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Comparison & Contrast 各點中的比較要前後平衡
比較的各點有先後次序 (Valentina: Hello Kitty & Minnie)
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Ex. A) colors, b) wearing style, c) age & origin
比較時,各點中不能只有解釋某一邊, 而没有另一邊.
(Michelle)
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寫作是寫給外國人看的 (Ellen: KRC vs. MRT)
Essay:一個段落主題只能有一個, 不應優缺點同段
Essay: 要注意thesis statement, Intro is good?
Conclusion is good? Topic Sentence is good?
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Western wedding dress is usually white, means
virginity and innocence.
As how much you should prepare, it considers how
close you are.
Unlike Hello Kitty, the colors which Minnie has are
white, black, and red.
For students, they do not have enough money to
afford a computer.
They overuse eyes generate nearsighted especially
teenagers and young children.
You need a pair of knee-high socks with red heel,
cotton, and knitting yarn.