Modes of Discourse Introduction & Illustration Modes of Discourse • Mode = method (HOW) • Discourse = communication / discussion • In terms of written communication, we classify 9 main modes of discourse – Illustration, Narration, Description, Process Analysis, Definition, Division and Classification, Comparison and Contrast, Cause and Effect and Argument. Illustration • The use of examples – facts, opinions, samples and anecdotes or stories – to make ideas more concrete and to make generalizations more specific and detailed. • Examples enable writers not just to tell but also to show what they mean. The more specific the example, the more effective it is. • Sometimes, one long example is used to illustrate a point. Other times, multiple examples are given. Illustration Example The following single example is effective because it is representative — that is, essentially similar to other such problems Hall might have described and familiar to many readers. Hall tells the story with enough detail that readers can understand the couple’s feelings and so better understand the point he is trying to make. Illustration Example Whenever there is a great cultural distance between two people, there are bound to be problems arising from differences in behavior and expectations. An example is the American couple who consulted a psychiatrist about their marital problems. The husband was from New England and had been brought up by reserved parents who taught him to control his emotions and to respect the need for privacy. His wife was from an Italian family and had been brought up in close contact with all the members of her large family, who were extremely warm, volatile, and demonstrative. When the husband came home after a hard day at the office, dragging his feet and longing for peace and quiet, his wife would rush to him and smother him. Illustration Example Continued Clasping his hands, rubbing his brow, crooning over his weary head, she never left him alone. But when the wife was upset or anxious about her day, the husband’s response was to withdraw completely and leave her alone. No comforting, no affectionate embrace, no attention – just solitude. The woman became convinced her husband didn’t love her and, in desperation, she consulted a psychiatrist. Their problem wasn’t basically psychological but cultural. Illustration Example Continued In contrast, another writer supports his topic sentence about superstitions with ten examples: In the folklore of the country, numerous superstitions relate to winter weather. Back-country farmers examine their corn husks — the thicker the husk, the colder the winter. They watch the acorn crop — the more acorns, the more severe the season. They observe where white-faced hornets place their paper nests — the higher they are, the deeper will be the snow. They examine the size and shape and color of the spleens of butchered hogs for clues to the severity of the season. They keep track of the blooming of dogwood in the spring — the more abundant the blooms, the more bitter the cold in January. When chipmunks carry their tails high and squirrels have heavier fur and mice come into country houses early in the fall, the superstitious gird themselves for a long, hard winter. Without any scientific basis, a wider-than-usual black band on a woolly-bear caterpillar is accepted as a sign that winter will arrive early and stay late. Even the way a cat sits beside the stove carries its message to the credulous. According to a belief once widely held in the Ozarks, a cat sitting with its tail to the fire indicates very cold weather is on the way. Illustration Model Essay • Read the model essay entitled, “Let’s Think Outside the Box of Bad Clichés” and take notice of the use of examples in his essay • In your notes, answer the following question: Does Pence use one long example or many examples to prove his point? Is it effective? Classroom Activity Using Illustration • Choose one of the following statements (choose one that you agree with, if possible) – – – – – Miracles can happen. Sports can change your life. Hard work pays off in the end. God exists. Good friends will always stick by you. • Now think of a real example from your life (or the life of someone you know) that proves that statement true. Describe that event in detail and explain how it proves the statement true.