Emma Jenny
Manawa 5
October 28, 2014
JOURNAL #3
The speech that I enjoyed the most was the Exposity speech. I really enjoyed
that we could choose our own topic that we were passionate about. My topic of
dieting hit really close to home for me. I time managed this speech really well by
giving myself more then enough time to correctly research and format all points that
I was portraying. I also enjoyed being “exposed” to everyone else’s speeches. It was
very interesting and entertaining to look at everyone’s facts and PowerPoint
presentations.
My weakness as a communicator is when we have to act to be another
character (in future units that we previewed). Personally, I am not very good at
being something that I am not. It was hard for me during class to put myself in
another characters shoes. Because I had to pretend to be Kumu Hilama, I knew
exactly what I had to do, yet failed to deliver the speech as I planned. I plan to keep
working on specific body characteristics and voices reflecting that character to help
the audience become more engaged in future impromptu speeches I deliver.
If I could have a do-over of any speech, I would definitely choose the debate.
I procrastinated this speech a lot. Even though we knew our topics, I failed to
research articles and information about my free preschool topic. I also did not see
the outline on edmodo, and put my information into it super last minute. I felt like
my opponent, Nohea, always had a “one-up” on me. If I started researching earlier
and devoted more time into preparation, my argument would have been much
stronger.
Emma Jenny
Manawa 5
October 28, 2014
My strengths as a communicator definitely include being passionate and my
tone of communication. I always try to put a little bit of my heart into my speech.
Personally, it is difficult for me to plan out speeches word for word. I enjoy just
letting the words flow based on the topic that I am talking about. Another strength I
have is my tone of voice. I try to speak with enthusiasm and always make sure my
voice is loud enough for the audience members in the back to hear. No one wants to
listen to a speaker without any life in his or her voice.
I think the most important thing to consider while giving a speech is having
confidence. A speaker can do this by speaking loudly, not hesitating to say facts,
making eye contact with all audience members, and practicing your speech before
hand. If you sound sure of what you are talking about (even if you are not sure),
people will believe you. Using ethos, pathos, and logos will help you win any
persuasive argument. Another key thing to consider when giving a speech is
connecting with your audience on a personal level. Any humorous lines or funny life
stories will make your audience “trust you”, and be more interested in what you are
saying.
Now that I have had a chance to write my own speeches, I have learned that
supporting details are more important then I thought. My tips to future
speechwriters include; RESEARCH, RESEARCH, RESEARCH. Another important
aspect to consider while writing a speech is the introduction and conclusion. Your
introduction is the first thing your audience hears from you. It is important to
“hook” them and get them to have an insight on your personal life. Your conclusion
Emma Jenny
Manawa 5
October 28, 2014
is also vital to your speech because you want to end with a “bang” to make your
speech something to remember.
In the future, I plan to take my challenges and make them into my strengths.
Some things I plan to do include not procrastinate, deliver my speeches with
confidence, research facts from dependable/trustworthy resources, make eye
contact with all members of the audience, and learn how to use my body.
Sometimes I feel awkward when delivering speeches. I need to learn how to let the
butterflies in my stomach go while talking.