Descriptive Journal
Purpose: Write a 1-2 page vivid and sensory description of a person, place or event.
Due Date: Turn in portfolio with brainstorming notes, outline, first draft, revisions and final draft
on Wednesday, February 1.
Evaluation Criteria
Engage your audience: Grab your reader’s attention in your introduction, and clearly identity
the subject and purpose of your description.
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Use vivid and sensory details and imagery: Avoid vague, over-used or clichéd words and
expressions.
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Organize your Description: Provide a visual, thematic or chronological order to your
descriptions.
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Conclusion and Reflection: Explain why this description is meaningful or relevant to you or
your readers. Use connections or metaphors to describe what it is like.
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Editing: Use correct spelling, grammar and writing format.
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Average Score:
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GRADE:
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