Writing a Literary Analysis What is Literary Analysis? • It’s literary • It’s an analysis • It’s-• An Argument! • It may also involve research on and analysis of secondary sources How is It “Literary”? • Usually, a literary analysis will involve a discussion of a text as writing, thus the term literary, which means “having to do with letters” • This will involve the use of certain concepts that are very specifically associated with literature Important Literary Concepts • The Basics – Plot – Setting – Narration/point of view – Characterization – Symbol – Metaphor – Genre – Irony/ambiguity • Other key concepts – Historical context – Social, political, economic contexts – Ideology – Multiple voices – Various critical orientations – Literary theory How Can I Learn More? • There are various handbooks of literary terms available in most libraries…and also on the Advanced English link on Mrs. Heller’s homepage. • There are numerous introductions to literary criticism and theory that are widely available…and also on the Advanced English link on Mrs. Heller’s homepage. • Example: A Handbook to Literature. Harmon/Holman … or in Ch 45, 46, and other back pages of your textbook What is an Analysis? • An analysis of a literary work may discuss – How the various components of an individual work relate to each other – How two separate literary works deal with similar concepts or forms – How concepts and forms in literary works relate to larger aesthetic, political, social, economic, or religious contexts How is Literary Analysis an Argument? • When writing a literary analysis, you will focus on specific attribute(s) of the text(s). • When discussing these attributes, you will want to make sure that you are making a specific, arguable point (thesis) about these attributes. • You will defend this point with reasons and evidence drawn from the text …and cited. (Much like a lawyer!) Which is the Best Thesis Statement? • • • • Moby-Dick is about the problem of evil. Moby-Dick is boring and pointless. Moby-Dick is about a big, white whale. The use of “whiteness” in Moby-Dick illustrates the uncertainty about the meaning of life that Ishmael expresses throughout the novel. How Do I Support a Thesis Statement? • Examples from the text: – Direct quotations – Summaries of scenes – Paraphrase • Other critics’ opinions • Historical and social context • Always remember to read carefully, take notes, and highlight useful passages and quotes What is a Secondary Source? • A book or article that discusses the text you are discussing • A book or article that discusses a theory related to the argument you are making • A book or article that discusses the social and historical context of the text you are discussing (Note: Not every paper will require secondary sources. Sometimes the instructor wants you to be the sole critic.) How Do I Find Secondary Sources? • MLA International Bibliography • Dictionary of Literary Biography • Discipline-specific sources – Example: America: History and Life for American literature • Other search engines…ask the librarian • A bibliography that is part of your text • Ask your instructor Integrating Secondary Sources • When you use secondary sources, be sure to show how they relate to your thesis • Don’t overuse any one secondary source, or for that matter, secondary sources in general • Remember that this is your paper, your argument—the secondary sources are just helping you out • Never, never, never plagiarize. See the OWL handout on plagiarism for more information. Overview of Literary Analysis • When writing a literary analysis: – Be familiar with the piece you are analyzing – Read … reread…and study the piece carefully – Ask “why” often…question your own ideas – Be familiar with literary terms – Analyze specific items – Make an a argument – Make appropriate use of secondary sources – Consult instructors and tutors for help when needed … discuss your opinion with peers How do I write the paper? • Be sure to understand the assignment: – Reread the paper rubric. – Know what is expected. • Be organized – plan: – Create a basic outline. An outline…even a skeleton outline…will help you sort out your points, the order in which you need to present them, and the details you will use as support. • Be original, memorable, and creative: – Within the rubric, display your writing skills. How should I prepare my first draft for submission? • Use the spell check and your brain: – Check spellings…especially those from the story or ones the computer doesn’t catch. – Look for punctuation problems. – Read your paper aloud to analyze fluency. – Skim the paper for excessive “there are” phrases. – Skim the paper for unintentional repetition. – Analyze your use of words…be concise, not wordy. – Look at old papers and don’t make the same mistakes over and over…know yourself. What is a helpful peer review? • Read for an overall impression: – Does the writer create a persuasive argument? – Are the mistakes in conventions distracting? • Read for organizational confusion – Point out the confusion – Suggest reorganizational techniques • Read to comment on focus: – Is there an attention-getting hook in the intro? – Is there an arguable thesis statement in the intro? – Does the writer embark on tangents or digress? What is a helpful peer review? • Correct conventional errors: – Point out mistakes in English conventions – Suggest solutions • Question word choices: – Point out mistakes or poor choices in word use – Suggest solutions • Comment on tone and academic analysis: – Is the tone appropriately serious and formal? – Are appropriate textual reference s– ones that really work – included as supporting details? – Does the paper sound juvenile or did the writer try to challenge himself? (effort) – Suggest solutions What is a helpful peer review? • Correct MLA formatting errors: – – – – – – – – Last name and page in .5 inch header Times New Roman size 12 font One-inch margins all around All double-spaced lines Proper information in header Interesting title, centered Parenthetical citations following quoted lines of text. Works Cited or inclusion of text in paper How do I improve my final paper? • Read both peer reviews: – Ask questions of the peer reviewer – Know that not all peer review comments may be good comments…but they may alert you to problems. • Read your paper again with a critical eye: – Now that you haven’t read your paper in a bit, you may notice other improvements you could make. – Be critical of your own writing – Good enough is never “good enough” until you run out of time and the final submission is due. Where Can I Go for More Help? • • • • • The Purdue University Writing Lab 226 Heavilon Hall 494-3723 And visit http://owl.english.purdue.edu Or email owl@owl.english.purdue.edu The End