LONGEST MEMORY Chapter 1, Whitechapel Non-linear structure Both texts play with the concept of time, but the way in which The Longest Memory is particularly worth interrogating. For extra help understanding this concept, Consider how the novella is framed by Whitechapel’s reflections (Remembering and Forgetting). The rest of the chapters take place between 1790 and 1810 and each explores a different point in time. This helps to create dramatic tension because readers know from the outset that Whitechapel has had to watch his son die. A quick summary of the chapter - Many reflections on death (Whitechapel reflects that he has heard many people die in their sleep) Cook dies after a long illness, and asks Whitechapel to promise that he will be with her in the afterlife soon. Soon after, Chapel runs away Whitechapel doesn’t want Chapel to die (although he knows this is likely) because he thinks Cook will be angry that he allowed Chapel to die before him Whitechapel meets with Mr Whitechapel to negotiate fair treatment for his son in exchange for information about his whereabouts. He thinks that his son deserves to be punished, but not to be killed. Summary pt 2 - Mr Whitechapel becomes increasingly angry and simply says that Chapel’s fate is in God’s hands A power struggle ensues but Whitechapel remains vague about his son’s location When Whitechapel reveals that his son has taken the river path, Mr Whitechapel promises that Chapel will not be harmed While Whitechapel is relieved, the other slaves are angry: the feel he has betrayed his son Mr Whitechapel needs to head north and tells his deputy that once Chapel is caught, he should be locked up to await the master’s return Chapel is captured and brought back to the plantation but the deputy is nowhere to be seen. Whitechapel realises that the deputy sneaks off to see his wife. Summary pt. 3 - Whitechapel tells Sanders Jnr of the master’s orders but SJ threatens to whip him if he keeps on speaking Whitechapel ignores this and SJ hits him across the face Whitechapel remembers that Sanders Senior was once punished for doing the same thing Chapel tries to attack the overseer but is held back by the men in the search party Whitechapel begs to be whipped in his son’s place but Sanders laughs at this and announces that Chapel will be whipped 200 times After Chapel dies, Whitechapel confronts his own role in the boy’s death. He realises he has outlived his loved ones and he, too, wishes to die Today: 1. For each of the quotes: a. Find the quote in your copy of the book. b. Read closely). c. Annotate for the following i. Key themes or ideas - what message is the author sending here? ii. Symbols, motifs, or literary devices - what techniques does the author use? iii. Insight into character - what do we learn about character/s through their actions, language, or what is said about them? iv. Comparisons to 7 Stages - in what ways is this similar or different? EXAMPLE: “Worry cut those paths in my face. I let it happen because I didn’t feel it happening and only knew it was there when someone called me Sourface one day and I looked in the mirror for evidence and found plenty staring back at me. “ What was I before this? I forget. Did I smile? Laugh out loud? Don’t recall. To laugh. What is that? I think of a Donkey braying. That is like a big laugh, involuntary, involving the whole body, noisy long and toothy. What could lead to such behaviour? There is nothing in my past to make me bray”. P 7 - 8 1. Key themes/ideas: this passage explores the ongoing impact of grief and trauma on Whitechapel by outlining the physical impact of his worry. It also explores the lasting impact that labels and names can have on a person’s identity. Although on p. 9 Whitechapel suggests that he doesn’t like being called “Sour-face”, here, he concedes that it is an accurate name. 2. Imagery is used to describe Whitechapel’s wrinkled appearance (worry cut those paths in my face). Later, a series of questions (e.g. What was I before this? / Did I smile?) serve as a reminder that Whitechapel’s life has long been void of happiness. 3. This passage reveals a lot about Whitechapel as a character through his reflections on himself. He seems to think that laughing is silly, frivolous behaviour. Here, readers are reminded of his past trauma but also of his sensible nature and integrity. 4. This stands in contrast to 7 Stages of Grieving because the play offer utilises humour to draw attention to serious topics. This is different to Whitechapel’s suggestion that “there is nothing in [his] past” that is humorous. WHITECHAPEL DESCRIBES COOK’S DEATH “Now that we speak across the years, without words, across the darkness of this life and her death. She asks me to hold her. But she was already too heavy with death for my arms. The pillows behind her head and back were compressed by her dying weeks. A slow death that took so long I willed it to come, get its work done and get out of my life. My son held her for me. He looked away to hide his wet eyes. p. 10 - 11 Key themes or ideas - what message is the author sending here? Death, grief, family → D’Aguiar is aiming to convey how family and grief are all interconnected and related. The death of a family member is shown to be extremely painful, especially having to see you love ones suffer as Whitechapel ‘willed [Cooks death] to come‘ Symbols, motifs, or literary devices - what techniques does the author use? In this passage D’Aguiar uses the motif of ‘eyes’ when Chapel ‘looked away to hide his wet eyes’. In the novel eyes are often used to portray character’s emotions thus the reader is made to see how upsetting the Death of Cook is for Chapel as his eyes are ‘wet’ from crying. D’Aguiar also personifies ‘death’ in this scene, willing it ‘to come, get its work done and get out of’ his life. This aims to convey the absolute presence of death in the novel and in the lives of the slaves, and how they have become used to it always hanging around. This links back to the personification of ‘the whip’ when it ‘ate into’ Chapel, showing how D’Aguiar constantly amplifies the destructive and animalistic nature of punish Insight into character - what do we learn about character/s through their actions, language, or what is said about them? This passage shows the readers how Whitechapel has already dealt with grief as he had to watch his wife slowly die. We can see the extent to his suffering as he “willed [her death] to come”, demonstrating how painful it was for him to watch his wife die a slow, painful death. : WHITECHAPEL RECALLS CHAPEL’S DEATH THE NEXT DAY “The next dawn he was gone and by dusk that same day, caught, and before night set in, he’d joined his mother with me leaning over him because he was too heavy to hold or cradle as I imagined I must have cradled him when he was young. I promised her I wouldn’t be long but I sent my son in my place less than a full day later. Now I can’t die because I can’t face her blaming me for sending him ahead of me, or in my place, or at all. My years since her death and his are stolen, cowardly, seen through bloody eyes…” p. 11 Key themes or ideas - what message is the author sending here? - - - Family (Natural order of death) → time Guilt - his role in his son’s death: “I sent my son in my place...I can’t face her blaming me for sending him ahead of me” → living in guilt Concept of time: Slave’s lives revolve around each day (“Stolen” years) Being left behind to grieve by yourself (“My son held her[Cook] for me”, “he was too heavy to hold or cradle”) - emotional (+physical) weight Symbols, motifs, or literary devices - what techniques does the author use? Eyes motif→ ‘bloody eyes’ Day and night (dusk and dawn) “Too heavy to hold” - too painful emotionally, and doing so would be an admission to his guilt (weight of guilt), it would be physically bearing the responsibility for his son’s death Insight into character - what do we learn about character/s through their actions, language, or what is said about them? Lives in guilt (feels like his years are stolen) - very sensitive to time as it is it something that provides him comfort and reassurance Family is important to him He has outlived everyone Whitechapel is a bit selfish (doesn’t want to die because he doesn’t want to face the consequences, he’s scared) - chooses isolation over guilt - - - - - Comparisons to 7 Stages - in what ways is this similar or different? Whitechapel similar to grandmother, both have authority and experience and connection to their original culture “Stolen” years → Stolen generation (living another person’s life, not living in your own time → “everyone has its time”) Euphemisms to describe death (“Sent my son”, when they talk about Nana in Seven Stages (“was taken from us, moved on. . .”) Rehearsal for death: in the same way that the Everywoman rehearses for her dad’s death, Whitechapel rehearses for his wife’s death, but was not prepared for his son’s death as it isn’t something he expected to experience during his lifetime - “catches us by surprise pg. 4” Both experience grief, Whitechapel blames himself, internalises the grief and channels it into selfblame, whereas in 7 Stages the Everywoman blames other people more WHITECHAPEL TRIES TO JUSTIFY CHAPEL’S DEATH “To my mind a simple lesson in obedience was all that my boy required.He needed to know his station sooner rather than too late. I believed some punishment would do him good because it would keep him alive by driving from his wild head, once and for all, an notion of freedom from responsibility. He was born owned by another man, like his father before him, and like his son would be born. tHis sounds straightforward enough, but from the increasing number of runaways, you wouldn’t think so. Where do runaways go when they get don’t get caught?” p. 12 i. ii. iii. Key themes or ideas - what message is the author sending here? Here, Whitechapel expresses his strong integrity and obedience in his role as a slave. He believes that this reality is inevitable, and that punishment is the only thing that will force his son into the same obedience he has learned to display in the presence of power. Symbols, motifs, or literary devices - what techniques does the author use? Whitechapel's retrospective reflection when ending with the question ‘where do runaways go when they dont get caught?’ aims to justify his involvement in chapel’s death. Insight into character - what do we learn about character/s through their actions, language, or what is said about them? We learn that Whitechapel is highly set in his ways towards the life of a slave, as he believes that it is an easier path to be complacent than dream of freedom. Therefore, this also demonstrates how much he cares about Chapel, as he wants him to “know his station rather than too late”, as Whitechapel thinks it will ultimately be best for his son’s future on the plantation. ● Comparisons to 7 Stages - in what ways is this similar or different? The willingness of Whitechapel to fulfill the expectations of a slave completely contrasts the desire for many of the Indigenous Australians in 7 Stages of Grieving to achieve equality. Whitechapel has accepted his ‘racial inferiority’, rather than fighting against it. WHITECHAPEL REFLECTS ON CHAPEL’S ESCAPE “There are two types of slave: the slave who must experience everything for himself before coming to an understanding of anything and he who learns through observation. The slave in the first category behaves as if he is the only slave in the world and is visited by the worst luck on earth. That type of slave is agitated, brings much trouble on his head and he makes the lot of every slave ten times worse. It is generally accepted that the slave in the second category is brighter, lives longer, cause everyone around him a minimum of worries and earns the small kindness of the overseer and the master. P. 14 Key themes or ideas: Power, generational, respect, following the rules obeying, acceptance, don’t resist, acceptance of situation/racism/class/position. Symbols, motifs, or literary devices - what techniques does the author use?: Juxtaposition of the two types of slaves - highlighting the differences between the generations and power, Connotations - “that type of slave is agitated, brings much trouble on his head” “the slave in the second category is brighter, lives longer” Insight into character - what do we learn about character/s through their actions, language, or what is said about them? : Whitechapel is very traditional and follows the rules, old-school mentality, accepting your place in life, he has internalised the racism he has experienced and thinks negatively of himself. Comparisons to 7 Stages - in what ways is this similar or different?: passing down knowledge/ greif, acceptance - stage of grief, difference between people’s grief/acceptance of situation MR WHITECHAPEL HEARS OF CHAPEL’S ESCAPE He was furious and appeared to judge my knowledge of my son’s whereabouts as some form of power over him, my master. This was cause enough for me to breathe deeply and cherish the air in his quarters that was perfumed and stale in equal parts. P. 16 Key themes or ideas - what message is the author sending here? D’Aguiar explores the theme of power in this passage as Mr Whitechapel becomes mad at Whitechapel for with-holding the information about his son’s whereabouts. This conveys that even though Mr Whitechapel is depicted as one of the more kind slave owners, he still values the power he had over his slaves. Symbols, motifs, or literary devices - what techniques does the author use? In this part of the chapter, the extent to which Whitechapel is respected and regarded positively amongst the white society is clearly evident, with him, a slave, being able to seek out his master’s quarters to talk to him face to face. Here, D’Aguiar highlights the power of loyalty and submission in earning respect in those superior to ourselves. D’Aguiar also labels the ‘air’ in Mr Whitechapel’s home as being ‘perfumed and stale in equal parts.’ The idea of air being ‘perfumed’ hints at luxury and superiority, also juxtaposing between the ‘body-shaped space on the straw mat’ that Whitechapel describes as his ‘residence’ at the beginning of the chapter. The fact that the air is also described as being ‘stale’ possibly links to the inhumane attitudes of the white plantation owners, who completely disregard the wellbeing of their slaves. Insight into character - what do we learn about character/s through their actions, language, or what is said about them? This passage reveals that Whitechapel chose to protect his son over his duty to his master. Despite eventually telling him, he still somewhat disobeyed his master as he used his “son’s whereabouts as some form of power over [his master]”. Here, this can be contrasted to when Whitechapel placed his duty for his master over his family when he deemed that “[it] seemed acceptable” that his master would not send a doctor to his dying wife. This shows the readers how Whitechapel did not completely place his duty to his master over his family at all times in the text. Comparisons to 7 Stages - in what ways is this similar or different? This is similar to the 7 Stages of Grieving as through withholding the knowledge of Chapel’s whereabouts, Whitechapel holds some kind of power and authority over Mr Whitechapel. In the 7 Stage of Grieving, sections of the play are written in an Indigenous language therefore allowing the ‘Everywoman’ to have power over the audience, with some audience members being unable to fully comprehend what is going on. Both D’Aguiar as well as Mailman and Enoch give the minority group a power that they usually do not hold in the society that the texts are set. MR WHITECHAPEL IS FURIOUS Key themes or ideas - what message is the author sending here? “It was the first time he’d called my by my name in a long time. To use my name in anger was the severest verbal form of disapproval my master could have shown me. For me, it was the verbal equivalent of a whip lash, what we call a tonguelashing. I winced and bowed as if a whip had boiled the air around my back” p. 17 - - - The importance of names and how they are tied to one’s identity - the way the use of names can be used to show power Physical vs emotional power (“verbal equivalent of a whip lash”) - emotional abuse of power is worse To choose to acknowledge a name in anger after disregarding his identity is much more powerful The power that some people can have over over another person - slave and slave owner Symbols, motifs, or literary devices - what techniques does the author use? ‘A whip had boiled the air around my back.’ Imagery such as boiled used to describe the heat and intensity, aims to convey pain and strength. whip → motif Simile Insight into character - what do we learn about character/s through their actions, language, or what is said about them? For Whitechapel, this was worse than being physically whipped, as he prides himself as being such a respected, diligent and valued slave, so for Mr Whitechapel to use his name in anger, it dismisses his worth and hard work in a way Comparisons to 7 Stages - in what ways is this similar or different? Names are important in 7 stages as well (“People called him Boonie! He was known as Boonie. . .”) Both Whitechapel and the Everywoman do not introduce themselves to the audience and give their name. Names have different connotations in 7 stages, Everywoman doesn't say her name because she wants her experience to reach all indigenous women. Whereas Whitechapel doesn’t acknowledge his name because he is upset or brings up bad memories. WHITECHAPEL ASKS FOR HIS SON TO BE SPARED “I put myself before Mr Sanders who frowned. i. ‘My son is all I have, sir. Spare him. Let me take ii. his place.’ Mr Sanders laughed aloud, brushed the air in front of his face as if to rid it of a pest and ordered that I be restrained for as long as it took iii. to administer 200 lashes to my son. When he said the number of lashes an astonished cry rose from the crowd and filled the early evening air. I began to struggle against the grip of two men who simply tightened their hold iv. on me and forced me to my knees. Fires were lit. Each flame conspired with the remaining scraps of light to drive away the ensuing darkness with no avail. Key themes or ideas - what message is the author sending here? Trauma, death, pain, family and courage. Symbols, motifs, or literary devices - what techniques does the author use? The symbolic use of fire/flames suggests that no amount of light will be able to overcome the “ensuing darkness”. This also connects to the fact that the reader is aware of Chapel’s impending death, suggesting that the darkness is coming. Insight into character - what do we learn about character/s through their actions, language, or what is said about them? Whilst Whitechapel remains steadfast to his obedience as a slave, he is willing to break free from such morals in order to attempt to save his sons life. Highlighting the importance of family to Whitechapel, but also the complete disregard for the life of a slave that Mr Sanders posesses. Comparisons to 7 Stages - in what ways is this similar or different? Both texts portray the inability of minority racial groups to stand up to authority, as they have little power or agency over any situation in which they are deemed to be punishable. MR WHITECHAPEL HEARS OF CHAPEL’S ESCAPE “So it is that my great grandson can knock me down, discard my fallen body, leave me winded and concussed and think nothing of it. Everyone, without exception, blames me for the death of my son. Run into me and kill me. Bludgeon me with a stick, overseer, I am a common slave. There is blood on my conscience. My memory is longer than time. I want to forget. I don’t want to see any more. I answer to ‘dog’. My great grandchildren run towards me and I sit down to avoid calamity and they laugh. They bray.” p. 26 Key themes or ideas - what message is the author sending here?: Whitechapel as accepted his situation and his position as a slave. This also explores the intergenerational divide and isolation whitechapel experience from his family and the more rebellious slaves. It also highlights how his grief is so overwhelming that he wishes to forget his pain. Acceptance, isolation, grief, death, memory, family, blame Symbols, motifs, or literary devices - what techniques does the author use?: “their is blood on my conscience” (metaphor?) , talking about himself in third person, his dead body (symbols) Insight into character - what do we learn about character/s through their actions, language, or what is said about them? “Discard my fallen body” - wants to die, he doesn't see himself Comparisons to 7 Stages - in what ways is this similar or different?: divide b/w generations, different in that WC thinks his grief is not passed onto his grandchildren, similar in that their memories can cause grief and pain