Linda Heidenrich SED 600 Rethinking Scientific Literacy The premise behind this study was scientific literacy is increased in two critical ways: more prevalent use of writing about science and creation of an environment in which learning science is safe. This article was the fourth stage of a doctoral program for a math and science researcher in Australia. Her previous research highlighted two conditions critical to increased scientific literacy: the power relationship between teacher and student in addition to the need to belong to a meaningful learning community. Ms. Hanrahan tested this theory by creating an action research project involving twenty-four students ranging from 12-13 years of age at a private Catholic school in a lower socioeconomic area who had scored low on the literacy portion of the entry tests (Hanrahan, 1999, 702). She hypothesized affirmational dialogue journal writing would help students to be more scientifically literate. Affirmational dialogue journal writing requires the students to complete a journal entry expressing their feelings about a certain experiment, reflecting on a test or reflecting on previous experiences with science. The researcher then took these journal entries and responded to them in an affirmative manner focusing on the insight and suggestions the students offered. I commend Ms. Hanrahan for several aspects of her research. First, she committed eight months to this research and had the students respond to a variety of topics ranging from specific (the experiment completed that day) to the general (what has your experience in science been like?). In addition, she had the students use code names for their journal entries so they felt comfortable with providing honest answers as well as allowed her to publish the answers for the other students and her research paper. She addressed the students’ concerns in a classroom discussion format in addition to providing written feedback to the students. Ms. Hanrahan also triangulated her research by performing interviews with the students and the teacher in addition to making videotapes and corresponding transcripts of components of her study. Ms. Hanrahan also was an increasingly involved researcher, beginning with general observations, progressing to short activities with a lesson and ending with conducting an entire period of instruction and dialogue. By providing anonymity, being an active participant and triangulating her data, Ms. Hanrahan created a sound research project. Yet, my concerns with her research include the lack of participation on the part of the teacher and the lack of an obvious connection between her research and scientific literacy. Ms. Hanrahan provided the majority of the feedback for the students and then had a dialogue with the teacher regarding students’ comments due to the concern of placing additional time burdens on the teacher. Although this dynamic worked and the teacher made changes to his teaching based on these conversations, I felt the teacher should have been more involved in the journaling process. In addition, although Ms. Hanrahan’s research proved clearly student achievement increased overall, general literacy and writing competency increased, and behavior problems decreased due to increased ownership and buy-in for their science class, the connection was not clear that scientific literacy increased from this research study. This study reminded me to integrate journaling into my class on a regular basis because it allows students to feel ownership of the class, allows students the ability to write which is beneficial across the curriculum and allows students to reflect and think in a metacognitive way about the science curriculum. My students are similar to the students in this study in that they generally dislike science, have low writing skills and rarely have the chance to reflect on their learning. This study reminded me how critical overall literacy is to achieving scientific literacy. Hanrahan, Mary. (1999). Rethinking Science Literacy: Enhancing Communication and Participation in School Science through Affirmational Dialogue Journal Writing. Journal of Research in Science Teaching, 36, 699-717.