Word Choice & Sentence Structure INGL3202– Fall 2011 Nataly Rodriguez WORD CHOICE Wrong word choice can result in awkwardness, vagueness, and unclearness. Be careful when using words you are unfamiliar with. Make sure you know the meaning of the words you are using. Look for repetition, which sometimes can be good, but others it can be BAD. Avoid losing the message with wordiness. Be precise and clear. Avoid generalizations. Check spelling! WORD CHOICE: Transitions Not all transitions have the same usage. Location/ place: among, inside, over. Concluding: as a result, as we have seen, given these points. Clarification: in other words, put another way. Adding examples: In the same, additionally, likewise. WORD CHOICE: Commonly confused words There is a tendency to confuse words that look alike, sound alike, or both. THESE ARE NOT THE SAME Know Did you know the difference between these two words? Than These rules are harder than I expected. Now Hint: Know is a verb I did not, but I do now that you explained it to me. Then I understood the first example, and then got stuck on the rest. There There are 28 students in the classroom. Clothes I love wearing comfortable clothes like t-shirts and jeans. They’re They’re all very tired. Cloths Wipe your face with a damp cloth. Their Their eyes are closing! SENTENCE STRUCTURE Every complete sentence has a subject and a predicate. SUBJECT- What or whom the sentence is about. PREDICATE- Tells something about the subject and contains the verb. SENTENCE STUCTURE: Complete Sentence Example: Jonas runs. Subject Predicate Jonas and his dog run every morning. Subject Predicate SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Fragments If a sentence does not have both a subject and a verb, it is called a fragment. Fragment means “broken piece”. A fragment sentence is only a piece of a sentence, not a complete sentence. SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Fragments There are three problems a fragment can have: No subject Also loves to follow my teenage brother around. No verb He short for his age. No subject or verb And long, blonde hair. SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Run-on sentences A run-on sentence is two (or more) sentences joined without adequate punctuation or a connecting word. Run-on Sentence: I thought the ride would never end my eyes were crossed, and my fingers were numb. Corrected: I thought the ride would never end. My eyes were crossed, and my fingers were numb.