Brian, testimony is authoritative, but again it is quite late. I didn’t find much evidence of this doctrine at the time of Joseph Smith, but many things weren’t known then like now. I don’t know if this type of evidence is available (I suspect not or you would likely have used it), but I can see that our critics can more easily explain away JAW as an apologist, than dealing with the statements and practices of the early brethren. I suspect JAW may have had access to some data or people that taught him these things, but unfortunately he doesn’t elaborate on why he makes the points he does. I’m arguing for more evidence on this very crucial point. I had similar impressions a time or two in other areas of this and the next chapter, but without taking the time to review them again, I can’t give you specifics. Maybe I can later when I can read it carefully. Just wanted to let you know the books you sent arrived yesterday. Thank you very much. I took a couple of hours yesterday and this morning to look over the book on polygamy, the footnotes, and skim read the three chapters on polyandry and the chapter on Joseph Smith’s Theology of Sexuality. I have a few impressions that may or may not be useful to you. First, I’ve long thought that one of our best defenses concerns the teachings and attitude of JS about marriage and sexuality. If he had a monumental libido which he couldn’t control as Brodie and other opponents would suggest, then he was an arch hypocrite of the worst sort vis-à-vis his statements on adultery which you have collected in your chapter. I also think that you only find reverence and sensitivity regarding sex and marriage, nothing crude, obscene, offensive, off colored, or chauvinistic in his statements or conduct. That needs to be documented too. (I’m not suggesting you put it in your chapter, but it is an avenue which I think needs further exploration.) His brother William, on the other hand while editing The Wasp did put crudities in a published public newspaper. Although one gets the impression from some of Joseph’s comments in his letters to Emma that theirs was something of a platonic relationship via letters and may be suggestive of either a coolness in the relationship, or a reticence or inability on his part to be more demonstrative—one does not pick up anything untoward about sex or marriage in those communications either. Despite his marital problems in the late Nauvoo period, I don’t recall any negative statements about Emma or marriage. About the worst I remember is his statement to Clayton that he feared Emma would “pitch on him” and request a divorce. I also had a question about the organization of the first and second chapters. It seems to me that you jump right in with the problem of polyandry and an examination of some of the issues, especially children and paternity, without laying a foundation of the history that leads up to the issue. One only encounters the 11 possible polyandrous wives in chapter 8. I also think that if we are going to effectively deal with this subject, much more research needs to be done on the husbands particularly, and their marriages and relationships with these women. I suspect this may give us a better context in which to understand this phenomenon. You assess each of the alleged “children” of Joseph, and I think a similar thing would be beneficial on the husbands, and that should precede a discussion about children. So my suggested taxonomy would be something like this: Joseph and 11 polyandrous wives; the husbands; then the children. I also felt there were some abrupt transitions between some sections. I will have to just alert you to this now and provide specifics later if possible. Regarding the polyandry chapters I have impressions, but since I didn’t read them carefully I can’t be too specific just yet. Two overall reactions. First, I’m amazed at the amount of detail that continues to be gathered since my study over 30 years ago. You have read a ton and are aware of many things which I did not know about. It almost makes me wish I were 30 years younger and could continue to research and write about the subject. Finally, I have written a couple of articles which I didn’t see in the footnotes which may be of some interest and further help to you. They are: DWB, “The Authorship of Doctrine and Covenants, Section 132,” The Eighth Annual Sidney B. Sperry Symposium: A Sesquicentennial Look At Church History, 26 January 1980, (Provo: BYU Religious Instruction and CES), pp. 27-44. [This argues against the RLDS position that BY made up 132 and added it to the D&C. I try to show the evidence for Joseph’s authorship and knowledge of it at the time, including a reading by Hyurm to the Nauvoo High Council. Most of this was in my thesis.] Second, and I’ll struggle for words here because the idea is a bit nebulous in my thinking at the moment. It seems to be a combination of two things. You sometimes begin a section on a problem or an idea and quote some authority and then seem to assume that position without what I might consider adequate substantiation. The thought first occurred to me on page 41 with the long quotation by Widtsoe on the difference between time and eternal marriages. While I believe this may be part of the answer to the problem, as you seem to do, I think it would be helpful to find earlier sources than JAW to show that this was what was being practiced. The JFS DWB, “The Eternity of the Marriage Relationship,” in John Scott and John K. Challis, Riches Of Eternity: 12 Fundamental Doctrines From The Doctrine And Covenants, (SLC: Aspen Books 1993), pp. 195-221. [In this one I tried to document what I knew about the origin of some of the doctrines 1 associated with eternal marriage, what scholars might call a piece of “intellectual history”. I also deal with doctrines and ideas that were reflected in the early marriages performed by Joseph Smith. Much of this was not in my thesis.] I hope some of this may be helpful to you. I admire your effort and ability. Dan Bachman 2