I can understand that it is quite[may seem quite] absurd to have our top engineers and managers play with children’s toy on company time, however, it indeed effects our company unify deeply. [can have a deep and positive affect on our company] Since there are some preceded examples making[precedents of this technique having been used] successfully in other companies, such as Nokia, Orange, why not we go through with an[stay open minded and ]open-minded view to give it a try? Further speaking, with Lego-playing there are some advantage within company and individual. [has advantages both for individuals and for the company] To accomplish a piece of work of[using] Lego blocks, there are two critical dimensions[which ] have to be observed: process and outcome. First, communication [this is fragment]. It must be a team work to complete this job when someone offers new ideas,[This is a job that can only be accomplished through teamwork]makes a plan or set a blue-print. By doing this, there are no more boundary[ies] between departments from different places. The whole team as a new[becomes a new group which must ]group communicate, negotiate and cooperate with each other. According [to] our company’s inner research, Itis common that the two persons [for two people] who come from different departments never have [to never have had] a chance to talk to for more than a year. Second, sufficiency.[frag] Through this competition, our employees will be stimulated to be a multi-tasker[ ing unit, able]to deal with any case under a limited time. Thirdly, corporate bounding. As you can see, to put something into practice need [requires] every single one’s effort which stand as the same position. Performing the final masterpiece is the core thinking when the morale of a team has been raising unconscious.[?] Moreover, there is another form of Lego game – each one do[es] it with their own ideas to consist of any shape he or she likes. Since alego system is established by piles of colorful plastic bricks which can be designed different molds with creation and imagination. It is very likely to unearth neglected talent from your employees, like many famous artists, representing through their work instead. On the other side, you may regard it as a process of pressure releasing or game therapy. It is probably difficult to tell someone his or her stress, but at this moment, the manager could ask the meaning of the work by understanding them more. From these advices above, you may take it into consideration, thank you. Sunny, pretty good explanation and argument, but grammar is a bit rough in places and sometimes your meaning isn’t that clear to me. 83