ENGL1A Exam 3 Study Guide Exam date: Monday, 11-16 Exam 3 • 100 points total • Sentence errors: 50 points – You will have to identify c-s, r-o, and frag. • Definition paragraph: 25 points • Evaluation paragraph: 25 points Fixing sentence errors • Run-on (r-o) sentence: I study at Chaffey College I live in Santa Monica. • Comma-splice (c-s) sentence: I study at Chaffey College, I live in Santa Monica. • We must join the two independent clauses properly. • There are 4 “fixes” for these problems. 1) Make 2 sentences • R-O: I study at Chaffey College I live in Santa Monica. • C-S: I study at Chaffey College, I live in Santa Monica. • Simply put a period between the two independent clauses. • I study at Chaffey College. I live in Santa Monica. 2) Use a ,FANBOYS • • • • R-O: I study at Chaffey College I live in Santa Monica. C-S: I study at Chaffey College, I live in Santa Monica. Use the appropriate FANBOYS. I study at Chaffey College, but I live in Santa Monica. – Here, BUT is a good choice, because it shows contrast. 3) Use a ; (semi-colon) • R-O: I study at Chaffey College I live in Santa Monica. • C-S: I study at Chaffey College, I live in Santa Monica. • I study at Chaffey College; I live in Santa Monica. – Here, ; does not need any further help. It is used on its own. 4) Use a ; transition, • R-O: I study at Chaffey College I live in Santa Monica. • C-S: I study at Chaffey College, I live in Santa Monica. • I study at Chaffey College; however, I live in Santa Monica. – Here, ; must be accompanied by: • Transition word/phrase + , • FANBOYS are NOT appropriate for this option Complex sentence • You can always just turn one of the independent clauses into a dependent clause. • R-O: I study at Chaffey College I live in Santa Monica. • C-S: I study at Chaffey College, I live in Santa Monica. • Although I study at Chaffey College, I live in Santa Monica. – This is now a complex sentence, not a compound sentence. Fragment • Is an incomplete sentence. • Because I like her. • There is a subject + verb, but this is a dependent clause (not a complete thought). • For example, Kobe Bryant’s win-loss record with the Lakers. • Often, examples are “afterthought” fragments. • To fix fragments: – Add something – Attach it to the sentence before or after. Fragment • To spot fragments: Cover your paper and read it backward (from the last sentence to the first sentence). – Reading the sentences in isolation forces you to consider the grammar of them. • To fix fragments: – Add something – Attach it to the sentence before or after. More practice… • Worksheets & interactive exercises: http://www.chompchomp.com/handouts.htm Definition & Evaluation • Remember to make your definitional aspects & evaluation criteria specific. • Evaluation: You must show how the object you’re evaluating meets the criteria you have set. • For this exam, your paragraphs should have clear topic sentences and transitions showing when you’re moving from one aspect/criterion to the next.