段落关系分析
Q&As, but the intro starts with providing a background (a historical issue) to develop readers some knowledge, and lead
the expert who works in this filed. * trivial info to evoke interest/ develop readers knowledge
段内内容，语法结构分析
*Use “the distinction” is more strongly tie to the
previous sentence. (better than just say “the
issue”, which is a bit vague)
用词分析
It was in the days before…
____to prevent the same thing happening to
other people.
.But it does a lot more.
_____ tell us to______ and to_______.
_______ was not alone in this.
,which all children need to have in case their
government fails them.
仿写
Topic: Students refuse to wear uniform in Assumption University.
When Assumption University established the rule that all students need to wear full uniform when they are in teaching
buildings, it also announced bunch of punishments that will occur to whoever does not follow this rule. Sixty years after
the university been operating, more and more students started to show their opponent opinions to this old school
discipline. = “tradition”
Student A: It was in the days before social media, which you do not have a big eager to show your personality by
changing looks every couple of hours. But now, if someone posts photos of wearing uniforms all the time, people will
think he is nerdy and has no characteristics.
Student B: Most of my friends have a record of not wearing uniform in some discipline officer’s computer. I don’t really
care about looks that much, so I always wear my uniform on campus. Though I do have a spare tie in my locker in case
one day I forget to wear the tie.
Student C: People simply think that it is the school’s ego to make the students wear uniforms. The unification kind of
telling people that hey the school has a good management and the students are professional. But in a way, as a student,
you do feel that you are in a community which everyone is at the same position when everyone wears their uniforms.
Student D: Students are calling for cancelling the rule of wearing uniforms or pointing a day in the week to be the “freestyle day”. ABAC is not alone in this. I have heard at least 6 friends from different universities to talk about this. I think
this is going to be the trend this year that at least some universities will allow students to wear whatever they want.