English this semester? How appropriate and effective are your ideas / information / opinions? Main points are fully relevant for ALL PORTFOLIO PIECES, substantial, comprehensive, accurate and convincing Precise awareness of purpose and audience Very imaginative/perceptive/mature/ some subtlety Analyzes, in thorough detail, all of the key actions/elements that contributed to, or hindered, the success of learning. Plans highly concrete, creative steps for improvement. Main points are relevant , ALL PORTFOLIO PIECES comprehensive, mostly accurate, and convincing Firm awareness of purpose and audience Imaginative/perceptive/thoughtful Analyzes, in detail, most of the key actions/elements that contributed to, or hindered, the success of learning. Plans highly concrete steps for improvement. The student’s writing is well organized The portfolio is put together in a persuasive, clear and logical way. .All paragraphs have a topic sentence, explanation and a concluding sentence. The student’s writing is generally organized The portfolio is clear and logical. Most paragraphs have a topic sentence, explanation and a concluding sentence. Main points are developed but also basic and predictable in SOME PORTFOLIO PIECES, narrow in range, incomplete, and/or superficial Some awareness of purpose and audience Some imagination/ perception/ thought Identifies some of the key actions/elements that contributed to, or hindered, the success of learning. Offers steps for improvement, though these show lack of concrete planning. The student’s portfolio is somewhat disorganized The portfolio has some logic Few paragraphs have a topic sentence, explanation and a concluding sentence Main points are thinly developed in FEW PORTFOLIO PIECES and/or inappropriate and/or stereotyped ideas and/or obvious gaps Confused or little awareness of purpose and audience Little imagination Minimally identifies actions/elements that contributed to, or hindered, the success of learning. Identifies the minimum requirements for improvement ORGANISATION How well do you structure your reflection, keep focused on the topic, and develop a clear line of thought? Main points show some development in MOST PORTFOLIO PIECES and are fairly comprehensive but may be narrow in range, incomplete, and/or superficial Adequate awareness of purpose and audience Quite imaginative/ perceptive /thoughtful Analyzes, in detail, some of key actions/elements that contributed to, or hindered, the success of learning. Plans satisfactory, concrete steps for improvement. The student’s writing is organized in places The portfolio is generally clear and logical Some paragraph have a topic sentence, explanation and a concluding sentence USE OF LANGUAGE / VOICE How well have you chosen vocabulary, register, and tone, and written with a distinctive and appropriate “voice“? Completely appropriate, precise and concise The reflection uses clear and precise vocabulary to describe themselves as a learner Completely appropriate register Strong sense of individual voice / distinctive tone, and personal / honest engagement No lapses in sentence structure. Sentences are all correctly structured – no run-ons or fragments (unless for effect) Sentence structures, lengths and openings are skillfully varied to support meaning/ mood/ purpose No (or very few) mechanical errors for all parts of the reflection Layout/ word-processing or support the content All components of the reflection and portfolio are completed Appropriate and effective use of word and expression, with some signs of skilful choice The reflection mostly uses clear and precise vocabulary to describe themselves as a learner Appropriate register Adequate sense of individual voice and distinctive tone No significant lapses in sentence structure. Most sentences are correctly structured – no run-ons or fragments (unless for effect) Sentence structures, lengths and openings are varied to support meaning/ mood/ purpose Few mechanical errors for all parts of the reflection Layout/word-processing mostly supports the contents All components of the reflection and portfolio are completed Mostly appropriate use of word and expression The reflection uses some clear and precise vocabulary to describe themselves as a learner Some lapses in appropriate register Some sense of individual voice and distinctive tone Some lapses in sentence structure. Most sentences are correctly structured – no run-ons or fragments (unless for effect) Appropriate variety of sentence structures, lengths and openings Adequate use of word and expression but may be rather obvious/imprecise The reflection uses some clear and precise vocabulary to describe themselves as a learner Significant lapses in register Weak sense of individual voice and uncertain tone Significant lapses in sentence structure including some fragments and/or run-ons Some variety of sentence structures, lengths and openings Some mechanical errors for all parts of the reflection Layout/word-processing support the content Most components of the reflection and portfolio are completed Occasional mechanical errors for all parts of the reflection which do not hinder the reader unduly Layout/ word-processing sometimes support the content Some components of the reflection and portfolio are completed SENTENCE STRUCTURE Are all of your sentences complete and correct? How well do you use an appropriate variety of sentence structures? MECHANICS & APPEARANCE How accurate and helpful are your spelling, punctuation, capitalization and grammar? How effective is the layout? TOTAL 30 - 28 27 26-25 24-23 22-21 20-19 18-17 16-15 14-13 12-11 10-9 8-0 ISM LEVEL A A- B+ B B- C+ C C- D+ D D- F The student’s essay lacks a logical order The portfolio response does not show student’s understanding. of the learning process Paragraphs do not have a topic sentence, explanation and a concluding sentence Inappropriate use of words and expression. Often vague or dull Inappropriate register The reflection uses some clear and precise vocabulary to describe themselves as a learner Many significant lapses in sentence structure including several or many fragments and/or run-ons Little sentence structure Frequent mechanical errors for all parts of the reflection which significantly hinder the reader Layout/ word-processing handwriting is distracting Few components of the reflection and portfolio are completed