Daily SOL Writing Practice Grade 3 Week 10 Exploring Mr. Miller’s class has been studying explorers. Mr. Miller asked his students to pretend they were one of the first explorers. He wanted each student to write a diary entry as if they were an explorer traveling to the New World. Mr. Miller wants his students to be creative when writing their diary entry. Jeremy wants to pretend he is Christopher Newport. Jeremy made these notes. Explorer Ships • Susan Constant • Discovery • Godspeed • to discover riches 1 Which detail is in the wrong place on Jeremy’s chart? Reasons for Exploring • to find a western sea route to Asia • to colonize the New World 2 Successes • landed at present day Jamestown • made four more voyages to bring more people to Jamestown Which of these should Jeremy write in the box labeled “Explorer”? A Susan Constant F Christopher Newport B to find a western sea route to Asia G rough seas C landed at present day Jamestown H needed money D to discover riches J wooden ships provided by Simply Achieve, Inc. Daily SOL Writing Practice Grade 3 Week 10 Answer Sheet – For Teacher Use Question Correct Answer VA SOL Essential Understanding Correlation 1 D 3.10aa – generate ideas and plan writing 2 F 3.10aa – generate ideas and plan writing Notes to Teacher: The multiple choice component of Standards of Learning writing tests are composed of a series of brief scenarios, each of which defines a writing task for a specific audience. The first questions asked will address planning or prewriting. provided by Simply Achieve, Inc. Daily SOL Writing Practice Grade 3 Week 10 Read the first part of Jeremy’s rough draft. Use it to answer the questions below. (1)Dear Diary, (2)We have been at sea for 87 days now. (3)We must be close to land. (4)It is not nice here. (5)Many men are sea sick. (6)I am glad to have Captain John Smith sailing with me. (7)He is a strong leader. (8)I am sure that he will do good things in the New World. 3 How can sentence 4 be written with the MOST description? A It is not nice on the boat. B It is very bad on the boat C It is cold and the sea is very rough. D It is very hard to sail. 4 The beginning format of Jeremy’s rough draft shows that he is writing – F a story G a letter H an explanation J a report provided by Simply Achieve, Inc. Daily SOL Writing Practice Grade 3 Week 10 Answer Sheet – For Teacher Use Question Correct Answer VA SOL Essential Understanding Correlation 3 C 3.9de – create verbal pictures, using precise nouns, verbs, and adjectives, that elaborate ideas within a sentence 4 G 3.10bc – follow the organization of particular forms of writing Notes to Teacher: During the revising stage of the writing process students will revise for organization, specific vocabulary, and specific information. To assist students in developing these skills direct instruction must take place on grouping like information into clear paragraphs, ordering paragraphs so there is a logical flow of information and including vivid vocabulary in their writing. Working with students to replace “tired” words in their writing with “lively” ones will boost their vocabulary. Writer’s workshop mini-lessons provide the perfect opportunity to model the use of “vivid vocabulary” and passage organization. The Standards of Learning writing assessments provide students with a rough draft. The rough draft is divided into two sections. The first section will have which require revisions such as the inclusion of a sentence that does not belong or two sentences that need to be combined. Questions following the first section of the rough draft will require students to correct errors by choosing the correct revision from the answer choices provided. provided by Simply Achieve, Inc. Daily SOL Writing Practice Grade 3 Week 10 Read the second part of Jeremy's rough draft. Use it to answer the questions below. (9)All of the ships have worked hard over the last 87 days. (10)The Susan Constant, the Discovery, and the Godspeed are good. (11)When I was a boy my father gave me a toy boat. (12)The Discovery has been able to keep up with the other ships. (13)The men have been watching her carefully ever since the sail broke. 5 How can sentence 10 be written with the MOST description? A B The Susan Constant, the Discovery, and the Godspeed are very good. The Susan Constant, the Discovery, and the Godspeed are really great. C The Susan Constant, the Discovery, and the Godspeed are okay. D The Susan Constant, the Discovery, and the Godspeed are well built ships. 6 Which sentence should be removed because it does NOT focus on the topic? F sentence 10 G sentence 11 H sentence 12 J sentence 13 provided by Simply Achieve, Inc. Daily SOL Writing Practice Grade 3 Week 10 Answer Sheet – For Teacher Use Question Correct Answer VA SOL Essential Understanding Correlation 5 D 3.9de – create verbal pictures, using precise nouns, verbs, and adjectives, that elaborate ideas within a sentence 6 G 3.10dd – clarify writing when revising by including specific vocabulary and information Notes to Teacher: During the revising stage of the writing process students will revise for organization, specific vocabulary, and specific information. To assist students in developing these skills direct instruction must take place on grouping like information into clear paragraphs, ordering paragraphs so there is a logical flow of information and including vivid vocabulary in their writing. Working with students to replace “tired” words in their writing with “lively” ones will boost their vocabulary. Writer’s workshop mini-lessons provide the perfect opportunity to model the use of “vivid vocabulary” and passage organization. The Standards of Learning writing assessments provide students with a rough draft. The rough draft is divided into two sections. The first section will have which require revisions such as the inclusion of a sentence that does not belong or two sentences that need to be combined. Questions following the first section of the rough draft will require students to correct errors by choosing the correct revision from the answer choices provided. provided by Simply Achieve, Inc. Daily SOL Writing Practice Grade 3 Week 10 Read the third part of Jeremy’s rough draft. Use it to answer the questions below. (14)Captain john smith has worked hard to keep the men aboard safe. (15)He has encouraged us with stories of freedom and riches. (16)I hope to find gold silver gems and other riches. 7 In sentence 14, Captain john smith should be written – A captain john smith B Captain John Smith C captain John Smith D as it is 8 How is I hope to find gold silver gems and other riches. from sentence 16 BEST written? F I hope to find gold, silver gems, and other riches. G I hope to find gold, silver, gems, and other riches. H I hope to find gold silver, gems and other riches. J as it is provided by Simply Achieve, Inc. Daily SOL Writing Practice Grade 3 Week 10 Answer Sheet – For Teacher Use Question Correct Answer VA SOL Essential Understanding Correlation 7 B 2.12cd – capitalize all proper nouns and all words at the beginning of sentences 8 G 3.11eg – punctuate correctly; commas in a simple series Notes to Teacher: During the editing stage of the writing process students will edit for usage and mechanics. The Standards of Learning writing assessments provide students with a rough draft. The rough draft is divided into two sections. The first section will have which require revisions such as the inclusion of a sentence that does not belong or two sentences that need to be combined. Questions following the first section of the rough draft will require students to correct errors by choosing the correct revision from the answer choices provided. Students will be required to answer which represents correct usage or mechanics. In some cases there will be no error and the correct answer will be “as it is” provided by Simply Achieve, Inc. Daily SOL Writing Practice Grade 3 Week 10 Read the final part of Jeremy’s rough draft. Use it to answer the questions below. (17)We have already learned a lot on our trip. (18)When I reach the New World. (19)I will get started planning my next trip. (20)I hope to bring many more people to the New World. (21)We will create new lives. (22)Signed, (23)Christopher Newport 9 Which sentence is NOT a complete sentence? 10 How should will create from sentence 21 be written? A sentence 17 F will creating B sentence 18 G will created C sentence 19 H will creative D sentence 20 J as it is provided by Simply Achieve, Inc. Daily SOL Writing Practice Grade 3 Week 10 Answer Sheet – For Teacher Use Question Correct Answer VA SOL Essential Understanding Correlation 9 B 3.11aa – use complete sentences 10 J 3.11cc – use past and present verb tenses Notes to Teacher: During the editing stage of the writing process students will edit for usage and mechanics. The Standards of Learning writing assessments provide students with a rough draft. The rough draft is divided into two sections. The first section will have which require revisions such as the inclusion of a sentence that does not belong or two sentences that need to be combined. Questions following the first section of the rough draft will require students to correct errors by choosing the correct revision from the answer choices provided. Students will be required to answer which represents correct usage or mechanics. In some cases there will be no error and the correct answer will be “as it is” provided by Simply Achieve, Inc.