Business English at Work © 2003 Glencoe/McGraw-Hill The Period and the Comma Use periods correctly at the end of declarative and imperativeObjectives sentences, courteous requests, and indirect questions. Identify miscellaneous uses of the period. Use commas correctly between items in a series and in compound sentences. Use commas correctly with independent adjectives. continued Business English at Work PP 16-1a The Period and the Comma continued Use commas correctly to set off appositive and Objectives parenthetical expressions. Use commas correctly with introductory expressions. Use commas correctly with nonrestrictive clauses. Identify miscellaneous uses of the comma. Business English at Work PP 16-1b The Period and the Comma Declarative Sentences Use a period at the end of a declarative sentence. Rick finds job openings on the Internet. Sara’s final interview with the company is on Friday. Business English at Work PP 16-2 The Period and the Comma Imperative Sentences Use a period at the end of a sentence that indicates a command or a strong suggestion. Proofread your cover letter carefully. Fill out the job application within 24 hours. Business English at Work PP 16-3 The Period and the Comma Courteous Requests Use a period at the end of a sentence that makes a courteous request. Will you please call the applicants to tell them that the position is filled. May I have the phone numbers of your last three supervisors. Business English at Work PP 16-4 The Period and the Comma Indirect Questions Use a period after an indirect question. I wonder whether Bob applied for the accounts payable position. Jamey asked how I posted my résumé on the Internet. Business English at Work PP 16-5 The Period and the Comma Decimal Points Use a period to separate dollars and cents. $5.59 $178.25 $14,382.38 Do not place a period after a dollar amount if there are no cents involved. $5 $802 $78,455 Use a period as a decimal point to express whole numbers and fractional amounts. 0.008 Business English at Work 0.09 5.2 29.5 PP 16-6 The Period and the Comma Abbreviated Words and Measurements Use a period at the end of an abbreviated word. assn. asst. bldg. intl. mfg. pd. Business English at Work association assistant building international manufacturing paid PP 16-7a The Period and the Comma continued Abbreviated Words and Measurements Do not use a period after a measurement that is abbreviated on most business or technical forms. Ft gal hr foot, feet gallon hour, hours oz qt yr ounce, ounces quart, quarts year, years Spell out measurements when they are used in general or nontechnical writing. Business English at Work PP 16-7b The Period and the Comma Small and Capital Letters Use a period after each letter in abbreviations that consist of small letters. a.k.a. c.o.d. f.o.b. also known as collect on delivery free on board (within sentences) Do not use a period after each letter in most abbreviations that consist of all capital letters. CEO HMO PIN Business English at Work chief executive officer health maintenance organization personal identification number PP 16-8a The Period and the Comma continued Small and Capital Letters Exceptions P.O. U.S. M.A. M.D. B.C. Business English at Work post office United States Master of Arts Doctor of Medicine before Christ PP 16-8b The Period and the Comma Personal Names and Corporate Names Use a period after the initials or with abbreviations of most names. J. C. Williams Thos. C. McGraw Do not use a period with a nickname. Skip Jenner Red Stocker Use the same format that an individual uses in a signature or that a company uses on its letterhead as its official designation Harry S Truman Business English at Work JCPenney PP 16-9 The Period and the Comma Titles, Academic Degrees, Professional Identification Use a period after an abbreviation of a person’s title. Mrs. Ms. Mr. Dr. Use a period after each element in the abbreviation of an academic degree or professional identification. B.A. Business English at Work Ph.D. M.B.A. M.D. PP 16-10a The Period and the Comma continued Titles, Academic Degrees, Professional Identification Examples Dr. Carole Bennett accepted a position as a technical writer. Sara Wong, M.D., hired Rose to work as a receptionist. Gretchen Carpenter, M.B.A., uses the Internet to post company job openings Business English at Work PP 16-10b The Period and the Comma Seniority Designations Use a period after an abbreviated seniority designation. Jason Harrison Jr. accepted a position in Nevada. Anthony Biasi III applied for an international banking position. Business English at Work PP 16-11 The Period and the Comma The Period and Geographic Locations Use a period after an abbreviation of a country, state, or province unless the abbreviation appears in ZIP Code format. ZIP Code Abbreviation NC AR ON Business English at Work State or Province North Carolina Arkansas Ontario Standard Abbreviation N.C. Ark. Ont. PP 16-12 The Period and the Comma Shortened Forms of Words Do not use a period after shortened words or foreign words that are not abbreviations. info rep specs temp ad hoc in re or re Business English at Work information representative specifications temporary for a particular purpose concerning PP 16-13 The Period and the Comma Outlines and Lists Use a period after the numbers or letters that identify items in an outline or list unless the numbers or letters are in parentheses. I. EMPLOYMENT MATERIALS A. Resume 1. Chronological a. Advantages (1) Shows job history Business English at Work PP 16-14a The Period and the Comma continued Outlines and Lists Use periods after complete sentences, dependent clauses, and long phrases in a list or outline. The keys to salary negotiation are the following: 1. Discuss salary at the end of the interview. 2. Let the interviewer introduce the issue of salary. 3. Do research on salaries for your field. Business English at Work PP 16-14b The Period and the Comma continued Outlines and Lists Do not use periods after short phrases listed on separate lines if the lead-in statement is complete. Avoid the following job-hunting methods: 1. Unsolicited resumes 2. Employment agencies 3. Employment advertisements Business English at Work PP 16-14c The Period and the Comma Compound Sentences Use a comma to separate two independent clauses in a compound sentence. Place the comma before the coordinating conjunction (and, or, nor, but) that joins the two clauses. Most public libraries have company directories, and most online services also offer access to these directories. Everyone knows about doing job hunting research, but few people do it well. Business English at Work PP 16-15a The Period and the Comma continued Compound Sentences Omit the comma before a coordinating conjunction in a compound sentence if either or both of the two independent clauses are very short (four words or less). Read the job description and fax your résumé. Do not omit the comma if it is necessary for clarity. Kyle interviewed me, and Maria tested my skills. Business English at Work PP 16-15b The Period and the Comma continued Compound Sentences Use a comma before the coordinating conjunction when a subject is not expressed (but implied) in one or both clauses in an imperative sentence. Call companies that interest you, and ask to speak to people who can give you specific information about available positions. Prepare a portfolio of your best work, and bring it with you to the interview. Business English at Work PP 16-15c The Period and the Comma continued Compound Sentences Do not use a comma before a coordinating conjunction that joins a compound subject, predicate, object, or subject complement. Stress educational achievements and extracurricular activities in your cover letter. Working in temporary positions will introduce you to different industries and help you discover the types of jobs available. Business English at Work PP 16-15d The Period and the Comma Series Use commas to separate words, phrases, or clauses in a series. Include the comma before the coordinating conjunction. Be selective when listing job duties, skills, and accomplishments on your résumé. Please bring your résumé, a sharpened pencil, and a list of references to the interview. Interviewing effectively means listening to suggestions of others, reading about interviewing, and participating in as many interviews as possible. Business English at Work PP 16-16a The Period and the Comma continued Series Do not use commas to separate items when each item is connected by a conjunction. Cover letters require the exact last name of the person and the exact spelling of the name and the title of his or her position. Business English at Work PP 16-16b The Period and the Comma continued Series Use commas in a series of names in an organization exactly the way that the organization uses the commas on its letterhead or on another verifiable source. Do not use a comma before the ampersand (&) in the name of an organization unless the company itself does. The firm of Farrell, White, and Jones specializes in recruiting hospital employees. Henderson, Hernandez, & Holmes fills its positions through networking. Business English at Work PP 16-16c The Period and the Comma The Comma and Etc. Use a comma before and after the abbreviation etc. When etc. appears at the end of a sentence, use a comma before the abbreviation only. The abbreviation etc. means and so forth or and others. Do not use the phrase and etc. Most experts recommend cream, white, offwhite, etc., bond paper for résumés. Business English at Work PP 16-17 The Period and the Comma Independent Adjectives Place a comma between independent adjectives that precede a noun unless they are already separated by a coordinating conjunction. To determine whether adjectives are independent, reverse their order or place the word and between the two adjectives. If both revisions sound satisfactory, place a comma between the two adjectives. Business English at Work PP 16-18a The Period and the Comma continued Independent Adjectives Examples James offered vague, disorganized answers to the interview questions. Anne conducted a successful, wellorganized job search. A study of successful female job hunters indicated that attention to detail is vital. Business English at Work PP 16-18b The Period and the Comma Appositives Use commas to set off an appositive if it is not essential to the meaning of a sentence. Kris Hing, CEO of Hing and Associates, looks for candidates who speak at least three languages. JOBS, an online listing of professional positions, helped me narrow my job search. Business English at Work PP 16-19a The Period and the Comma continued Appositives Do not use commas to set off an appositive that explains or clarifies the noun preceding it. The newspaper National Business Employment Weekly offers job hunting strategies. The year 2001 was the year that I was promoted to assistant manager. Business English at Work PP 16-19b The Period and the Comma Parenthetical Expressions Parenthetical expressions interrupt a sentence. These side remarks do not add to the clarity of a sentence, and they are set aside by commas. Business English at Work PP 16-20a The Period and the Comma continued Parenthetical Expressions Below is a partial list of parenthetical expressions. after all as a matter of fact as a rule at any rate by the way however I assure you Business English at Work as a consequence as a result as you know believe me for example I am sure I believe PP 16-20b The Period and the Comma continued Parenthetical Expressions Examples Being unemployed, as you can see, allowed me to return to school. Unfortunately, Jack lost his disk that contained his résumé. Group interviews, by the way, are popular with educational institutions. Business English at Work PP 16-20c The Period and the Comma Introductory Expressions Dependent Clauses Use a comma to separate an introductory dependent clause from the independent clause. If I have to move to another state, I will turn down the job offer. Although the competition was intimidating, Carrie still secured the job. Business English at Work PP 16-21a The Period and the Comma continued Introductory Expressions Dependent Clauses Generally, do not use a comma when the dependent clause follows the independent clause or when the comma is necessary for the meaning of the sentence. Do thorough research on a company before any job interview. Business English at Work PP 16-21b The Period and the Comma Introductory Expressions Prepositional Phrases Use a comma to set off an introductory prepositional phrase from the independent clause that follows. Within one year, he received a promotion to the position of accounts payable supervisor. From an employer’s standpoint, a thank-you note that is sent after the interview is important. Business English at Work PP 16-22 The Period and the Comma Introductory Expressions Infinitive Phrases Use a comma to set off an introductory infinitive phrase from the rest of the sentence. To save time, more companies are using résumé scanning software. Do not use a comma when an infinitive phrase is the subject of a sentence. To purposely lie on your employment application may cause dismissal from most positions. Business English at Work PP 16-23 The Period and the Comma Introductory Expressions Participial Phrases Use a comma to set off an introductory participial phrase from the rest of the sentence. Surprised by the results of my skill tests, I decided to set new goals. Reviewing my cover letter, I realized that I had used an incorrect telephone number. Business English at Work PP 16-24 The Period and the Comma Nonrestrictive Adjective Clauses Use commas to set off a nonrestrictive adjective clause from the rest of the sentence. Drug testing, which is becoming more prevalent, is a requirement for some occupations. I carry my resume in a leather portfolio, which was a graduation gift. Business English at Work PP 16-25 The Period and the Comma Restrictive Adjective Clauses Do not set off a restrictive adjective clause (necessary for the meaning of the word it modifies) from the rest of the sentence. Job applicants who arrive late for their interviews are usually not hired at our firm. A college degree that emphasizes communication skills is valuable in today’s job market. Business English at Work PP 16-26 The Period and the Comma Contrasting Expressions Use commas to set aside a contrasting expression from the rest of the sentence. A contrasting expression often begins with the word not or never. A contrasting expression contradicts the noun or idea it follows. The interview, not the résumé, gets you the job. The position for which Nina is interviewing is an existing position, not a new one. Business English at Work PP 16-27 The Period and the Comma Direct Address Use commas to set off the names of individuals who are being addressed directly. You will be pleased to know, Larry, that you will receive a bonus this year. Sheila, you are a finalist for the position. Business English at Work PP 16-28 The Period and the Comma Tag Questions Use a comma to separate a tag question from the rest of the sentence. We have five job candidates to interview today, don’t we? We do not need to interview the job candidates on Saturday, do we? Business English at Work PP 16-29 The Period and the Comma Quotations Use a comma to introduce a direct quotation or set it off from other parts of a sentence. Mr. Bertoli asked me, “How do you define success?” “Success,” Mr. Bertoli said, “depends upon your own definition.” Do not use a comma to set off an indirect quotation. Mr. Bertoli said that success depends upon your own definition. Business English at Work PP 16-30 The Period and the Comma Dates Use a comma before and after the year when a date includes a month, day, and year. I hope to graduate by June 30, 2005, or at the latest December 31, 2005. Do not use a comma if only the month and day or only the month and year are in a sentence. Mr. Elias indicated that he would notify me by August 5 about the position. My first interview was in October 2001 for a retail sales position. Business English at Work PP 16-31 The Period and the Comma Addresses Use commas to separate parts of an address or geographical location. Do not place a comma between a state name or a two-letter state abbreviation and the ZIP Code within a document or on an envelope. I applied for a position at Sonoma State University, 1801 East Coati Avenue, Rohnert Park, CA 94953, last week. Business English at Work PP 16-32 The Period and the Comma Occupational Designations, Academic Degrees Use commas to set off occupational designations or academic degrees when they follow a person’s name. Do not use both a personal or job title before a name and a job or academic degree designation after the name. Pamela Guzman, M.S., refers her clients for vocational assessment. Dylan works with Leslie Salazar, Ph.D., and Luis Pardue, M.B.A. Business English at Work PP 16-33 The Period and the Comma Seniority Designations Do not use commas to separate seniority designations from the name unless the person being referenced prefers to use commas. Lonnie Lamont Jr. works for Diamond Lane Communications. Nielson Electronics promoted Richard Whitmore II to the position of comptroller of their Canadian operations. Business English at Work PP 16-34 The Period and the Comma Company Names Do not use commas to separate Inc. or Ltd. from the rest of the company name unless the company’s letterhead or other official source indicates commas are necessary. Fantastic Foods Inc. offers excellent profit sharing bonuses to its employees. Business English at Work PP 16-35 The Period and the Comma Numbers Use a comma in a whole number with more than four figures. Some prefer to insert a comma in a number such as 3,482. Rhonda discovered 12,325 career sites on the Internet. Do not use a comma in a policy, account, page, serial, model, or check number or in a house number in an address. Policy 1503 describes our hiring procedures. Business English at Work PP 16-36 End of Business English at Work © 2003 Glencoe/McGraw-Hill