 1. Introduction sentence
 2. Supporting sentence number 1
 3. Supporting sentence number 2
 4. Supporting sentence number 3
 5. Concluding sentence

Saving Private Ryan is an action packed movie with great cinematography, acting and a gripping story line. From the first scene on the beaches of Normandy, the cinematography is outstanding, drawing you in and making you feel as though you are with the characters. The acting is realistic, believable and mimics the behaviours of the soldiers that were fighting in
WWII. Finally, the story line of a soldier who has lost three brother due to the war and the challenges a select set of troops have trying to find him, have you hanging on to find out the outcome. Saving Private Ryan captures the film elements of cinematography, acting and engaging storyline, which lead me to the conclusion that it is my favourite movie.

1.
Introduction:
Saving Private Ryan is an action packed movie with great cinematography, acting and a gripping story line.
2. Supporting sentence 1
From the first scene on the beaches of Normandy, the cinematography is outstanding, drawing you in and making you feel as though you are with the characters.
3.Supporting sentence 2
The acting is realistic, believable and mimics the behaviours of the soldiers that were fighting in WWII.
4. Supporting sentence 3
Finally, the story line of a soldier who has lost three brother due to the war and the challenges a select set of troops have trying to find him, have you hanging on to find out the outcome.
5. Concluding sentence
Saving Private Ryan captures the film elements of cinematography, acting and engaging storyline, which lead me to the conclusion that it is my favourite movie.