1 Sara Robinson Dr. Stephen Mooney English 2406 October 14, 13 The Draftsman Behind Life’s Blueprint A spider traps its prey in its web. The prey soon faces a slow, painful death as it knowingly squirms to remove itself from the sticky, complicated web. Is there pride as the spider masters survival, or is there sadness as the prey meets its final hour? According to Robert Frost’s, “Design” and James Still’s, “Pattern for Death,” we should be less wary about this microscopic phenomenon and more wary about what this means macroscopically. If this predetermined murderous side of nature happens regularly to a spider’s prey what is the dark fate that we face as humans? When exploring Frost’s “Design,” the poet tells of witnessing a spider eating a moth on top of a flower (Frost 1-8). This summary sounds like a simple occurrence, however, the further details within the poem prove otherwise. First, it is important to notice that the color, white, plays a prevalent role in this poem. The spider is, “fat and white” (Frost 1), and the moth is, “like a paper kite” (Frost 8). The flower is a heal-all, which is a typically blue flower. However, in this poem the heal-all is a rare white (Frost 2). Frost even notices this rarity when writing, “What had that flower to do with being white” (Frost 9). Contrary to the normality of white representing purity and goodness, Frost used the color white to create a paradox between innocence and malevolence (Brower 1). Frost sums up the dark undertone of this poem in stanza 1, line 4, when he writes, “Assorted characters of death and blight” (Frost 4). By using microscopic subjects such as the moth, the spider, and the heal-all, Frost alludes 2 to a more macroscopic pondering of life’s occurrences in the final stanza (Mooney 3 Oct. 2013 1). Frost completes the stanza in writing, “What but design of darkness to appall?−/If design govern in a thing so small” (Frost 13014). These lines sum up the poem’s idea, “finding evil in innocence.” (Student Academic Help 1) “Design of darkness” (Frost 13) asserts the beauty yet danger behind the situation. The reader is evoked to think of the “design” (Frost 13) in the poem as a beautiful spider web- the home of a handsome, fat spider. However, writing “of darkness” (Frost 13) to describe the web changes the delicate connotation. The web appears beautiful but is actually a trap leading to a horrific death. The final line uses the strong verb, “govern” (Frost 14) to show that a higher power is ruling this situation hence ruling all of nature. The ending of this poem leaves readers with worrisome thoughts: is a higher power malevolent, what if we are just playthings for higher powers, is there any sympathy for Earth’s creatures? (Mooney 3 Oct. 2013 1). James Still, known as the Dean of Appalachian Literature (West 1), explicitly connotes the dark meaning behind his poem in the title, “Pattern for Death.” Like Frost, Still also concentrates on the subject matter of a spider, while also conveying paradoxes to the reader (Still 1-12). In the poem the spider is described as being beautiful but a killer. Still portrays the beauty of the spider in describing how he delicately, “puzzles his legs” (Still 1) around his web, and also in deeming the spider, “clever,” “fastidious,” and “intricate” (Frost 5). The spider’s sadistic side is only displayed in brief facades. He makes a web of, “cords of hate” (Still 6) and quickly kills his prey with, “lust”- also being a known sin (Still 10). James Still ventures from the image of the spider in order to ask readers insightful questions in the final lines of the poem (Mooney 16 Oct. 2013 1). “Who reads the language of direction” (Still 11). By using “Who” (11), Still acknowledges a human higher power (Mooney 3 16 Oct. 2013 1). “Reads” and “direction” (Still 11) convey an image of a higher power following a blueprint for all life on Earth. This image leads readers to wonder if the future, both personal and global, is predetermined. The poem ends with, “Where may we pass/ Through the immense pattern sheer as glass” (Still 11-12). The use of “sheer as glass” (Still 12) conveys the image of an unseen screen- the barrier between life on Earth and the higher world where the creator resides (Mooney 16 Oct. 2013 1). “Where may we pass” (Still 11) carries a sense of traveling to the life of the higher power once our blueprint is complete. This is a reference to death. It evident that in both poems the synonyms, “pattern” (Still 1) and “design” (Frost 1) contain microscopic literal occurrences yielding macroscopic abstract meanings. The usage of spiders in both poems provides imagery of complex webs, further verifying the usage of, “pattern” and “design” on a small scale. However, as signified by the final stanza in “Design” and the final couplet in “Pattern for Death,” it is also evident that the imagery of design is also used to conjure deeper thoughts of universal meaning (Mooney 16 Oct. 2013 1). Robert Frost’s, “Design” is in the form of the oldest type of Italian sonnet: the Petrarchan sonnet. As in all sonnets, “Design” has 14 lines. In a Petrarchan sonnet the first stanza is an octave, and the second stanza is a sestet. Since the subject of “Design” is a spider, there is a noticeable correlation between the number of legs on a spider and the number of lines in the first stanza (Mooney 25 Sept. 2013 1). It is not until the second stanza, that Frost dabbles in asking his readers reflective questions beyond the physicality of the spider and its surroundings. Unlike “Design,” Still’s “Pattern for Death” contains 12 lines: the first stanza being a sestet, the second stanza being a quatrain, and the final stanza being a couplet (Mooney 8 Oct. 2013 1). Akin to Frost’s poem, “Pattern for Death” saves the reflective, worrisome questions for the readers until the final stanza. 4 Lastly, it is important to note that “Design” (1936) (Mooney 25 Sept. 2013 1) and “Pattern for Death” (1937) (Mooney 3 Oct. 2013 2) were both published during prime years of the modernist era. Robert Frost was known as a poet stuck between the changing times of the nineteenth century and the new revelations and discoveries coming from times of modernism. Frost is known for having a conventional poem style, but practicing erratic rhymes within his works, dealing with imaginative thoughts that attempt to get his peers to think and act wisely. As representing in the conflicting ideas in “Design,” it seems that Frost himself was facing issues choosing between nineteenth century conventionalism and accepting modernist theories and practices (The Poetry Foundation 1). This is also further explored by the use of the simile, “Like the ingredients of a witches’ broth” (Frost 6). It is known throughout history that classic medicinal women during colonial times were accused of being too modern or magical in their practices. This ultimately led to the Salem witch trials, which killed many innocent women. This historical reference in “Design” serves to reiterate the confusion and mal-acceptance of new ideals (Mooney 25 Sept. 2013 2). Knowing the time period and ironic similarities between Still’s, “Pattern for Death” and Frost’s “Design” it is observant to say that Still was facing a sort of identity crisis as well when dealing with modern times and values (West 141). In “Pattern for Design” Still writes: “He is clever, he is fastidious, and intricate; He is skilled with his cords of hate Who can escape through the grass: The crane-fly Quivers its body in paralytic sleep;” (Still 5-8) These lines lead one to think that Still recognizes the good in modernist theories. However, the ill feelings of abandoning nineteenth century life and ideals (West 141) could be traced through 5 stills use of, “hate” (Still 6) and “paralytic sleep” (Still 8). It is possible that Still regards modernists as the complex spiders: smart but vicious, while regarding those with nineteenth century ideals as simple crane flies (Still 7): set in their ways but ultimately coming to a terrifying end. Key words and phrases in both poems can reflect the poets’ mixed feelings regarding the changing times, hence leading into their final thoughts on a higher power’s control found in both works. For example, as previously mentioned, Frost notes the rareness of seeing a white spider, heal-all, and moth (Frost 9-12). However, he gives the innocence of the color negative connotations when describing their surroundings with distinct, menacing adjectives such as “rigid” (Frost 3), “witches’ broth” (Frost 6), and “thither” (Frost 12). Still’s poem also pairs the fragility of his surroundings with thoughts of death and darkness. He contrasts phrases of wholesome connotation such as, “quiet design” (Still 3), “ladder of silk” (Still 4), and “no winds stir” (Still 2) with paradoxical phrases such as, “quivers its body in paralytic sleep” (Still 8), “cords of hate” (Still 6), and “speeds his lust” (Still 10). The modernist era proved worrisome for many living during this time of rapid change. Robert Frost and James Still use examples from nature to convey both beauty and destruction that can come from every day occurrences. What may seem as a success to one being can yield a threatening sense of terror to another being. Reading of the moth’s death leads readers to ask themselves questions about their own lives. If something this natural yet sadistic happens regularly in nature then is this phenomenon a small-scale representation of our own lives? Is our fate already sealed by a higher power from the moment we are born? According to Frost and Still the answer to these questions is “yes”. 6 Works Cited "A Critical Analysis of Robert Frost's "Design"" Web log post. Student Academic Help. N.p., 28 Oct. 2010. Web. 16 Oct. 2013. <http://studentacademichelp.blogspot.com/2010/10/critical-analysis-of-robert frosts.html>. Brower, Reuben A. "On "Design"" On "Design" University of Tennessee Press, 1993. Web. 16 Oct. 2013. <http://www.english.illinois.edu/maps/poets/a_f/frost/design.htm>. Frost, Robert. “Design.” Class Handout. English 2406: Introduction to Critical Reading. Dr. Stephen Mooney. Fall 2013. 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