Hero Essay
“Of all the qualities a hero can possess, which is the most important? Prove your answer by using a
variety of examples.”
For your first paper in English 10, you are going to write an essay on the qualities of a hero. General
requirements are as follows:
 Five paragraphs
 Each paragraph needs to be around 10-12 sentences long
 Typed in Times New Roman, 12 pt. font, double-spaced, one-inch margins
Step 1: Brainstorm qualities and examples.
Step 2: Select one quality and three heroes – at least one of your heroes needs to be from a story that
we’ve read.
Step 3: Fill out your outline.
Step 4: Write body paragraphs. Then write your introduction and conclusion.
Brainstorm Here:
Heroic Qualities
Examples
(Star your example from story)
Hero Essay Rubric
Name ___________________________________
Presentation
_____ / 5
Times New Roman or Garamond, 12 pt. font, double-spaced, one-inch margins
Proper heading: name, date, teacher, assignment name in upper right hand corner;
Content / Organization
_____ / 10
Introduction Paragraph
Provides an attention-getter (as discussed in class)
Provides an overview of heroes and traits
Starts with a general, large idea and transitions to the thesis
_____ / 5
Thesis
Clearly identifies direction for essay; provides focus for three body paragraphs
_____ / 30
3 Body Paragraphs
Paragraphs have topic sentences AND transitions
Each paragraph focuses on one hero
Each paragraph provides several reasons and examples proving that the hero has your
heroic trait
Discussion focuses on defining/classifying heroism, not just biographical information
_____ / 10
Conclusion Paragraph
Restates the thesis without repeating it word for word
Starts specific and ends with general, larger implications
Contains a strong final statement—clincher—that leaves a lasting impression on reader
_____ / 20
Conventions
Punctuation / capitalization correct
Spelling correct: Proofread!!
_____ / 10
Sentence fluency
Uses mature, well-developed sentences
Provides varied transitions between ideas
Avoids fragments, run-ons and comma splices
_____ / 10
Word Choice
Uses appropriate, specific vocabulary
Uses strong, active verbs, minimizing linking and other “meaningless” verbs
Only 3rd person pronouns, and avoids informal language
_____ / 100
Total Essay Score
Final Essay Due: ______________________
*Must be submitted to TurnItIn.com in order to receive credit.
*Must turn in this rubric with the essay or you will lose 10 points.