Name: ___________________________________________________Period _______ Praise Poem: Mirror Activity Guiding Question: What do you see when you look in the mirror? Objective: I can use figurative language and sensory details to describe and praise myself. Goal: Complete list of adjectives that describe you. Complete description of what you see in the mirror. STEP #1 Look in the mirror. Make a list of what you see. For example: brown eyes. ______________________ ____________________ _______________ ______________________ ____________________ _______________ ______________________ ____________________ _______________ ______________________ ____________________ _______________ ______________________ ____________________ _______________ ______________________ ____________________ _______________ ______________________ ____________________ _______________ STEP #2 Choose 4-6 of your descriptive words and add more details, for example: brown eyes becomes coffee-with no cream-but 2 sugars-colored eyes. 1. ______________ becomes _____________________________________ 2. ______________ becomes _____________________________________ 3. ______________ becomes _____________________________________ 4. ______________ becomes _____________________________________ 5. ______________ becomes _____________________________________ 6. ______________ becomes _____________________________________ STEP #3 Now, look deeper into the mirror. Pretend you can see to your bones like an X-ray machine, or the workings of your head like a brain wave scanner, or deep into the DNA of your cells. What do you see? (Don’t write the obvious like “bones”! Think of where you come from, your people, your hopes and dreams, your secrets, your talents. What do you see that makes you, well, you? ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ STEP #4 Make your mirror talk to you! Describe what the mirror sees when you look into it. Think of it this way, does the mirror see the same thing that you do? Consider: Do others see us in the same way we see ourselves? ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ STEP #5 Write a letter to yourself that praises you, your people, your culture, your language, your school, or something else that you can embrace about you! Dear _____________________, ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ STEP #6 Now identify 3-4 items, features, or ideas from what you have written and create a simile or metaphor out of it. (Total of 3-4 similes or metaphors.) 1. ____________ becomes ________________________________________ 2. ____________ becomes ________________________________________ 3. ____________ becomes ________________________________________ 4. ____________ becomes _______________________________________ STEP #7 Create a Praise Poem! MN State Standards: 7.4.1.1—identify key details in a text; 7.7.3.3—Write narratives and other creative texts to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, relevant descriptive details, and well-structured event sequences. b. Use literary and narrative techniques, such as dialogue, pacing, rhythm, rhyme, and description, to develop experiences, events, and/or characters. d. Use precise words and phrases, relevant descriptive details, figurative and sensory language to capture the action and convey experiences and events. 10/20 & 10/21 Focus: Figurative Language (15 minutes) 1. First, show this simple mini-lesson: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5zQyj-etm2Q Similes & Metaphors (uses term figurative language) (2:09) Then, go to the “figurative Language Warm Ups” displayed on the screen and have students create a simile & metaphor. 2. Add to the list of figurative language ideas by having students listen and watch the following: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OPjAiUbdl14 Flocabulary rap song—simile, metaphor, onomatopoeia, hyperbole, alliteration, consonance, assonance (2:52) 3. Lastly, show the figurative language montage of songs: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z03pREr8epg Good! Think songs are poems to music. Hyperbole, simile, alliteration, repetition, imagery (sensory details), allusion, jargon, flashback, personification (4:56) Additional Aids: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uoSBVNUO2LU similes & metaphors https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G1c6zF9aJxs https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rb4fqcUe_Ck onomatopoeia, personification, cliché, hyperbole…. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vMSLgxj2dxk alliteration, personification, hyperbole, simile, metaphor Teacher share praise poem My Little Toe—by Kathy Romero On my right sole there is a toe that takes a ride on the side of the toe next to it. In sand it does not show on its ride way up high on the side of the toe next to it. But it does not hide on the ride up high inside the shoe that holds the toe next to it. On the ride it moans and groans as it rubs inside the shoe that holds the toe next to it. In years gone by my mom had a toe that took rides on the side of the toe next to it. It made me smile to see her toe just like mine high on the side of the toe next to it. We made eight not ten in the sand while two took rides on the side of the toe next to it. One day our souls will smile again to see my toe along side of her toe next to it. Name: __________________________________________________________Period ________ Creative Writing—Praise Poem: Rubric Assignment: Write a creative praise to you poem, lyrics, or paragraph. Your text must contain at least 4 examples of figurative language. Use the details and figurative language you have already identified and created in your Praise Poem Mirror Activity. 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Many = 4 or more Some = 3 Name: __________________________________________________________Period _________ Creative Writing—Praise Poem: Rubric Assignment: Write a creative praise to you poem, lyrics, or paragraph. Your text must contain at least 4 examples of figurative language. Use the details and figurative language you have already identified and created in your Praise Poem Mirror Activity. 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