Paragraphs What do we need to know? Identify the purpose for writing (i.e., to inform, to describe, to explain, to persuade). Identify the audience for which a text is written. Select an appropriate thesis statement for a writing sample. Rearrange multi-paragraphed work in a logical and coherent order. Select illustrations, descriptions, and/or facts to support key ideas. Choose the supporting sentence that best fits the context flow of ideas in a paragraph. Identify sentences irrelevant to a paragraph’s theme or flow. Select appropriate time-order or transitional words/phrases to enhance the flow of a writing sample. Select an appropriate concluding sentence for a well-developed paragraph. Select an appropriate title that reflects the topic of a written selection. Complete a graphic organizer (e.g., clustering, listing, mapping, webbing) with information from notes for a writing selection. Select the most appropriate format for writing a specific work-related text (i.e., instructions, directions, letters, memos, e-mails, reports). What is a paragraph? A paragraph is a group of related sentences Is usually a piece of a longer piece of writing For example, in a paper about a visit to a wildlife park, one paragraph might focus on the apes and monkeys. Other paragraphs in the paper could each focus on another type of animal. In this way, the paragraphs would give readers a clear idea of what they might experience at the wildlife park. Why use paragraphs? Provides a map for the reader Guides the reader through a piece of writing by showing where one idea ends and the next begins Makes it easier for the reader to understand the main point of a piece of writing Parts of a paragraph Main idea A topic sentence Supporting sentences Concluding sentence The main idea and topic sentence The sentences in a paragraph usually point to a single main idea The main idea is the main point, or central message Sometimes the author states the main idea in a topic sentence Example: What is the topic (or thesis) sentence? He thought he had failed in his life’s work. Others agreed with him. He died poor and bitterly disliked. To us today, this rejection seems strange. He had helped to free five South American countries from Spanish rule. He had won major victories on the battlefield. He was anything but a failure. Over time, people began to accept the truth. Monuments were built to honor him. People started to celebrate his birthday. Today Simon Bolivar is regarded as one of Latin America’s greatest heroes. Example: What is the main idea? Unlike domestic cattle today, the wild buffalo on the plains were very hardy animals. They lived and thrived when other animals, especially cattle, might have died. When winter blizzards hit the plains and prairies, the buffalo did not drift with the storm like cattle. Instead, they faced into the storm, either standing still waiting for the storm to pass or slowly heading into it. In this way the storm passed faster for the buffalo than it did for cattle, who would drift with the storm and frequently die from the elements. Supporting Sentences Have details that support, explain, or prove the main idea. Supporting sentences may be facts, examples, or other kinds of details such as sensory details Facts are statements that can be tested and proven true Examples are specific instances of an idea Sensory details are details that you see, hear, taste, touch, or smell. They make descriptions come alive for the reader. Example: Which sentences are the supporting sentences? Your bones resist breaks in two ways. Not only are they as strong as steel, but they also have the ability to stretch like a rubber band. Bone is made of hard mineral crystals. These crystals give bone enough strength to withstand thousands of pounds of weight without breaking. Also in bone is a stretchy material, called fiber, which prevents bone from easily snapping when bent. Concluding sentence Gives the paragraph a strong finish Sometimes called a clincher sentence Ties together the information in your supporting sentences and reminds your readers of the importance of your main idea Ties the whole paragraph together Makes the main idea stick in the reader’s mind Example: Which is the concluding sentence? Is it effective? The shark’s survival, which goes back 400 million years, is threatened by only one serious predator---humans. Commercial and sport fishers take more than one million sharks a year from the Gulf of Mexico alone. Each year fewer than seventy-five shark attacks on people are reported, most of which are not deadly. Clearly, we are much more dangerous to sharks than they are to us. What Makes a Good Paragraph? Coherence – details are arranged and connected in a way that makes sense to the reader Organized ideas – ideas arranged in a sensible way spatial order (location), chronological order (time) Transitional words – connectors that tie one idea or another Elaboration – explains or illustrates Types of Paragraphs Narrative – used to tell a story or recount an event Descriptive – used to describe a person, animal, scene, or object Expository – used to provide information, including facts, instructions, and definitions Persuasive – used to share opinions and convince others to agree with hose opinions and sometimes take action Purpose for Writing The type of paragraph you write depends on your purpose for writing To entertain To inform To persuade To share feelings Narrative Paragraphs Tell a story or describe an event or sequence of events Details usually arranged in chronological order Short stories Newspaper articles History books Writer recounts events from beginning to end Narrative Paragraph - example Joseph J. Gebhardt started reading for the blind around 1967. For years he had been playing guitar with a local band and had bought a reel-to-reel recorder with the idea of immortalizing them. One night he heard an ad seeking readers for the blind and decided he’d had enough of being drowned out by trombones. For a while he read Science magazine, but later he concentrated on Smithsonian, which he’s been reading ever since. Descriptive Paragraphs Create a mental picture of a person, animal, scene, or object by describing the details Descriptive paragraphs - example Atop the monument will be a bald eagle with its thirty-foot wings outstretched, as if ready to take flight. At the base of the monuments will be a nine-foot-tall, black granite monolith dedicated to all volunteers who have died during a volunteer activity. Extending outward from the monument will be The Walls of Tribute. These walls, along with other Walls of Tribute located throughout the complex, will contain the names of volunteers who have given one thousand hours or five years of volunteer service. Expository paragraphs Used to explain subjects or ideas Can list facts or explain a process Some follow a cause and effect pattern Expository paragraph - example In 2004, approximately 158,000 volunteers picked up nearly four million pounds of garbage along the coasts of the United States. As a result, both people and sea animals can enjoy cleaner and safer environments. Glass bottles, lumber, and syringes are less of a threat to barefooted beachgoers. Fewer seabirds, fish, and crabs will die entangled in plastic can holders, fishing nets, and fishing line. People put trash in the oceans, but by volunteering their time to help clean up after themselves, people are also the solution to the problem. Persuasive paragraphs Express an opinion about an issue an issue is a topic about which people might disagree a writer uses supporting details, or reasons, in a persuasive paragraph to convince readers to agree with his or her opinion Sometimes a writer encourages people to take action on a certain issue Persuasive paragraph - example Your community is really one of your best friends. It’s only natural that you give something back as a way to say thanks. That could include raising money for a local charity, volunteering to clean up your neighborhood, visiting nursing home residents on a regular basis, or collecting food for a local shelter. The possibilities are endless and whatever you do, your community will be grateful.