Style/Literary terms/Rhetorical devices to look for in texts and to implement in your own writing. 1. Diction – word choice o o o o Denotation – dictionary or precise meaning Connotation – emotional sense of a word; cultural meaning associated with a word; implied meaning Avoid “passive” helping (auxiliary) verbs: to be, has, etc. Style –“voice of the writer” o o o o o o o o o o Acerbic Ambivalent apathetic Authoritative – commanding, knowing callous condescending contemplative critical derisive Didactic – preachy, insistent o o o o o o o o o o o Despairing Disdainful Earnest Gloomy Haughty Judgmental Mocking Morose malicious Objective – without judgment optimistic o o o o o o o o o o o Ornate – pretentious, ostentatious, flowery Patronizing pessimistic Plain Ridiculing Sarcastic Sardonic Scholarly Scientific Sincere Solemn 2. Imagery – language that engages the senses and evokes emotions. What is the effect of the imagery? Is this the author’s intention? How do you feel when you encounter imagery in a passage? In your own writing, do you create imagery? What words do you choose to do so? o o o o o o o 3. Visual Auditory Tactile -- touch Olfactory – smell Gustatory – taste Kinesthetic – sense of movement Organic – internal sense of well- being Tone -- what is the attitude of the speaker/narrator? Details such as imagery, diction, syntax create tone. Tone often shifts in passages; these shifts mark critical changes in thinking and/or epiphanies. Do you notice tone shifts in your reading? Does your own writing shift in tone? Types of tone: o Candid o Laconic o Sanctimonio o Caustic o lyrical us o colloquial o Matter-ofo Sardonic o Cynical fact o Sinister o Detached o Melancholy o Speculative o Didactic o Nostalgic o terse o Effusive o Objective o Trite o Erudite o Pedantic o Whimsical o formal o Poignant o informal o ribald 3a. Mood -- emotional quality of the setting. What’s the mood like in a passage, chapter, poem (stanza of a poem), particular dialogue, etc.? How is it created? How does it shift? In your own writing, is there a general mood? Are you consciously aware of it? Types of moods: o Apprehensive o o dreadful Elegiac o o o Quizzical Rapturous Reproachful o o o Satiric Solemn Suspenseful 4. Syntax – the order of words in a sentence. The rhythm of prose. Note: take a look at your own writing. How many sentences begin with “A,” “The,” “He,” “She,” “They,” “It,” or some other noun/pronoun? Knowing about variety in syntax will help you create fresh, rhythmic, fluent sentences. o o o o o Repetition, placement of ideas, inversion, etc., may be used for emphasis. Syntax impacts the narrative pace of a passage, making it read quickly or slowly, which therefore impacts theme/idea Certain types of sentences are better at emphasizing certain ideas or emotions or mood/tone 3 P’s of syntax o Prominence – importance given to an idea in a sentence. Importance is achieved both by placement and by repetition. Sometimes an idea is isolated in a short sentence where it is given sole prominence. If a word is ever set off alone as a fragment, it is being given prominence that best not be ignored. Ask, why is this word isolated/” o Position – where the key idea is located. It will come at the beginning (see “loose sentence”) or at the end of a sentence (see “periodic sentence”); sometimes authors use non-standard syntax such as inversion (anastrophe) to draw attention to certain words or ideas. o Pace – speed of the text. The pace or speed of the text helps further explicate the author’s purpose. For example, a fast-paced narration emphasizes a character’s frenetic and fragile state of mind. In Maya Angelou’s poem “Woman Work,” the first stanza, which describes all the tasks to be done, is meant to be read so fast that the reader actually feels tired after reading it. The rest of the poem is composed of flour-line stanzas that read much more slowly. The images in these stanzas evoke peace, coolness, and rest, juxtaposed against the frenetic pace of the first stanza. Aspects of syntax o Climax – the main idea or most important point in a sentence. The position of the climax might be varied for stylistic effect. o Cadence – the rhythm or music of a sentence that s derived from parallel elements, repetition, and sound elements/techniques (alliteration, consonance, assonance). o Narrative pace Length of words Omission of words or punctuation Ellipsis Sentence length Number of IC and DC Repetition of sounds Assonance (repeated vowel sounds), consonance (repeated consonant sounds), alliteration Grammatical sentence purposes o o o Declarative (makes a statement). Ends with a period. o Imperative sentence (makes a command). Ends with a period or an exclamation point. o Interrogative sentence (asks a question). Ends with a question mark. o Exclamatory sentence (makes an emphatic or emotion filled statement. Ends with an exclamation point. Grammatical sentence types o Simple o Compound o Complex o Compound-complex SENTENCE TYPES o Inverted (anastrophe) -- “Glistens the dew upon the morning grass.” (Normal: The dew glistens upon the morning grass.) o o o Periodic -- main idea doesn’t isn’t stated until the end Loose -- main idea is stated in the beginning of the sentences Parallel -- any sentence structured with equal attention and focus given to a series of words or clauses. Asyndeton -- Commas used (with no conjunction) to separate a series of words. Absence of conjunctions speeds up the flow of the sentence. “And now abideth faith, hope, charity, these three; but the greatest of these is charity.” Polysyndeton -- The use of conjunctions between each word, phrase, or clause. Polysyndeton makes sentences slower and the parallel items more emphatic. It suggests a piling up of details and/or ideas. The Bible contains many such usages, usages that indicate that something holy and solemn and important is being talked about. Antithesis -- opposition or contrast emphasized by parallel structure. “They promised freedom but provided slavery.” “Ask not what your country can do for you, but what you can do for your country.” o Repetition – repeated words Anaphora – repetition of the same word or words at the beginning of a series of phrases, clauses, or sentences. “I hated Boy Scouts. I hated camping out. I hated dirt and tents and mosquitoes.” Epistrophe -- the repetition o the same word or words at the end of successive phrases or clauses. “When I was a child, I spake as a child, I understood as a child, I thought as a child;” Asyndeton -- Commas used (with no conjunction) to separate a series of words. “And now abideth faith, hope, charity, these three; but the greatest of these is charity.” Polysyndeton -- The use of conjunctions between each word, phrase, or clause. Polysyndeton makes sentences slower and the parallel items more emphatic. It suggests a piling up of details and/or ideas. The Bible contains many such usages, usages that indicate that something holy and solemn and important is being talked about. Chiasmus – a structure by which the order of the terms in the first parallel clauses is reversed in the second. “Never let a fool kiss you, or a kiss fool you.” Anadiplosis -- the repetition of the last word of one clause at the beginning of the next clause: I lift up mine eyes unto the hills, from whence cometh my help. My help cometh from the Lord Epanalepsis -- the repetition of the first word of one clause at the end of the clause: “Bold was the challenge as he himself was bold.” 5. Point of View First person Second person Third person-limited Third person-omniscient Objective 6. Figurative language -- language not meant to be taken literally. Common types of figurative language used for rhetorical purposes. Allegory – literal and figurative meaning layers Apostrophe – a rhetorical device in which a speaker addresses a person or personified thing not present. “Oh, you cruel streets of Manhattan, how I detest you!” Metonymy Synecdoche Hyperbole (overstatement) Litotes (understatement) – a form of understatement in which the negative of the contrary is used to achieve emphasis or intensity. Example: He is not a bad dancer. Personification Anthropomorphism -- an interpretation of what is not human or personal in terms of human or personal characteristics (usually animals or nature (trees, rivers, etc.) involved Paradox Oxymoron Symbolism Allusion Rhetorical question Simile Metaphor o Direct -- comparison is made directly using the word “is”; “Life is a river.” o Indirect – “The river of life.” o Extended -- Extends throughout the text or part of the text and is fully developed. Ultimate form is an allegory o Mixed—try to avoid; this type of metaphor mixes two types of comparisons. “Sally’s successful day was a home run and a slam dunk.” o Analogy -o Metaphysical conceit Irony o Dramatic o Verbal o Situational o Cosmic Miscellaneous things to look for in your reading and in your own writing: contrasts / contradictions / juxtapositions / shifts (syntax) reliability of narrator (point of view) motifs or cluster ideas themes setting / historical period