Applied Practices Part III
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Vivid Images: Write specific words for each of the following general phrases.
Key your response below the sentence.
A.
Sometime this quarter, we need to list goals for the next fiscal year.
B.
The client stated that we had performed excellent work.
C.
A large number attended our recent Client Appreciation Dinner.
D.
John Batson was honored for his efforts.
E.
Libby’s artwork for the campaign is amazing.
Camouflaged Verbs: Eliminate the camouflaged verbs in each sentence. Key
your response below the sentence.
A.
Parker Communications has a commitment to its employees.
B.
An assessment of the promotional campaign for our new product must be
conducted.
C.
Implementation of a comprehensive, progressive training program at
Montague, Inc., ensures the professional development of its employees.
D.
A recommendation on the location of the new distribution center will be
presented at the next staff meeting by the management and marketing
team.
Simple(Informal) Words: Revise the following sentences using shorter, simpler
words. Key your response below the sentence.
A.
The attendees of the convocation concurred that it should terminate at the
appointed hour.
B.
We utilized an innovative device to restore the computer’s video display
terminal.
C.
Management personnel will be remunerated for time exceeding forty
hours per week.
Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers: Revise the following sentences positioning
the dependent clauses appropriately. Key your response below the sentence.
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An informal meal was served to all attendees on paper plates.
B.
Your report is being read by the department manager, which was received
this morning.
C.
While lunch was served, we had a strategy meeting, which was delicious.
Expletive Beginnings: Revise the following leaving out the unnecessary word(s)
Key your response below the sentence.
A.
There are many factors to consider before starting your own business.
B.
It is advisable to meet with the client before sending them a proposal.
C.
There is a need for more administrative personnel in this office.
D.
There is a meeting scheduled for May 3.
Parallel Construction: Present the following ideas in parallel form. Key your
response below the sentence.
A.
As conference chairperson, Margaret reviews the papers, contacts the
authors, and did not hesitate to offer her assistance.
B.
After college, I set three goals: to get a good job, to buy a new car, and
paying off my student loan in three years.
C.
Our main personnel problems are absenteeism, apathy, and lowering of
employee morale.
D.
Latest research indicates that our customers are most dissatisfied with
product quality, warranty service, and not being able to select from a wide
selection of products.