Prewriting: Organizing Ideas Introduction Planning your organization Chronological order Spatial order Logical order Order of importance Creating an outline Your Turn 1: Choose an order Your Turn 2: Arrange ideas Introduction Another Usually, One route may you may can bebe better find better more because because than there one it’sway the are from shortest. places point you A The route choose on your needs. to point need to stop B.youalong thedepends way. Point A Point B In all cases, though, it’s a good idea to plan out your route in advance. The same holds true for writing. Introduction You may wonder how you’ll turn the ideas and information you’ve collected for your topic from a disorganized mess into a coherent composition. Organizing your ideas makes order out of chaos. Planning your organization Drafting your paper will be much easier if you first plan the organization your work will follow. Here’s one way to plan your organization: Copy the ideas and information you’ve gathered onto note cards. Then, move the cards around until you find an organization that works. Planning your organization Most writing uses one or a combination of the following organizational patterns: • • • • Chronological order Spatial order Logical order Order of importance Planning your organization Chronological order Use chronological order to tell a story or explain a process. Present actions and events in the order in which they take place—first to last, earliest to latest, and so on. Stages of sleep REM (rapid eye movement); some muscles paralyzed body temperature drops; breathing & heart rate slow deep sleep; tissue growth & repair; slow breathing light sleep; muscle activity slows Planning your organization Chronological order Another strategy for arranging ideas in chronological order is to use a sequence chart or time line. sequence chart awake deep sleep; tissue growth and repair; slow breathing light sleep; muscle activity slows REM (rapid eye movement) body temperature drops; breathing and heart rate slow cycle repeats itself 5 more times (starting with light sleep) Planning your organization Chronological order time line Stage 1 Stage 2 Stage 3 Stage 4 Planning your organization Spatial order Use spatial order to describe a place, a person, or an object. Arrange your details or ideas according to their location in space: Description of • top to bottom, bottom to top • near to far, far to near • left to right, right to left • inside to outside, outside to inside Layers of the Earth outside to inside crust: outer layer; thinnest layer mantle: consistency of asphalt outer core: nickel and iron in liquid state core: heavy metals (nickel and iron) in solid state Planning your organization Spatial order In addition to using note cards, you can use a circle diagram or web diagram to show ideas in spatial order. circle diagram Layers of the Earth crust outside mantle outer core inner core inside to outside inside outside to inside Planning your organization Spatial order web diagram Top cereal crackers oatmeal Right Left canned vegetables soup pantry Bottom sandwich bags lunch boxes pasta rice Planning your organization Logical order You’ll use logical order when you want to explain or classify. Group related details or ideas together to show their relationship. • defining cone-shaped have a beak • dividing a topic teeth into parts spade-shaped • comparing and triangular teeth contrasting dorsal fin curved dorsal fin no beak Planning your organization Logical order You’ll use logical order when you want to explain or classify. Group related details or ideas together to show their relationship. Dolphins Porpoises • defining • dividing a topic cone-shaped spade-shaped into parts teeth teeth • comparing and contrasting have a beak no beak curved dorsal fin triangular dorsal fin Planning your organization Logical order Charts or Venn diagrams are also good ways to organize ideas and details in logical order. chart Dolphins Porpoises Teeth Cone-shaped Spade-shaped Dorsal fin Curved Triangular Beak Long None Planning your organization Logical order Venn diagram Dolphins • have a curved dorsal fin • have a beak • have coneshaped teeth Porpoises marine mammals • have a triangular dorsal fin • have no beak • have spadeshaped teeth Planning your organization Order of importance Use order of importance when you want to inform or persuade readers. Arrange your ideas from least to most important or least to most powerful (or vice versa). most important least important avoid the sun, especially at midday 1 wear protective clothing 3 avoid tanning beds/booths 4 wear sunscreen year round 2 check your skin regularly 5 have regular skin exams at your doctor 6 Planning your organization Order of importance Another way to arrange your ideas in order of importance is to use a pyramid diagram. avoid the sun at midday wear sunscreen year round wear protective clothing most important check your skin avoid tanning beds visit doctor least important Creating an outline With some types of writing, such as fact-based informative writing, an outline can be helpful in organizing both broad ideas and specific details. Thesis: Skin cancer, the most common type of cancer in America, can be prevented simply by protecting skin from the sun. I. Wear sunscreen year round. A. Choose a sunscreen with broadspectrum protection. 1. UVB protection 2. UVA-shorter wavelengths 3. UVA-remaining wavelengths B. Sunscreen needs to be reapplied every two hours. 1. after sweating 2. after swimming 3. after drying off Your Turn 1: Choose an order What kind of organization—spatial, logical, chronological, order of importance—would you use in writing about each of the topics below? Be prepared to discuss your answers. 1. a description of your room 2. the events of your day, so far 3. places you would like to visit 4. a comparison and contrast of your two favorite foods Your Turn 2: Arrange ideas Choose one of the topics below and brainstorm some ideas for writing about that topic. Come up with 10–12 ideas. Then, use one of the graphic organizers presented in this lesson to arrange your ideas. 1. a description of your room 2. the events of your day, so far 3. places you would like to visit 4. a comparison and contrast of your two favorite foods The End