Beyond Bob Dylan: Composition and Literature in the Classroom Dr. Elizabeth Howells Associate Professor of English and Director of Composition Armstrong Atlantic State University Yawping and the Bard Robin Williams as John Keating, Dead Poet’s Society, 1989 Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Dylan as the Bard Michelle Pfeiffer as LouAnne Johnson, Dangerous Minds, 1995 Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 John Trimbur, “’Taking English’ Notes on Teaching Introductory Literature Classes” Many of my students are voracious readers. But much of the reading they do—science fiction, thrillers, cyberpunk, bestsellers, romances—is disqualified ahead of time, in their own and their English teachers’ minds, from the domain of ‘English.” Moreover, a surprising number of my students not only consume such popular genres, they also produce them both alone and collaboratively through self-sponsored writing. My point here is that ‘English,’ at least as it is presently constituted, makes little effort to recognize where or how its own particular concerns intersect with students’ experience as readers and their productive work as writers. Instead, if ‘Intro to Lit’ anthologies are any indication, ‘English’ simply begins with the assumption that students should study the genres-fiction, poetry, drama. (19) Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 John Trimbur, “’Taking English’ Notes on Teaching Introductory Literature Classes” What is literature? Why is literature a required course? Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Art Young and Toby Fulwiler, When Writing Teachers Teach Literature: Bringing Writing to Reading Today, many college teachers of English find themselves trained as scholars to study literary texts, but trained as writing teachers to study how students learn. Preparation for teaching literature has commonly focused on lecture demonstrations and Socratic discussion of canonical texts, while not attending, in any deliberate way, to the conditions, needs, and abilities of the learners trying to read those texts. The focus is on the text, not the learner: Here is the text, read it, learn about it, tell back what you learned. If you disagree with the instructor’s interpretation, be prepared to defend your interpretation with specific evident from the text. (2) Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Composition/Literature Debate From: Maxine Hairston, “Breaking Our Bonds and Reaffirming Our Connections” (CCC, 1985) To: Erika Lindeman, “Freshman Composition: No Place for Literature” (College English, 1993) To: Peter Elbow, “The Cultures of Literature and Composition: What Could Each Learn from the Other?” (College English, 2002) Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Peter Elbow, “The Cultures of Literature and Composition: What Could Each Learn from the Other?” I wish the culture of composition would learn to give an equally central place to the imaginative and metaphorical dimensions of language. And I don’t want my emphasis on stories and poems to obscure my larger emphasis on all language—even if the only goal is teaching essays. Surely many of the best and most effective essays don’t just make good use of metaphors and images; rather, they grow out of imaginative metaphorical thinking—out of the imagination itself. But we won’t understand the craft of such essays unless we feel their roots in the imagination rather than only in clear logical thinking and language. I wish the culture of literature would learn more inherent attention and concern for students—their lives and what’s on their minds. If it did, I think teachers of literature would give more attention to helping students read with involvement and write imaginative pieces. Even if our only goal is to get students to understand a work of literature, nothing works better than inviting students to write stories or poems that are structurally, thematically, or rhetorically related to it. (539-540) Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Nuts and Bolts Writing to Learn/informal writing Writing to Communicate/formal writing Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing to Learn Pre-reading questions Reading responses: reading journals vs. focused free writes Close reading: Writing Off a Line Meaning Making Prewriting and writing process reflections, peer group, workshopping Visual rhetoric, technological literacy, and multiple literacies *A note on evaluating informal writing Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing to Communicate Explication Summary Analysis Argument Research paper Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing to Communicate: Immersion Project Immersion project—poem a day or text a day. Ehreinreich’s Nickle and Dimed Kingsolver’s Animal, Vegetable, Mineral Powell’s Julie and Julia AJ Jacobs’ The Year of Living Biblically Blogging based on assigned criteria to discover a “poem a day” or “text a day.” Public reading journal Using blogspot, wordpress, posterous platforms Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing to Communicate: Commonplace Book http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/5637 Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing to Communicate: Creative Writing in the Literature Classroom In “Textual Terror, Textual Power: Teaching Literature through Writing Literature” Lynn Bloom presents the following question: “why not encourage students to write creative texts in the genres and modes of the works they’re studying, in response to and as a way of understanding these works?” According to her, the lessons learned include an understanding of: 1. The innumerable versions in which a particular experience can be rendered. 2. The relation of style to substance, style to self. 3. The significance of emphasis, de-emphasis, omissions, gaps, erasures. 4. The difficulties, ethical and aesthetic, of dishonesty. 5. The importance of each word, each syntactic structure, each punctuation mark, in every text. 6. The critical rigor that undergirds, writing well for an external audience. 7. The necessity, aesthetic and personal, of rewriting. 8. The importance of reading literature as well as writing it, with an understanding of the writer’s craft, the writer’s art. (80-81) Read Wordsworth’s “Nuns Fret Not” and write a sonnet. Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing to Communicate: Springboard Projects Retell a narrative from an alternative point of view—write in voice of character—Tobe in “A Rose for Emily” Describe what X character would do in Y situation—what would Paul from Cather’s “Paul’s Case” do if he was accused of plagiarism. Retell this story/poem/play in a modern setting—“My Last Duchess” contemporarily. The instructor could then share other revisions such “Dover Beach” and “Dover Bitch.” Write a prequel to the text—What was Joy/Hulga like before she met her match in “Good Country People”? Write a sequel to the text—What happened to the Misfit after the events of “A Good Man is Hard to Find”? Work with epistles or other literary forms: Donna Reiss assigns her students to write a letter of unsought advice to old school friend in J. Alfred Prufrock or a letter from John after the events in “The Yellow Wallpaper” or an entry in secret diary of “A Very Old Man with Enormous Wings” or a dialogue with Thoreau about living today according to conscience or an email to Emerson. (In Young and Fulwiler 33) Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing to Communicate: Imitation Roman writing instruction: precept, imitation, exercise Learning syntax and style through writing sentences like Hemingway and Faulkner Elbow: recast Shakespeare’s “Sonnet 73” or Blake’s “Tyger” Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing to Communicate: Performing a Text Here is how Schuster describes it in his article “Teaching Literature Through Performance” and cites Richard Poirier: “When literature is read rhetorically in terms of performance, it ceases to function as a[n] artifact of high culture that conveys semieternal truths; instead, it offers itself as a text that embodies ‘a struggle with words and not a putting forth of something predigested in the mind’ and it assumes ‘that the most worthy acts of writing and reading are signs of vibrant, creative life…’” (137) Reader’s Theatre: Zora Neale Hurston’s “How it Feel To Be Colored Me” Flannery O’Connor’s “Revelation” Richard Selzer’s “The Corpse” Audre Lorde’s “The Master’s Tools Will Never Dismantle the Master’s House” Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing to Communicate: Writing an Anthology In “We Wrote the Book on That,” John Trimmer proposes: “In the writing classroom, teachers coach students to create their own texts. In the literature classroom, teachers judge students by their commentary on other texts. In [this course], I’ll invite students to create, arrange, and interpret their own textbook—and see what happens” (66). Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing to Communicate: Literary Family Tree 8 LAUGHING OUT LOUD 9 VIEWING WORDS AND READING PICTURES Getting to Know Horror in Literature 11 LISTENING TO MUSIC Getting to Know Graphic Novels 10 THRILLED AND CHILLED Getting to Know Comic Literature Getting to Know Stories in Rhythm 12 EXPLORING THE ALTERNATIVE Getting to Know Experimental Literature Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing to Communicate: Literary Family Tree About a “new” genre by “Someone who knows” An example of the genre “They might know” An example of the genre “The might like to know” The literary origin of the genre in “Knowing where we came from” Researching the “new” genre Experimenting with the “new” genre As a presentation, group project, class work, or formal assignment Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing About Your Experience with Literature: Getting to Know Comic Literature Be funny. Many people think they are funny, but it can be challenging to write comedy. Working in groups, pairs, or individually, try your hand at one of the above forms: the monologue, the comic essay, a comic dialogue, or those listed in the box at the end of this chapter. Use some of the lessons learned from the examples you've read and attempt to walk that fine line between comic method and serious message. Research comedy in literature. Why is there so much tragedy in literature? What are some examples of quality literature that is funny? Working in groups, pairs, or individually, look into the history of the genre through research. Develop a brief paper or presentation on one of the following topics: Make a case for one or two comic works and writers that should be added to this textbook or textbooks like it. Discuss how they maintain a focused purpose and literary craft while using humor. Demonstrate how this work or these works illustrate the duality of comedy and tragedy. Develop a timeline of the comedy genre. Identify important figures in the history of the genre and highlight one or two. Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing About Your Experience with Literature: Getting to Know Experimental Literature Develop a piece of experimental literature. Working in groups, pairs, or individually, compose a poem, play, or piece of short fiction. Consider first what meaning you want to convey to your readers. Determine a theme or message you might like to deliver. For example, what conventional belief or status quo notion would you like to challenge? What assumption would you like to force people to reconsider? Next, determine how best to convey this message. What form will challenge this assumed belief? How will you shake your reader from complacent viewing to actively engage with your text? Research a significant figure in the world of experimental literature. In groups, pairs or individually, do some research into one of the writers listed in Want to Know More? Find some examples of their work to read. Write a brief paper or develop a presentation about one experimental writer. Address the following questions: How is this writer’s work experimental? What conventions does the writer challenge and how does he or she challenge them? How does the writer force the reader to revise, rethink, and re-envision an idea, literature, or way of reading? Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Writing to Communicate: Research Project New historical approaches to connect students’ contemporary worlds with literary themes Frankenstein in context Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 In conclusion: Lesson planning for an “experience” or “workshop” rather than a “lecture” or “discussion” Howells~Beyond Bob Dylan~3.31.11 Works Cited Bloom, Lynn Z. “Textual Terror, Textual Power: Teaching Literature through Writing Literature.” Young and Fulwiler. 77-87. Print. 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