PART 2
ESSAYS PREPARED BY LIZ
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ESSAY 01
Nowadays young people lack an understanding of how to manage their
finances after they finish high school. Explain why they do not know how
to manage money and how this can be changed.
I. Introduction
● Young people lack basic understanding of personal finance after leaving
school
● Lack of knowledge due to limited education and life experience
II. Causes of the problem
A. Dependence on parents for financial support
● No need to earn money or pay bills
B. Absence of personal financial management in schools
● Focus on traditional subjects, neglecting important life skills
III. Solutions
A. Parental involvement
● Teach children about earning, budgeting, and managing money
● Start with managing pocket money and progress to household expenses
B. Incorporating life skills in school curriculum
● Provide financial education for final year students
● Create a supportive environment for learning financial management
IV. Conclusion
● Financial management skills lacking due to negligence of parents and schools
● Solution requires increased responsibility from both parties
ESSAY 02
Advertising discourages us from being different and individuals eventually
look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I. Introduction
● Perception that advertising leads to people becoming more similar and
discourages individuality
● Personal opinion on advertising's impact on individual choices
II. Arguments for advertising promoting conformity
A. Role of advertising in promoting products and influencing consumer behavior
B. Fashion industry as an example
● Dictating colors, styles, and hair length
● Pressuring young people to appear fashionable and follow trends
● Resulting in less individuality for those easily influenced
III. Arguments against advertising promoting conformity
A. Limited impact of strict conformity to fashion trends
● Applies to a specific group of trendy individuals
B. Personal choices and preferences
● Interest in fashion trends without rigid adherence
● Selecting hairstyles and outfits suited to personal characteristics
● Displaying individual character through clothing choices
IV. Conclusion
● Majority of people prioritize personal selection and expression in fashion
● Fashion victims are a minority, while most individuals choose their own
clothing and appearance to reflect their true selves
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Đinh Thắng
A&M English Language Research Center
ESSAY 03
Some people believe that development of business results in a loss of
cultural ties between countries. Other people contradict this belief. Give
your opinion.
I. Introduction
● Argument that business negatively affects cultural ties between countries
● Disagreement and belief that international business encourages cultural ties
II. Argument against international business causing relationship loss
A. Availability of products from different countries
● Raises awareness and knowledge of these countries
B. Growing cultural respect and interest
● Increased travel to experience new cultures
● Example of cultural interest between China and Europe through the silk trade
III. Another argument against international business causing relationship loss
A. Transportation as a catalyst for cultural ties
● People traveling greater distances from their homes
B. Enduring cultural connections
● Examples of British travel to France and Egypt
● Business may occasionally disrupt relationships but cannot erase deep cultural
connections
IV. Conclusion
● Business does not lead to a loss of cultural ties between countries
● Business can foster new cultural ties and relationships
ESSAY 04
In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of
one’s own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or
negative development?
I. Introduction
● Growing popularity of exploring family background and history
● Belief that researching one's family can reveal common trends passed through
generations
II. Reason 1
● Uncovering shared skills and interests within the family
● Hereditary nature of certain gifts and talents
III. Reason 2
● Interest in understanding family's cultural origins
● Families adopting new cultures due to migration
● Importance of learning about the country of origin
IV. Final reason: The trend of researching family history (benefits)
● Addressing a lack of direction in life
● Using family history to relate to the world
V. Conclusion
● Exploring family history is beneficial for personal growth and understanding
● Importance of incorporating family history into education
ESSAY 05
Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to
face. Is this a positive or negative development?
I. Introduction
● Growing trend of people socializing online instead of in person
● Negative impact of online socialization on isolation, potential harm, and future
problems
II. Problem 1
● Shift from meeting friends in person to staying home and chatting online
● Increased time spent alone leading to potential depression and other issues
III. Problem 2
● Creation of fake identities and hiding true characteristics online
● Vulnerability of impressionable teenagers to dangerous situations
● Lack of parental monitoring and protection
IV. Problem 3
● Resurfacing of forgotten conversations and shared photos
● Potential embarrassment and negative impacts on individuals' lives
V. Conclusion
● Online socialization brings about numerous problems, making it a negative
trend
ESSAY 06
Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its
culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think
children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?
I. Introduction
● Art plays a fundamental role in society by allowing artists to express their
thoughts and culture
● Opinion that children should learn art but not at the expense of other subjects
II. First advantage of children learning art
● Art helps develop creativity and imaginative thinking in children
● Creative abilities of gifted children can be nurtured through the study of art
III. Another advantage of children learning art
● Children may lack linguistic capabilities to express ideas and emotions
● Art provides a means for children to convey meaning through pictures and
symbols
● Artwork of children can provide insights into their thoughts and feelings
IV. Personal view about focusing on art
● Art should not overshadow other subjects
● Children require a balance of all subjects for healthy mental and physical
development
● Importance of a well-rounded curriculum with art, sciences, languages, and
physical education
V. Conclusion
● Art is valuable for children's development but should be taught alongside other
subjects
● A balanced curriculum that includes art is essential for a holistic education.