Reading & Analyzing Essay Chapter 3 Pages 145-155 (make sure your read these 10 pages) Types of Essays • Narrative • Expository • Argumentative • Note: think of these types “as degrees of emphasis rather than discrete or exclusive types” (Madden 146). Narrative • Tells a story • Usually springs from an event or experience in the writer’s life • Intension is to make a point, present an idea, or make an argument. • Contains person comments, reflections, and opinions. • Voice • Narrator feels frustration, pain, or joy Expository • Share, explain, suggest, or explore information, emotion, and ideas. • Although the narrative may use stories as examples or may imply an argument or position, the key to telling the difference is the emphasis on showing and sharing insight not primarily on telling a story or making an argument. Argumentative • Proves a point by supporting it with evidence • Includes facts, statistics, examples, & personal anecdotes • Example: “A Modest Proposal” LANGUAGE, STYLE, AND STRUCTURE Formal vs. Informal • Formal • Topic: Serious • Tight, clear structure & strategy • Voice is impersonal & detached • Support is from facts, data, or statistics • Language is formal; it doesn’t use everyday words or phrases. • Complex or classic structure • Classic structure- intro includes an attention grabber & thesis, body includes details and examples, and the conclusion restates the support for the thesis and leaves the reader enlightened and convinces. Formal vs. Informal • Informal • Topic: lighthearted and serious • Relies on detail, emotion, narrative, and personal examples for support • Words & sentence structure is conversational and informal with everyday phrases, dialogue, narration, imagery, and figurative language. • Structure emerges from the subject matter rather than a strict structure. Voice • Individual personality that comes alive in the words. • Tone- author’s attitude towards the subject; readers pick up the tone through the voice. • Think about how you pick up a person’s tone through their body language and the intonation of their voice. You must also do that while reading; it is just a bit more difficult. • Choice of language helps create voice. Irony • Irony: contrast between appearance/expectation and reality • Verbal irony: contrast between what is said by the writer and what is meant; sarcasm • In “A Modest Proposal,” Swift didn’t mean literally “eat the babies” Irony • Situational Irony: contrast between what is expected and what actually happens. • Example: You break a date with your girlfriend so you can go to the ball game with the guys. When you go to the concession stand, you run into your date that is with another guy. • Example: at the end of “A Rose for Emily” the audience didn’t expect that Miss Emily had murdered Homer Barron and slept with his dead body. This was a shock in the end. Irony • Dramatic Irony: When the audience has important information that the characters in a story do not have. • Example: When watching a talk show, the audience knows why a person has been brought on the show. However, the person sitting in a chair does not know that he is going to be reunited with a former lover. This adds to the suspense and humor of the show. • Example: In Romeo & Juliet, the audience knows that Juliet is not dead but in a coma; however, Romeo believes that she is dead and thus he commits suicide. Word Choice & Style • Figurative language brings the writing to life. • Concrete details and imagery pulls us into the text. • Formal vocabulary evokes a different response from us than informal words. Theme: What’s the Point: • The insight the writers shares, or the point the writer wants to teach, prove, or convince us of. • Formal essays are easier to identify the theme because of the tight structure and direct writing style. Aims of an Essay: Inform, Preach, or Reveal • Inform/teach• Formal expository essays • Formal expository essays- usually to teach a lesson or convince us of a particular moral view. • Essay are usually written in response to a perceived political or social problem, and thus have a moral or message. • Usually share or reveal something insightful about human nature. • Before starting the checklist on page 149, make sure that you have read “Mother Tongue” by Amy Tan on pages 150-154. Checklist • Types of essays • Would you classify the essay as narrative, expository, or argumentative? Explain. Is the classification clear? If not, why? • “A Modest Proposal”- Argumentative • “Mother Tongue”- Expository, although it has some narrative qualities. It uses person stories to prove her thesis- “Language is the tool of my trade. And I use them all-all the Englishes I grew up with” (150). There is also an element of argument since she is trying to show that simpler English or the English she spoke with her mother, her dialect, is not broken. Checklist • Language, Style, and Structure • In general, is the essay formal or informal? How so? • “A Modest Proposal”- informal- uses absurd humor- figurative language, specifically metaphor • Juvenalian Satire: Harsher tone; more insult than humor; moral indignation; criticizes evil • Some would argue that because of structure (argument: problem/solution) that it is formal. • “Mother Tongue”- informal- light humor • “I’ve been thinking about this lately” • Simple language Checklist • Language, Style, and Structure • How would you describe the writer’s voice? Do you find the author believable? Why? • “A Modest Proposal”- condescending, sarcastic • “Mother Tongue”- respectful, happy, lightly humorous, loving Checklist • Language, Style, and Structure • Was the voice of the author effective in conveying the essay’s meaning? Why? • “A Modest Proposal”-yes • “Mother Tongue”- yes Checklist • Language, Style, and Structure • Is the language formal or informal? What does the nature of the language tell you about the essay? • “A Modest Proposal”- he must be informal to get his point across to the English. • “Mother Tongue”- She is informal just as her mother tongue & dialect is informal Checklist • Language, Style, and Structure • Are there many instances of imagery and figurative language (simile, metaphor)? If so, how do they connect to or support the essay? • “A Modest Proposal”• Metaphor- compares children to livestock • Simile- “nor act any longer like the Jews” (1030). • Allusion- “Jews, who were murdering one another at the very moment their city was taken” (1030). • Verbal Irony • Note: Make sure you are not just identifying the figurative language, but that you are discussing why the author used each. Checklist • Language, Style, and Structure • Are there many instances of imagery and figurative language (simile, metaphor)? If so, how do they connect to or support the essay? • “Mother Tongue”• Imagery- “I would see a burst of colors against a darkening sky, the moon rising, the lowering of a curtain of stars” (153). • Flashbacks- “When I was fifteen” (151). • Note: Make sure you are not just identifying the figurative language, but that you are discussing why the author used each. Checklist • Theme • What is the intention of the essay? Is it trying to inform us of something? To prove or convince us of something? To share an insight? • “A Modest Proposal”• Swift is trying to inform his readers of the situation in Ireland created by the English • “Mother Tongue”• Tan is informing her readers the different languages that an immigrant and their family have as they learn a new language in a foreign land. Checklist • Theme • What is the theme? • “A Modest Proposal”• • • • incompetence of Ireland's politicians the hypocrisy of the wealthy the oppression of the English on the Irish the filth and poverty Irish people live in needs to be remedied • “Mother Tongue”• Don’t judge a person by how they speak • You can do anything you want to do if you put your mind to it. “I happen to be rebellious in nature and enjoy the challenge of disproving assumptions made about me” (153). •See pages 154-155 for more questions over “Mother Tongue” to help you analyze an essay. Outline • Intro • Attention grabber • Thesis • Body Paragraph x3 • Topic Sentence • Support • Conclusion • Restate thesis • Readdress main points of body paragraphs Topics for body paragraphs • Type of essay • Narrative • Expository • Argumentative • • • • • • Formal or Informal Voice & Tone Irony Word Choice & Figurative Language Satire Theme Pick 3 of these topics to discuss in your body paragraphs.