Unit of Study: Poetry Writing Grade: 3 Title: Unit 7 Length of Study: 4 weeks Genre Description: What is poetry? Priority Standards: Supporting Standards: Write descriptive poems using figurative language Essential Questions: Mini Lesson Concepts/Topics Preparation for Unit of Study: You will want to go to your school library or public library and collect some children’s poetry books to have for your students to read and peruse. The students will create several different kinds of poems during this unit. It would be a great thing to save each poem and create a poetry book for each child at the end of this unit of study. Books can be created on Resources See attached page – Favorite children’s poets Word document for links to websites for these poets Mentor Text Children’s poets worth collecting: Jack Prelutsky Shel Silverstein Alan Katz Bare Books – You may want to order some blank hardback books from this company and have the students create their own poetry anthology. http://www.barebooks.com/boo ks.htm Books are $1.75 each. 1 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing regular paper and bound with a binder. What a wonderful way to end the year with an actual collection of writing for each student. Another idea would be to hold a poetry SLAM at the end and have students read their poems to their peers and or parents. Lesson 1: What is poetry? Ask your students this question. Brainstorm on a a chart what it is. Have the poetry definition ready – see attached. Show the students the R is for Rhyme book, discuss a few types of poetry. (Preread the book and mark a few pages from the book to share.) Teachers: You may want to view this short video to see how easy it would be to do a poetry slam in your classroom. 2nd grade poetry slam http://www.youtube.com/watch ?v=HAAE6LJ6bDw See Word document – Poetry definition Go to this website and listen to Jack Prelutsky read his poems: http://teacher.scholastic.co m/writewit/poetry/poetry_l isten.htm This is a great book to use when discussing different kinds of poems. You may want to use a few pages out of it to show the different kinds of poems. Share a few poems from some of the children’s poets listed. Have students get in pairs or threes and look through some poetry from Jack Prelutsky, 2 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing Alan Katz and Shel Silverstein. Of course if you have other favorite children’s poets add them at this time. Lesson 2: Go to the website listed and work through the lesson with Jack Prelutsky. Step 1: Word Warm-Ups Just as you would stretch before you go running, you need to warm up before you start writing poetry. Here are some of my favorite exercises to help you stretch your mind: 1. Word Play Pick a word, any word, and think of all the words that rhyme with that word. Try first with one-syllable words, and then with words of two or more syllables. 2. Object Observations Pick an object — a pencil, a brick wall, a clock, a tomato — anything. Then write down everything you notice about that object. http://teacher.scholastic.co m/writewit/poetry/jack_my _poem.htm This lesson is taken directly from the above Scholastic website. Fill your room with some of Jack’s Prelutsky’s books: A Pizza the Size of the Sun, Something Big has Been Here, The New Kid on the Block and many others. Pizza, Pigs and Poetry, How to write a poem, by Jack Prelutsky is another great source to use for writing poems with your students. 3 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing 3. Synonym Silliness Think of an adjective, such as happy, soft, tall, or sleepy. Then write down all the words you can think of that have the same meaning as that adjective. This list will help a lot when you're trying to describe things. Here are a few tips for you to follow that have always helped me with my writing. I recommend that you try them! 1. Write as often as you can. That's what writers do — they write. 2. Carry a notebook and jot down your ideas immediately. 3. Keep a diary or journal — and try to write at least a little in it every day. 4. Write first about the things closest to you — yourself, or your family, friends, and pets. It's a lot easier than writing about things you know little or nothing about. 5. If you're writing poems, don't worry about trying to make them rhyme. It's much more important to say what you really want to say. 6. Try writing two or three different poems about the same subject. Use different points of view. 7. Look in the mirror and write about the person looking back at you. Write about how that person is feeling at that moment. 8. Take a walk around your 4 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing neighborhood — and write about the things you see there. Don't forget to take notes in your notebook. 9. Don't expect to get things right the first time. You do sometimes, but it's definitely the exception. Rewriting is an important step. 10. Sometimes, no matter how hard you try to write, nothing comes out. Forget about writing for a while, and go off and do something else. Then try writing again later. Are you all warmed up? Then you're ready to write your own poem. If you want, you can choose one of the poem-starters below. You can use it to get going, and add as many stanzas of your own as you like. (See poem 1 an poem 2 in the next column.) Revising Guidelines By now, you should have a first draft of your poem, which means you're ready to begin revising. To me, rewriting is the most important part of writing because nothing ever comes out right the very first time. Here are some guidelines I find helpful when I begin revising my own poetry: Poem 1 When I awoke one morning, A stork was on my head. I asked, "What are you doing there?" It looked at me and said . . . Hint: If you wish, you may substitute any one-syllable bird, bug, or mammal for the stork. You may also change the word was to "sat," "stood," "snoozed," "perched," or any other verb you think is appropriate. You'll probably wind up with a very different poem if there's a mouse on your head instead of a moose. Poem 2 Almost every afternoon, I eat pickles with a spoon. Every evening right at six, I eat pickles stacked on bricks. Hint: You can have a lot of fun writing about other ways to eat pickles. You can also use jellybeans, bananas, or potato chips instead of pickles — and explain the different ways that you eat them. It's up to you. 1. Rewrite your poem at least once. I rewrite most of my own poems at least four or five times. Some I've even 5 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing rewritten as many as 100 times! 2. Don't rush! Poems can take as long as a week, a month, or even a year to write. 3. How will you know when your poem is done? I find that the poem lets me know when it's done. It's just like being full when you eat. Sometimes if you take one more bite, you get a stomachache. But, if you don't take that extra mouthful, you'll feel perfectly satisfied. Well, it's the same with poetry — you'll just know when it feels right. 4. When you get frustrated, and feel that the poem is not coming out the way you'd like, put it aside and do something else for a while. When this happens to me, I work on another poem, or just go to a ballgame! 5. Sleep on it! If you're stuck, try thinking about your poem as you drift off to sleep. When I do this, I find that I dream the solution. You may publishing it online in our Poetry Collection. Lesson 3: Compound Descriptors Poem – As given by Linda Hoyt at CCIRA workshop Teach the students on this day how easy it is to write a poem. These examples are on a Word document created for your use. Use as your mentor text. See attached – Compound Descriptors Examples. Example: I’m a… Cookie baking, Van driving, Activity organizing, Meal making, Homework checking, 6 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing Today you will write a Compound Descriptors Poem. 1. Brainstorm things that your students are: 3rd grade students, daughter, sister, child, reader, writer, mathematician, scientist, friend, cook, soccer player, etc. Have students create these poems by creating lists and then combining the lists. 2. Students create lists of nouns and verbs ending in ing. 3. Then the students combine them into a poem that describes them. House cleaning, Laundry washing, Mom I’m a… Ace making, Ball digging, Master spiking, Pancake bouncing, Volleyball player. I’m a… Man blocking, Lineman shoving, Master tackling, Football player. I’m a… Snack eating, Toy squeaker breaking, Ball fetching, Eye brow raising, Bed napping, Gate chewing, Owner cuddling, Scottie Dog. The teacher should model this in front of the students. The teacher can use his/her poem for the mentor text. This lesson will probably take 7 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing at least 2 days to do. Students may write more than one and then choose the one they like the best to publish and put in their book. Lesson 4: Adjective Acrostic Poems – 1. Show and share some of the poems from Steven Schnur’s work to show your students an acrostic poem. 2. Begin by brainstorming adjectives for your name in front of your students: T – terrific, timely, talented, tricky E – energetic, eclectic, elegant R– E– 8 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing S– A- Fall, Winter, Spring and Summer books by Steven Schnur While doing this talk about wanting to find the “just right” adjectives that truly describe you. If you’d like make the rainbow acrostic poems like the one in the next column or just have the students word process them on the computer and make the acrostic part larger and bold when they type. Lesson 5: Seasonal Acrostics: Or…have the students pic a season and write an acrostic poem to go with the season. Have the students brainstorm words using an Alpha Box (See attached) to brainstorm words about that season. 9 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing Students brainstorm words that they know about the season and write them in the box with the corresponding letter. The teacher should model this brainstorming activity and also have created a seasonal poem beforehand to share and use as s model/mentor text. Lesson 6: Alliteration lesson on page 31 of I Can Write Like That I Can Write Like That by Susan Ehmann and Kellyann First: Immerse your students Gayer in alliteration by reading several of the books listed in the mentor texts section of this plan. Next: Explore the craft of alliteration by writing some alliterative sentences together on big chart paper. Then explain that each student will See attached: Alliteration definition saved as a Word document Note: You are preteaching alliteration, simile and Ellsworth’s Extraordindary Electric Ears and Other Amazing Alphabet Anecdotes by Valorie Fisher Four Famished Foxes and Fosdyke by Pamela Duncan Edwards Potluck by Anne Shelby Some Smug Slug by Pamela Duncan Edwards Animalia by Graeme Base A My Name is Alice by Jane Bayer Alphabet Soup by Scott Gustafson Amelia’s Fantastic Flight by Rose Bursik Giraffes Can’t Dance by Giles Andreae and Guy Parker-Rees 10 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing be an alliterative page with their own name, adjectives and verbs. Give an example: Theresa was terrified of training the truck sized tarantula to tiptoe on the terrace. onomatopoeia so that the students know what they are K is for Kissing a Cool Kangaroo and can use them in their ODE by Giles Andreae poems in a lesson to come later in the unit. Have your students look at other books with alliteration in them. Point out sentences that use a common letter for most of the sentence and other sentences where only part of the sentence has alliteration. Give the students time to write it out nicely and then add a great illustration. Lesson 7: Simile lesson on page 60 of I Can Write Like That See attached: Defninition Sheet saved as a document titled “Simile” First: Define the craft: See attached: Simile examples Crazy Like a Fox by Loreen Leedy Water Music, Poems for Children, by Jane YolenWhe When the Fireflies Come by Jonathan London Hello, Harvest Moon, by Ralph Fletcher All the Colors of the Earth by Sheila Hamanaka Gentle Giant Octopus by Karen Wallace The Storm Book by Charlotte Zolotow 11 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing Simile: An author’s craft in which an author compares on thing to another using words like or as to evoke an image or picture in the reader’s mind. from text Sun Dance, Water Dance by Jonathan London Tigress by Nick Dowson If You Were a Simile by Trisha Speed Shaskan My Dog is as Smelly as Dirty Socks by Hanoch Piven My Mama Had a Dancing Heart by Libba Moore Gray Notice and Name: If your students are new to noticing simile it is important to choose similes that are obvious and contain simple language Prepare some simile examples on a chart before you begin this lesson. Take them right from the text. See attached: Ice cream simile paper for the students to use and brainstorm. Spend some time in mentor texts pulling out the simile. You may want to show this video off of the internet. http://www.brainpopjr.com/reading andwriting/sentence/similes/previe w.weml 12 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing You may want to create an anchor chart like this: Have the students use their 5 senses to create similes about a familiar object such as the sun, stars, fire, ocean, mountains, animals, etc. Have your students write about ice cream and create similes 13 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing If You Were Onomatopoeia by Trish Speed Shaskan The Listening Walk by Paul Showers Vroomaloom Zoom by John Coy Listen, Listen by Phyllis Gershator Water Hole Waiting by Jane and Christopher Kurtz Max Found Two Sticks by Brian Pinkney Lesson 8: Onomatopoeia lesson on page 44 of I Can Write Like That See attached Onomatopoeia definition You may want to create an anchor chart like this: 14 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing Notice and Name: Read the book If You Were Onomatopoeia aloud. Have the students:Discuss what an Onomatopoeia is and read the definition Brainstorm a list of onomatopoeia words. 15 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing Read aloud: The Listening Walk by Paul Showers. Next take a listening walk. Have the students write down listening/sound words as they are on their walk. Return to class and write a short Listening Walk Poem using onomatopoeia that describe the sounds that they heard. Have the students share and guess where the student was by the sounds/onomatopoeia. Lesson 9: Odes (This will take many days to complete.) 1. Odes are meant to be written about everyday things. They are a poem of praise. Resources: Mark Overmeyer class –Day 2 Lesson on writing Odes Neighborhood Odes by Gary Soto All the Small Poems and Fourteen More by Valerie Worth 16 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing You will want to make copies of an ode from the Gary Soto book or a Valarie Worth book. Be intentional about the example you choose. Have the students make “noticiings” about the text. They can identify alliteration, onomatopoeia, simile, vivid verbs, repetition, etc. Students can underline their noticings in different colors. The students can share out their noticings while you model marking them on a copy under the document camera. Talk about reasons the author may have chosen these words in his/her poem/ode. Next, after sharing some odes and doing the noticings activity, create a “Sometimes/Always chart” about odes. You can add to this as you go. Sometimes /Always chart 17 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing Sometimes/always chart (see example) See attached: example Ode – Food Then talk to the students and model the brainstorming for an ode. You will be writing about a favorite food. Most students should be able to do this with ease, because everyone has a favorite. Create a graphic organizer to brainstorm by drawing a circle and then a smaller circle inside. (see example Odefood example) List people, places, ingredients and flavors of that food on this graphic organizer. Model for your students as you think out loud. Next, have the students work with a partner and talk about the food that they chose and talk about what was put on the graphic organizer. The teacher should take out a 18 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing clean sheet of paper or have it in their writers notebook and model the phrases about the food. Just brainstorm: Ex. – cinnamon flavor Rolling off my tongue, In the kitchen, Anticipation, Flaky and buttery, Eggs, yeast, flour, cinnamon After that, have the students take out a clean sheet of paper and brainstorm phrases about their food. Give your students ample time to make a list of phrases. Bring your students back together and model how to begin the poem. (You may have this already done in your 19 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing writer’s notebook.) Remind them that an ode is a poem that is a poem of praise. Encourage your students to support you as a writer. Have them help you with yours. Make their ideas/suggestions count by writing them down as you brainstorm. Remind your students that: Writers might: 1. Revise while they write 2. Poem writers may play around with their words 3. Get all of their thoughts down on paper first 4. Work on it as you go If a student finishes early, encourage them to go through the same process with another topic. Make sure you build in a sharing time. Students may share about the writing, share a part of the writing or share 20 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing the whole piece. Finally, after you have written several kinds of poetry in the past few weeks, have the students practice reading their poetry beautifully and hold a poetry slam or poetry tea and invite parents to come in and listen. Divide your class into groups of 4-5 students and have the parents sit with the group. This way all parents will not have to listen to all of the poetry and all students will feel honored and special. Other books you may want to look at for more ideas on writing poetry with your These books are excellent students: Poetry Matters resources for some other by Ralph Fletcher and great poetry writing. Poetry Mentor Texts by Dorfman and Cappelli On Demand Writing Prompts: 21 Unit of Study: Poetry Writing Common Formative Assessment Tasks: Checks for Understanding 22