2nd Grade ELD Quarter 3 Unit ELD Quarter 3 Weeks 1 and 2: Learning Targets: Identify where the glossary, index, subheadings, captions, bold print, and electronic menus are in the text; -use the glossary, index, subheadings, captions, etc. to locate key details or facts from the text Use sentence frames to write sentences that tell main purpose Use sentence frames to explain how specific images clarify a text Gather facts from a text, introduce a topic, pick the facts to use, complete graphic organizers/Thinking Maps that plan out an informative/expository writing piece. Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 ELD Standards: Part I: Interacting in Meaningful Ways 6. Reading/viewing closely Describe ideas, phenomena (e.g., how earthworms eat), and text elements (e.g., setting, events) in greater detail based on understanding of a variety of grade‐level texts and viewing of multimedia with moderate support. 8. Analyzing language choices Distinguish how two different words with similar meaning (e.g., describing a character as happy versus ecstatic) produce shades of meaning and different effects on the audience. Part II: Learning About How English Works 1. Understanding text structure Apply understanding of how different text types are organized to express ideas (e.g., how a story is organized sequentially with predictable stages versus how an information report is organized by topic and details) to comprehending texts and composing texts with increasing independence. 2. Understanding cohesion Apply understanding of how ideas, events, or reasons are linked throughout a text using a growing number of connecting words or phrases (e.g., after a long time, first/next) to comprehending texts and writing texts with increasing independence. Tasks Quick Write: Write two opinions about _____. (A person in the school, their family, or a famous person). Write two facts about _____. Write two opinions about ______. Give reasons for your opinions. Write a fact and opinion about _____. (Possible sentence frames: I think _____ because _____. OR _____ so I think _____.) Build-A-Sentence Discussion: It is important to discuss the Quick Writes in partners or a class. A possibility is to have students go to the back of the room when they are done with their Quick Write to share with another student who is done. After sharing with one person, they share with another, until everyone has had an opportunity to speak. Vocabulary: Review key terms to informative texts: bold print, captions, illustrations, diagrams, photographs, glossary, index Teach multiple meaning words by focusing on parts of speech. A four column chart can be made: Word Part of Speech Sentence Watch Noun I wear a watch on my wrist. Watch Verb The teachers watch us play at recess. 2 Picture ELD Quarter 3 Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 Comprehension: Week 1: Read an informational book that you have access to. Discuss the various text features and how they help the reader understand the book. Week 2: Read a biography. Discuss the text features in the book. Also discuss what the major events in the person’s life were. Grammar / Writing: Weeks 1 and 2: Build-A-Sentence activity is good activity to do once a week. It will allow for a spiral review of many important concepts. Students can label the words in the fourth sentence: ADJ – adjective, N – noun, V – verb, ADV – adverb Week 1: Review verbs; regular and irregular verbs. You can have the students create a verb book that is added to once a week. Staple some pieces of writing paper or story paper in a piece of construction paper. The students should write My Verb Book on the front cover. They can also write written and illustrated by… On the inside of the cover, have the students write the definition of: verb, present, past. The first page of the Verb Book the students can make a chart: (the example is using the verb: have) Present Past I / you / we / they have had he / she / it has Then, have some students tell you some sentences using “have”. Choose one sentence to write under the chart. Underline have. Repeat with has and had. The students can then illustrate one or more of their sentences. Week 2: Verb Book: sleep Week 2: Review nouns; singular, plural, common, proper Week 2: Write two simple sentences on the board and discuss how they can be combined. For example: The boy was hungry. The boy ate a sandwich. The boy was hungry so he ate a sandwich. You can use YouTube to show School House Rock: Conjunction Junction. 3 ELD Quarter 3 Week 3: Learning Targets: Actively participate in whole class discussions and charting of how reasons support specific points the author makes in a text, use sentence frames to describe how reasons support specific points the author makes in a text. Complete a compare/contrast graphic organizer that shows the most important points in the two texts on the same topic in whole class discussions. Gather facts from a text, introduce a topic, pick the facts to use, complete graphic organizers/Thinking Maps that plan out an informative/expository writing piece. Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 ELD Standards: Part I: Interacting in Meaningful Ways 6. Reading/viewing closely Describe ideas, phenomena (e.g., how earthworms eat), and text elements (e.g., setting, events) in greater detail based on understanding of a variety of grade‐level texts and viewing of multimedia with moderate support. 7. Evaluating language choices Describe the language writers or speakers use to present or support an idea (e.g., the author’s choice of vocabulary or phrasing to portray characters, places, or real people) with prompting and moderate support. 10. Writing Write short literary texts (e.g., a story) and informational texts (e.g., an explanatory text explaining how a volcano erupts) collaboratively with an adult (e.g., joint construction of texts), with peers, and with increasing independence. Part II: Learning About How English Works 1. Understanding text structure Apply understanding of how different text types are organized to express ideas (e.g., how a story is organized sequentially with predictable stages versus how an information report is organized by topic and details) to comprehending texts and composing texts with increasing independence. 2. Understanding cohesion Apply understanding of how ideas, events, or reasons are linked throughout a text using a growing number of connecting words or phrases (e.g., after a long time, first/next) to comprehending texts and writing texts with increasing independence. 6. Connecting ideas Combine clauses in an increasing variety of ways to make connections between and to join ideas, for example, to express cause/effect (e.g., She jumped because the dog barked) with increasing independence. 7. Condensing ideas Condense clauses in a growing number of ways (e.g., through embedded clauses as in, It’s a plant. It’s found in the rainforest.-> It’s a green and red plant that’s found in the rainforests.) to create precise and detailed sentences with increasing independence. Tasks Quick Write: Do you like going to the park? Use OREO. (It is important to review skills already taught) Write one example of a simple machine in our playground. How does it help you have fun? List the simple machines in our classroom. How do we use them? Write two facts about _____. Write two opinions about _____. Give reasons for your opinions. Discussion: It is important to discuss the Quick Writes in partners or a class. A possibility is to have students go to the back of the room when they are done with their Quick Write to share with another student who is done. After sharing with one person, they share with another, until everyone has had an opportunity to speak. 4 ELD Quarter 3 Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 Vocabulary: Practice putting words in alphabetical order, especially words that have the same first two letters. (For example, bite, bird, bin) Comprehension: Read a biography that you have access to. Discuss any important text elements and how they help the reader understand the test. As a class, decide what the important events were in the person’s life. Grammar / Writing: Build-A-Sentence activity is good activity to do once a week. It will allow for a spiral review of many important concepts. Verb Book: run As a class, write an explanatory paragraph about simple machines that are used at the playground. Continue working on improving sentences, now by condensing ideas. For example: It’s red. It’s green. It’s a plant. It’s a red and green plant. 5 ELD Quarter 3 Weeks 4: Learning Targets: Describe how a character responds to major events orally and in writing (sentence frames when necessary); identify major events and how each character reacts. Be able to complete a story graphic organizer where they list character name and character point of view; be able to identify the difference in two or more characters’ points of view after a read aloud; read text in different voices to match character’s point of view/attitude. Provide textual and/or illustration evidence as direct support when answering 5 W’s & H questions about character, setting, plot, and events orally and in writing. Introduce a topic, use facts & definitions to develop points, use supporting detail sentences with transition words in them, write a concluding statement, complete graphic organizer that plan out writing piece, use completed graphic organizer to write an informative/explanatory writing. Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 ELD Standards: Part I: Interacting in Meaningful Ways 6. Reading/viewing closely Describe ideas, phenomena (e.g., how earthworms eat), and text elements (e.g., setting, events) in greater detail based on understanding of a variety of grade‐level texts and viewing of multimedia with moderate support. 7. Evaluating language choices Describe the language writers or speakers use to present or support an idea (e.g., the author’s choice of vocabulary or phrasing to portray characters, places, or real people) with prompting and moderate support. 10. Writing Write short literary texts (e.g., a story) and informational texts (e.g., an explanatory text explaining how a volcano erupts) collaboratively with an adult (e.g., joint construction of texts), with peers, and with increasing independence. Part II: Learning About How English Works 1. Understanding text structure Apply understanding of how different text types are organized to express ideas (e.g., how a story is organized sequentially with predictable stages versus how an information report is organized by topic and details) to comprehending texts and composing texts with increasing independence. 2. Understanding cohesion Apply understanding of how ideas, events, or reasons are linked throughout a text using a growing number of connecting words or phrases (e.g., after a long time, first/next) to comprehending texts and writing texts with increasing independence. 6. Connecting ideas Combine clauses in an increasing variety of ways to make connections between and to join ideas, for example, to express cause/effect (e.g., She jumped because the dog barked) with increasing independence. 7. Condensing ideas Condense clauses in a growing number of ways (e.g., through embedded clauses as in, It’s a plant. It’s found in the rainforest.-> It’s a green and red plant that’s found in the rainforests.) to create precise and detailed sentences with increasing independence. Tasks Quick Write: Are motorcycles fun? Use OREO. Would you like to be friends with a mouse? Use OREO. Imagine you were one inch tall at recess. Write about what it would be like. Describe the motel the Gridleys are staying in. How did Ralph respond to the motorcycle? Discussion: Discuss the Quick Writes. 6 ELD Quarter 3 Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 Vocabulary: Practice irregular verbs in the past. (run/ran, sleep/slept, eat/ate) Students can write sentences. For example: The students run every day. The students ran yesterday. Extension: rearrange the sentences. For example: Yesterday, the students ran. Practice irregular plural nouns. (child/children, man/men, mouse/mice) Students can write sentences using the nouns. For example: The picture has one child smiling. The second picture has many children smiling. Comprehension: Review what a character is. Review what an event is. Then discuss what it means when a character responds to an event in a story. Perhaps create a poster like the following: When a character responds … how did the character feel what did the character think what did the character do Read a biography that you have access to, or read an article from the internet about one of the Olympic athletes. (www.olympic.org) Grammar / Writing: Build-A-Sentence Verb Book: see Write an informative paragraph about someone you have read about as a class. Continue working on combining and condensing sentences. 7 ELD Quarter 3 Week 5: Learning Targets: Describe how a character responds to major events orally and in writing (sentence frames when necessary); identify major events and how each character reacts. Be able to complete a story graphic organizer where they list character name and character point of view; be able to identify the difference in two or more characters’ points of view after a read aloud; read text in different voices to match character’s point of view/attitude. Provide textual and/or illustration evidence as direct support when answering 5 W’s & H questions about character, setting, plot, and events orally and in writing. Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 ELD Standards: Part I: Interacting in Meaningful Ways 1. Exchanging information and ideas Contribute to class, group, and partner discussions, including sustained dialogue, by listening attentively, following turn‐taking rules, asking relevant questions, affirming others, and adding relevant information. 2. Interacting via written English Collaborate with peers on joint writing projects of short informational and literary texts, using technology where appropriate for publishing, graphics, etc. 6. Reading/viewing closely Describe ideas, phenomena (e.g., how earthworms eat), and text elements (e.g., setting, events) in greater detail based on understanding of a variety of grade‐level texts and viewing of multimedia with moderate support. 10. Writing Write short literary texts (e.g., a story) and informational texts (e.g., an explanatory text explaining how a volcano erupts) collaboratively with an adult (e.g., joint construction of texts), with peers, and with increasing independence. Part II: Learning About How English Works 3. Using verbs and verb phrases a) Use a growing number of verb types (e.g., doing, saying, being/having, thinking/feeling) with increasing independence. 4. Using nouns and noun phrases Expand noun phrases in a growing number of ways (e.g., adding a newly learned adjective to a noun) in order to enrich the meaning of sentences and to add details about ideas, people, things, etc., with increasing independence. 5. Modifying to add details Expand sentences with a growing number of adverbials (e.g., adverbs, prepositional phrases) to provide details (e.g., time, manner, place, cause) about a familiar or new activity or process with increasing independence. Tasks Quick Write: Did Ralph do the right thing in trying the motorcycle? Use OREO. Ralph likes the motorcycle. Keith likes the motorcycle. Combine the two sentences. Illustrate your new sentence. How would you get out of the wastebasket? In your opinion, how would Ralph’s mother react to Ralph being trapped? Use OREO. The phone rang. The phone scared Ralph. Combine the two sentences. Illustrate your new sentence. Discussion: Discuss the Quick Writes. 8 ELD Quarter 3 Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 Vocabulary: Review synonyms. Shades of meaning with ate. nibbled – chomped – ate – consumed – gobbled Create sentences with each word. Comprehension: Review what has been read in The Mouse and the Motorcycle. Discuss what the major events have been up to now. Practice writing summaries of the major events. Grammar / Writing: Build-A-Sentence Verb Book: write 9 ELD Quarter 3 Week 6: Learning Targets: Describe how a character responds to major events orally and in writing (sentence frames when necessary); identify major events and how each character reacts. Be able to complete a story graphic organizer where they list character name and character point of view; be able to identify the difference in two or more characters’ points of view after a read aloud; read text in different voices to match character’s point of view/attitude. Provide textual and/or illustration evidence as direct support when answering 5 W’s & H questions about character, setting, plot, and events orally and in writing. Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 ELD Standards: Part I: Interacting in Meaningful Ways 1. Exchanging information and ideas Contribute to class, group, and partner discussions, including sustained dialogue, by listening attentively, following turn‐taking rules, asking relevant questions, affirming others, and adding relevant information. 2. Interacting via written English Collaborate with peers on joint writing projects of short informational and literary texts, using technology where appropriate for publishing, graphics, etc. 6. Reading/viewing closely Describe ideas, phenomena (e.g., how earthworms eat), and text elements (e.g., setting, events) in greater detail based on understanding of a variety of grade‐level texts and viewing of multimedia with moderate support. 10. Writing Write short literary texts (e.g., a story) and informational texts (e.g., an explanatory text explaining how a volcano erupts) collaboratively with an adult (e.g., joint construction of texts), with peers, and with increasing independence. Part II: Learning About How English Works 3. Using verbs and verb phrases a) Use a growing number of verb types (e.g., doing, saying, being/having, thinking/feeling) with increasing independence. 4. Using nouns and noun phrases Expand noun phrases in a growing number of ways (e.g., adding a newly learned adjective to a noun) in order to enrich the meaning of sentences and to add details about ideas, people, things, etc., with increasing independence. 5. Modifying to add details Expand sentences with a growing number of adverbials (e.g., adverbs, prepositional phrases) to provide details (e.g., time, manner, place, cause) about a familiar or new activity or process with increasing independence. Tasks Quick Write: Imagine you saw a mouse in the bottom of a wastebasket. How would you have reacted? Why? In your opinion, did Keith do the right thing in teaching Ralph how to ride the motorcycle? Why do you think that? Describe Ralph’s reaction to riding the motorcycle in the hallway. Build-A-Sentence 12:30 is lunchtime. I ate pizza for lunch. I ate with my friends. Combine the sentences. Illustrate your new sentence. Discussion: Discuss the Quick Writes. 10 ELD Quarter 3 Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 Vocabulary: Practice looking up words in the dictionary. Shades of meaning with drank. sipped – slurped – drank – gulped – guzzled Create sentences with each word. Comprehension: Review what has been read in The Mouse and the Motorcycle. Discuss what the major events have been up to now. As a class, list three major events from the story in order. Then write how one or two characters reacted to these events. (You could keep the chart and/or paper that it is written on and add to it later). Major Event __________’s Reaction __________’s Reaction Grammar / Writing: Build-A-Sentence Verb Book: ride Practice combining and condensing sentences. To further ensure the students are understanding the novel, you can use sentences that summarize the story. For example: Ralph wanted to ride the motorcycle. Ralph didn’t know how to ride the motorcycle. Ralph wanted to ride the motorcycle, but he didn’t know how. 11 ELD Quarter 3 Week 7: Learning Targets: Describe how a character responds to major events orally and in writing (sentence frames when necessary); identify major events and how each character reacts. Be able to complete a story graphic organizer where they list character name and character point of view; be able to identify the difference in two or more characters’ points of view after a read aloud; read text in different voices to match character’s point of view/attitude. Provide textual and/or illustration evidence as direct support when answering 5 W’s & H questions about character, setting, plot, and events orally and in writing. Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 ELD Standards: Part I: Interacting in Meaningful Ways 1. Exchanging information and ideas Contribute to class, group, and partner discussions, including sustained dialogue, by listening attentively, following turn‐taking rules, asking relevant questions, affirming others, and adding relevant information. 2. Interacting via written English Collaborate with peers on joint writing projects of short informational and literary texts, using technology where appropriate for publishing, graphics, etc. 6. Reading/viewing closely Describe ideas, phenomena (e.g., how earthworms eat), and text elements (e.g., setting, events) in greater detail based on understanding of a variety of grade‐level texts and viewing of multimedia with moderate support. 10. Writing Write short literary texts (e.g., a story) and informational texts (e.g., an explanatory text explaining how a volcano erupts) collaboratively with an adult (e.g., joint construction of texts), with peers, and with increasing independence. Part II: Learning About How English Works 3. Using verbs and verb phrases a) Use a growing number of verb types (e.g., doing, saying, being/having, thinking/feeling) with increasing independence. 4. Using nouns and noun phrases Expand noun phrases in a growing number of ways (e.g., adding a newly learned adjective to a noun) in order to enrich the meaning of sentences and to add details about ideas, people, things, etc., with increasing independence. 5. Modifying to add details Expand sentences with a growing number of adverbials (e.g., adverbs, prepositional phrases) to provide details (e.g., time, manner, place, cause) about a familiar or new activity or process with increasing independence. Tasks Quick Write: If you could order anything from room service, what would it be? Why? Describe Ralph’s reaction to hearing the vacuum cleaner. Why is Keith jealous that Ralph can ride the motorcycle? Build-A-Sentence My dog is black. My dog likes to play with a ball. The ball is yellow. Combine the sentences. Illustrate your new sentence. Discussion: Discuss the Quick Writes. 12 ELD Quarter 3 Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 Vocabulary: Review multiple meaning words. Give the students a 4x6 index card. (A piece of blank paper would also work). They fold it in half. At the top of the card, they write a multiple meaning word. (You can assign the class the same word, they can work in groups, or you can assign each child a different word). They need to write the part of speech at the top of left side and a sentence using the word. They do the same on the right side. They illustrate both sentences. Wave Verb We wave good-bye to our parents after we get on the bus. Noun He rode the wave on his surfboard. (picture) (picture) Comprehension: Read and discuss a biography. As a class, create a list of important events from the person’s life in sequential order. If possible, discuss different people’s reactions to those events. Grammar / Writing: Build-A-Sentence Verb Book: bring Practice combining and condensing sentences. 13 ELD Quarter 3 Week 8: Learning Targets: Describe how a character responds to major events orally and in writing (sentence frames when necessary); identify major events and how each character reacts. Be able to complete a story graphic organizer where they list character name and character point of view; be able to identify the difference in two or more characters’ points of view after a read aloud; read text in different voices to match character’s point of view/attitude. Provide textual and/or illustration evidence as direct support when answering 5 W’s & H questions about character, setting, plot, and events orally and in writing. Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 ELD Standards: Part I: Interacting in Meaningful Ways 1. Exchanging information and ideas Contribute to class, group, and partner discussions, including sustained dialogue, by listening attentively, following turn‐taking rules, asking relevant questions, affirming others, and adding relevant information. 2. Interacting via written English Collaborate with peers on joint writing projects of short informational and literary texts, using technology where appropriate for publishing, graphics, etc. 6. Reading/viewing closely Describe ideas, phenomena (e.g., how earthworms eat), and text elements (e.g., setting, events) in greater detail based on understanding of a variety of grade‐level texts and viewing of multimedia with moderate support. 10. Writing Write short literary texts (e.g., a story) and informational texts (e.g., an explanatory text explaining how a volcano erupts) collaboratively with an adult (e.g., joint construction of texts), with peers, and with increasing independence. Part II: Learning About How English Works 3. Using verbs and verb phrases a) Use a growing number of verb types (e.g., doing, saying, being/having, thinking/feeling) with increasing independence. 4. Using nouns and noun phrases Expand noun phrases in a growing number of ways (e.g., adding a newly learned adjective to a noun) in order to enrich the meaning of sentences and to add details about ideas, people, things, etc., with increasing independence. 5. Modifying to add details Expand sentences with a growing number of adverbials (e.g., adverbs, prepositional phrases) to provide details (e.g., time, manner, place, cause) about a familiar or new activity or process with increasing independence. Tasks Quick Write: Write about a time you and your family did something new together. Write about a toy that is very special to you. Why is it so special? In your opinion, what should Ralph do about the missing motorcycle? Would you be mad at Ralph for losing the motorcycle? Why or why not? Build-A-Sentence Discussion: Discuss the Quick Writes. 14 ELD Quarter 3 Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 Vocabulary: Review antonyms. A possible activity would be to write sentences with two antonyms in it. For example, I am disappointed when I have a lot of homework, but I’m excited when I finish all of it. Comprehension: Review what has been read in The Mouse and the Motorcycle. Discuss what the major events have been up to now. Add to the major event chart (from week 6) or create a new one. Grammar / Writing: Build-A-Sentence Verb Book: teach Write a brief paragraph about the novel, repeating a lot of words. Display it for the children under a document camera and/or give them copies. (Another option would be to create the paragraph as a class). Then, go over the paragraph together, focusing on improving sentences by combining and condensing. Also work on changing names to pronouns. For example, Ralph liked Keith’s motorcycle as soon as Ralph saw the motorcycle. The motorcycle was red. Ralph did not know how to ride the motorcycle. Keith taught Ralph to ride the motorcycle. Keith let Ralph ride the motorcycle in the hallway. Ralph promised Keith to not lose the motorcycle. Ralph lost the motorcycle. Keith was not mad at Ralph. 15 ELD Quarter 3 Week 9: Learning Targets: Describe how a character responds to major events orally and in writing (sentence frames when necessary); identify major events and how each character reacts. Be able to complete a story graphic organizer where they list character name and character point of view; be able to identify the difference in two or more characters’ points of view after a read aloud; read text in different voices to match character’s point of view/attitude. Provide textual and/or illustration evidence as direct support when answering 5 W’s & H questions about character, setting, plot, and events orally and in writing. Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 ELD Standards: Part I: Interacting in Meaningful Ways 1. Exchanging information and ideas Contribute to class, group, and partner discussions, including sustained dialogue, by listening attentively, following turn‐taking rules, asking relevant questions, affirming others, and adding relevant information. 2. Interacting via written English Collaborate with peers on joint writing projects of short informational and literary texts, using technology where appropriate for publishing, graphics, etc. 6. Reading/viewing closely Describe ideas, phenomena (e.g., how earthworms eat), and text elements (e.g., setting, events) in greater detail based on understanding of a variety of grade‐level texts and viewing of multimedia with moderate support. 10. Writing Write short literary texts (e.g., a story) and informational texts (e.g., an explanatory text explaining how a volcano erupts) collaboratively with an adult (e.g., joint construction of texts), with peers, and with increasing independence. Part II: Learning About How English Works 3. Using verbs and verb phrases a) Use a growing number of verb types (e.g., doing, saying, being/having, thinking/feeling) with increasing independence. 4. Using nouns and noun phrases Expand noun phrases in a growing number of ways (e.g., adding a newly learned adjective to a noun) in order to enrich the meaning of sentences and to add details about ideas, people, things, etc., with increasing independence. 5. Modifying to add details Expand sentences with a growing number of adverbials (e.g., adverbs, prepositional phrases) to provide details (e.g., time, manner, place, cause) about a familiar or new activity or process with increasing independence. Tasks Quick Write: What was Mrs. Gridley’s reaction to Keith being sick? What was Ralph’s reaction to Keith being sick? What was Ralph’s reaction to the motorcycle being found? What was Keith’s reaction to the motorcycle being found? Did Ralph make the correct decision to stay at the hotel? Why or why not? What was your favorite part of The Mouse and the Motorcycle? Why? Is The Mouse and the Motorcycle a good book? Use OREO. Discussion: Discuss the Quick Writes. 16 ELD Quarter 3 Grade: 2 last updated: 1-19-15 Vocabulary: Review anything your students are struggling with: nouns, verbs, adjectives, synonyms, antonyms, multiple meaning words. Comprehension: Review what has been read in The Mouse and the Motorcycle. Discuss what the major events have been up to now. Read a biography and discuss the major events. Assign a story to each child (or pair of students) to read and have them present a summary of the book to the class. Grammar / Writing: Build-A-Sentence Verb Book: take As a class, write an informational paragraph about the biography you read. Be sure to revisit it and improve any sentences possible. 17