Short Term Literacy plan – Year 3 – Citrine Class Unit: Week Beg: 8th October 2012 Duration: Assessment focus: Talk for Writing. Identifying Verbs, Extending vocabularly. Acrostic Poetry Monday 8th October, 2012 Word/Sentence Level Learning Intention During register: Sentence Doctor – display sentences on board, chdrn to write correctly on own mini wbs. i had a great weekend stop him he is hurting me why did david get more than me Main Learning Intention To be able to identify verbs Success Criteria/Targets Remember to: Read the sentences carefully Consider which is the doing or being word – this is the verb/verb group Put a circle around the verbs. Example of Direct Teaching Diff Activities Focus group in bold. Explain that there are many different types of word that make up a sentence – some describe, some are names for things and some let us know what is happening. Tell children we are going to be thinking about verbs. On IWB show ‘doing pictures’ . What are these people doing? A verb is – a doing/action word. Eg. shouts, plays, walks. Explain that a sentence has to have a verb in it to make sense. Show sentence on whiteboard. ‘Citrine children click their fingers.’ Ask which part is the action/verb? All children to read the sentence and ‘click’ their fingers when they say the word – reinforce this is the action bit! Repeat with ‘The children stamp their feet.’ ‘Cory scratches his head’ etc. Explain that as well as an action word, a verb can thought of as a ‘being’ word such as am, is, were, will be, has been, etc. Show examples on board • The monkeys are upside down. • We were cold and wet all week. • I am here! Mostly we put a being word with a doing word and we can call this a verb group: • I am reading my book. • You are talking too loudly. • He is eating his lunch. All children to be given a differentiated text/series of separate sentences and they are to circle the verb or verb group to identify these types of words. SN: (Angel supported by Jan, Layton by Lyndsey) Verbs – doing words sheet. Ext: Using pictures on sheet write complete sentence in literacy book, underlining the verb LA: with a partner: Read single sentences on sheet to partner, decide together which is the verb and circle the correct word. Part 2 – Read sentence with missing verb. Children to choose a suitable verb to put into sentence. (Kay) MA: Independent activity; Read single sentences on sheet, decide which is verb and circle the correct word. Part 2 – Read sentence with missing verb. Children to choose a suitable verb to put into sentence. MA+: Verb detective – Dev Literacy pg. 37 (supported by Emma) HA: Verb detective – Dev. Literacy pg. 37 (independent) Plenary http://www.funbrain.com/verb/index.html AFL Tuesday 9th October 2012 During register: Inserting verbs Show sentences missing verbs, children to write on whiteboards inserting own suggestions. AFL The giant ...... down the hill. Father Christmas is ......... down the chimney. The mouse ...... across the floor. WALT: use powerful verbs Remember to: Write down the actions you think a superhero would do Use a thesaurus to look up the word Choose suggestions you like and record in literacy book. Look particularly for words that begin with the SUPERHERO letters Sing alphabet song together. From register activity check children understand what is meant by a verb. Explain to make writing really exciting and interesting to read it is important to use WOW words. Get child to walk across the classroom. Write up sentence – Layton walks across the room. Which part is the verb? Sentence correct but rather boring, what could we do to make it more interesting. Elicit changing the words to make more powerful. Instead of walk we could have strolls, ambles, strides, hikes, staggers, saunters. Get a child at a time to then change how they walk across the room. MUCH more interesting! Put into context of superheroes – What do they do? (could use Superhero ABC book for inspiration) Brainstorm list of actions – fly, charge, jump, hide, stretch etc. etc. Model how to use a thesaurus to improve the vocab and create wow words. Explain that we need to create a list of action words/verbs to make an acrostic poem tomorrow. So really good if they could find words that began with S-UP-E-R-H-E-R-O!! Provide alphabet strips and thesauruses for all groups. SN: (Angel supported by Jan) working as a group, brainstorm actions they think suitable for a superhero. Together they choose one or two to look up in a thesaurus to improve word choice. Record in literacy books. LA: (Kay to support) children brainstorm their own words. TA to support children in looking up words in thesaurus. MA: Work with a partner to brainstorm actions for superheros, record and then use thesaurus to improve word choice. MA+: As MA HA: Individual activity. Brainstorm words and use thesaurus to improve word choice. Look particularly for words beginning with SUPERHERO letters (Emma) Share ideas together. Provide each child with highlighter and they are to go through their list, highlighting any verbs they have written that begin with SUPERHERO ready for using tomorrow. Thursday, 11th October Remember to: Include your improvements – don’t copy your first draft / spelling mistakes; Use your best handwriting; Read through when you have finished and check for your target. Big Writing: children to copy their final drafts of their superhero origin story. AFL Friday, 12th October Remember to: AFL DT: planning superhero costumes. Register activity: Monday, 15th October 2012 Answer the register with a verb! AFL WALT: generate powerful verbs. WALT: use a thesaurus Use your words from your brainstorm Choose word and use a thesaurus to look up the word Choose suggestions you like and record in literacy book. Look particularly for words that begin with the SUPERHERO letters Continuing from last week’s session children understand what an action verb is, some HA children understand a being verb. They struggled more with using a thesaurus and looking up words to find more powerful ones. To continue today. Recap on work from last Mon and Tues. We are finding really good powerful vocabulary to make an acrostic poem about a SUPERHERO. Children to brainstorm with their TP verbs that might apply to a superhero. Demonstrate how to use a thesaurus – children to have an alphabet strip and thesaurus with them on carpet. Take verb – jump. All children to look it up and talk about alternatives. Model how to record in their books. Remind children that when they are getting alternative verbs be really good if they began with the letters of superhero as we could use them tomorrow. SN: (Angel supported by Jan) working as a group, brainstorm actions they think suitable for a superhero. Together they choose one or two to look up in a thesaurus to improve word choice. Record in literacy books. LA: (I) work with a partner to choose ordinary verb and use thesaurus to get at least three alternatives. MA: Work with a partner to brainstorm actions for superheros, record and then use thesaurus to improve word choice. (Emma) MA+: As MA HA: Brainstorm words and use thesaurus to improve word choice. Look particularly for words beginning with SUPERHERO letters (Kay) Share ideas together. Provide each child with highlighter and they are to go through their list, highlighting any verbs they have written that begin with SUPERHERO ready for using tomorrow. Tuesday 16th October 2012 Missing sentence. WALT: write an acrostic poem. Given the children a punctuation mark – ie, ? They must write a sentence on their whiteboard that uses that punctuation mark appropriately. Each line to begin with letter from SUPERHERO Each line to begin with a verb – where possible! (U and O may be more tricky so other types of words could be used) Each line to be a phrase about what a superhero does. Children to bring their literacy books to the carpet. Show children some examples of acrostic poems. Tell them that they will be writing their own SUPERHERO poem. The poem will be telling the reader about the superhero and all the amazing things they do. Each line to start with letter spelling out SUPERHERO. Try to start with verb (doing or action word) and complete a phrase. c Eg. Soaring through the sky Undoing evil Pouncing on the enemies Escalating up buildings etc. etc. All children to have writing frame for acrostic poem with SUPERHERO down the side. SN: Angel with Jan Others with Jude’s writing group LA: Supported by Kay MA: I MA+: Emma HA: I Children to read their poem to a partner. Choose a couple to read out to class. On IWB show children a range of calligrams and introduce the term - calligram. What do they think a calligram is by looking at these examples? Discuss in talking partners. Give children some words to draw on their whiteboards – share and discuss favourite ones; why are they so effective? Children to have a go at creating their own calligrams. SN/LA: to have similar words given as a visual cue, e.g. crack and break. MA/HA: to choose from a list of words. Share calligrams made and discuss their effectiveness. Thursday, 18th October AFL WALT: Create our own calligrams. Remember to: Read the word; Think about the meaning of the word; Draw the word to show its meaning – think about: -shape -size -colour -font Friday, 19th October AFL D.T: making superhero costumes throughout the day. AFL F AFL