FINAL COURSE PROJECT AP Rhetorical Analysis of a Documentary Film from http://www.digitalparlor.org/icap/node/212 Documentary film is probably one of the first mediums that come to mind when we think about “documenting reality,” yet they are also one of the most complex formats for recording aspects of our world. Documentary films use a variety of methods—images, words, sounds, and various film techniques, to name a few—in order to present an argument. This project asks you to view a documentary film and to analyze the rhetorical strategies employed by the filmmaker in the construction of the film’s argument, to record a “yak track” of two scenes and to present your findings to the class in a formal presentation, and to produce and show a added one minute scene to the film that your team creates that shows off your talent as users of language and image. This added scene may be done with Photostory and still photos with music and voice overlay OR be videotaped and manipulated. The presentation should not be a summary of the film, nor should it be a review based on your personal reaction to it. The aim of the project is to identify the filmmaker’s thesis, and to analyze the rhetorical strategies and film techniques used in order to develop the film’s thesis. STEP ONE: View the video on your own (or with your team if you can manage it) by MAY 27. You can view the documentary using the links attached (which you will find on Ms. Reisinger’s Wiki at http://cbaplanguageandcomposition.wikispaces.com and should use those links if you are going to watch in on the computer) or you can rent or purchase the documentary if you prefer to watch in on a TV screen. As you view the documentary, rhetorically analyze it and TAKE NOTES individually on the Individual Viewing Chart. Have in mind two or three scenes you find especially rhetorically and persuasively effective. Be prepared to consider and discuss these scenes on May 28. STEP TWO: Your group will ask and answer the following questions beginning on May 28: What is the filmmaker’s purpose? What is the argument/thesis of the film? What assertions/claims are made? To what extent does the argument have validity? Are there fallacies? What is the attitude or viewpoint of the filmmaker? Tone? What cinematic techniques does the filmmaker use to make his/her point? (Think about the diction and syntax of the film). How does the structure of the film help achieve its purpose? STEP THREE: By midnight on May 28 you must email Ms. Cartee-Harding with the two scenes you would like to use for your presentation. These scenes must have a start and stop TIME as seen on the hyperlinks when viewed from there, NOT chapters from the DVD. STEP FOUR: Begin working on the script for your Yak Track on June 1 and 2 nd having it fully prepared by June 3. STEP FIVE: Record your Yak Track in Moviemaker on June 3 and 4th in class. STEP SIX: Work on your overall presentation and one minute original scene. You will have June 4, 5 and 8 to do some of this in class but depending on what you have decided as a group for your one minute original scene, you may need to meet outside of school. THINGS TO KEEP IN MIND: Your presentation should do all of the following: 1. Identify the main argument and / or purpose of the film (this is somewhat subject to interpretation). 2. Examine the ways in which the thesis and / or aim of the film’s argument is supported through the particular style and manner of the composition’s construction, that is, through rhetorical strategies and film techniques. In order to focus your ideas, you’ll need to choose a selection of strategies and techniques to analyze; do not attempt to discuss everything about the film. Your chosen specific scenes or moments from the film should illustrate these techniques and analyze how the filmmaker uses them to present the film’s argument. Think of this as the director’s cut of a DVD. 3. Interpret / explain, in terms of your own thesis, why you think that the filmmakers made the particular compositional choices they did (i.e. #2) in an effort to forward their main argument (i.e. #1). You should ask the ‘so what?’ question; these choices are not arbitrary, therefore you should interpret why the filmmakers have made certain compositional / stylistic choices. Your claim should be supported by the clips and with specific examples from the film that you point out in your “yak track.” 4. Show Off our talent and knowledge gleaned throughout the course with the addition of a one minute additional scene created by you and your group members. Grading of the Presentation: 1. The presentation has a clear thesis which states what your analysis of the rhetorical strategies of the film reveals. 2. The presentation identifies the thesis of the film. 3. The presentation has a well-developed analysis of specific techniques and strategies used to support the film’s thesis. The presentation points to TWO specific scenes and moments from the film in order support claims made about the film’s rhetorical strategies. 4. The presentation is effectively organized and involves all members of the group. 5. The presentation shows signs of careful practice and proofreading. 6. The additional scene is a minimum of one minute in length and reveals deep knowledge of language, rhetoric, and persuasion. Film Choices: Read the following summaries of the documentary film choices. Once you choose your film and have it approved by the teacher, you must have your parent or guardian sign a parental permission form BEFORE you begin viewing the film. Each of the films below is available in full online through Google Video unless otherwise noted, but can also be rented from Netflix or Blockbuster. Film Name Rating Summary Mad Hot Ballroom PG Ballroom dancing goes from lame to cool for a group of New York City public school kids in this insightful documentary. The film follows a group of 11year-olds as they learn to dance old-school styles including the merengue, rumba, tango, foxtrot and swing. Candid interviews capture the kids' initial reluctance at learning ballroom dance and their transformation into serious competitors determined to win a citywide competition. Sicko PG-13 (brief strong language) Documentary look at health care in the United States as provided by profitoriented health maintenance organizations (HMOs) compared to free, universal care in Canada, the U.K., and France. Moore contrasts U.S. media reports on Canadian care with the experiences of Canadians in hospitals and clinics there. He interviews patients and doctors in the U.K. about cost, quality, and salaries. He examines why Nixon promoted HMOs in 1971, and why the Clintons' reform effort failed in the 1990s. He talks to U.S. ex-pats in Paris about French services, and he takes three 9/11 clean-up volunteers, who developed respiratory problems, to Cuba for care. He asks of Americans, "Who are we?" Super Size Me PG13 (language) 4 Little Girls NR On the heels of recent lawsuits against McDonald's, director Morgan Spurlock takes a hilarious and often terrifying look at the effects of fast food on the human body. For one month, Spurlock eats nothing but McDonald's food, ordering everything on the menu at least once and "super-sizing" his order if asked. With obesity on the rise, Spurlock's film begs the question: Where does personal responsibility end and corporate responsibility begin? Acclaimed director Spike Lee examines one of the most shocking crimes to occur in American history--the 1963 bombing of a black church in Birmingham, Alabama, that resulted in the deaths of four children attending Sunday School--in a moving documentary that earned an Academy Award nomination. Along with archival news footage, Lee talks with surviving family members and interviews Coretta Scott King, Walter Cronkite, Bill Cosby, and former Alabama governor George Wallace. Walmart: The High Cost of Low Prices NR This documentary takes the viewer on a deeply personal journey into the everyday lives of families struggling to fight Goliath. From a family business owner in the Midwest to a preacher in California, from workers in Florida to a poet in Mexico, dozens of film crews on three continents bring the intensely personal stories of an assault on families and American values. The 11th Hour PG A look at the state of the global environment including visionary and practical solutions for restoring the planet's ecosystems Outfoxed: Rupert Murdoch’s War on Journalism NR Documentary on reported Conservative bias of the Rupert Murdoch-owned Fox News Channel (FNC), which promotes itself as "Fair and Balanced". Material includes interviews with former FNC employees and the interoffice memos they provided. Taxi to the Dark Side R (disturbing images, and content involving torture and graphic nudity) Using the torture and death in 2002 of an innocent Afghan taxi driver as the touchstone, this film examines changes after 9/11 in U.S. policy toward suspects in the war on terror. Soldiers, their attorneys, one released detainee, U.S. Attorney John Yoo, news footage and photos tell a story of abuse at Bagram Air Base, Abu Ghraib, and Guantanamo Bay. From Bush, Cheney, Rumsfeld, and Gonzalez came unwritten orders to use any means necessary. The CIA and soldiers with little training used sleep deprivation, sexual assault, stress positions, waterboarding, dogs and other terror tactics to seek information from detainees. Many speakers lament the loss of American ideals in pursuit of security Why We Fight PG 13 (disturbing war images and language) Born Into Brothels R (Strong language) Filmed during the Iraq War, this documentary dissects America's military machine with a keen eye to answering the question: Why does America engage in war? Through personal stories of soldiers, government officials, scholars, journalists and innocent victims, the film examines the political and economic interests and ideological factors, past and present, behind American militarism. Winner of the 2005 Sundance Grand Jury Award. This Oscar-winning documentary is a portrait of several unforgettable children who live in Calcutta's red-light district, where their mothers work as prostitutes. Spurred by the kids' fascination with her camera, Zana Briski, a photographer documenting life in the brothels, decides to teach them photography. As they begin to look at and record their world through new eyes, the kids awaken to their own talents and sense of worth. Just For Kicks NR (language) Iraq in Fragments NR Control Room (with Spanish subtitles) NR (language and very disturbing images) This documentary peers into the controversial and often dangerous operations of the 7-year-old Al Jazeera news network. Although it often enrages its own people, the news outlet has become the most accepted informational resource in the Arab community. Filmmaker Jehane Noujaim gains extraordinary access to Al Jazeera journalists and examines the risks they confront on a daily basis. The U.S. vs. John Lennon PG13 (some strong language, violent images, some drug references) David Leaf's provocative documentary examines John Lennon's growing involvement in antiwar efforts from 1966 to 1976 and the U.S. government's attempts to silence him. The film picks up Lennon's story as he begins to shed his Beatles identity and adopt the role of a peace activist. Lennon's wife, Yoko Ono, collaborated on the film, which features interviews with Carl Bernstein, Walter Cronkite, Gov. Mario Cuomo, Angela Davis and others. Taking a look at the three-decade rise of sneakers, from comfortable footwear to high-end fashion accessory, this fun documentary explores the influence of athletes and entertainers on the trend, focusing particularly on the world of hip-hop. Athletes, collectors and musicians -- including Fab 5 Freddy, DMC, Cold Crush Brothers, Bobbito Garcia, Russell Simmons and other style setters -- weigh in on where the shoes stand in American culture today. Honored with an Oscar nod and prizes for editing and cinematography at the 2006 Sundance Film Festival, director James Longley's striking portrait of a nation divided presents a collage of images and commentary from ordinary Iraqi citizens coping with the effects of war, political unrest, religious feuds and an uncertain future. Moving beyond the abstract, the film powerfully captures the indelible humanity of those living in a country defined by conflict. PG13 (disturbing images) The Fog of War Former Secretary of Defense Robert S. McNamara is the sole focus of a film that not only analyzes McNamara's controversial decisions during the first half of the Vietnam War, but also his childhood upbringing, his education at Berkley and Harvard, his involvement in World War II, and his later years as president of the World Bank. Culling footage from almost 20 hours of interviews with the Secretary, Morris details key moments from McNamara's career, including the 1945 bombing of Tokyo, the Cuban Missile Crisis, and President Kennedy's suggestions to the Secretary that the U.S. remove itself from Vietnam. Throughout the film, the 85-year-old McNamara expounds his philosophies on international conflict, and shows regret and pride in equal measure for, respectively, his mistakes and accomplishments. Documentary Modes: from http://www.bfi.org.uk/education/teaching/realshorts/thinking/nfd/doc-modes.html Bill Nichols, an American academic, introduced the theory of documentary modes in 1991 as an attempt to theorise documentary practice. He suggested that there was a fairly direct linear progression from the early documentaries of the 1930s to the present day, starting with expository documentaries, evolving progressively into observational, interactive and, finally, reflexive documentary styles. More recently, Stella Bruzzi has taken issue with Nichols' idea of a simple chronological progression. She argues that all types of documentaries have existed in different periods, and she adds another mode - the 'performative'. 'Traditionally, documentaries strove to represent reality as faithfully as possible. They relied upon the realist assumption that it was necessary to disguise the conventions used in making the documentary and so appear to offer a window on the world. Conversely, the new performative documentaries herald a different notion of documentary "truth" that acknowledges the construction and artificiality of even the non-fiction film.' Stella Bruzzi, New Documentary: A Critical Introduction, (2000). The Documentary Modes can be summarized as such and may be a helpful guide as you begin to consider your film. Please consider and use some of this information as part of your presentation. Mode Characterized by: The expository mode 'Voice of God' narration directly addressing the viewer Direct relationship between images and voice-over Interviews used only in support of the film's argument A conventional narrative structure A narrator who also may appear as a 'character' in the film (such as David Attenborough) The observational mode A non-interventionist or fly-on-the-wall style of presentation Unobtrusive camera work, appearing to offer a 'window on the world' Relatively long takes connoting that nothing has been 'cut out' Zoom lenses and hand-held camera following the action Editing which gives the impression of 'lived' or 'real' time Speech which is overheard and not directed to camera or audience Synchronous sound Only diegetic music (originating in the documentary's world) The interactive mode The acknowledged presence of the camera and crew The film-maker speaking directly to her/his subjects An emphasis on monologues and dialogues Representation of multiple viewpoints, contributing different information Editing which maintains logical continuity No definitive argument, leaving the audience to decide The reflexive mode Acknowledgement of the medium to problematise it Discussion of the problems of making the documentary Making explicit the process of representation Making explicit institutional issues (such as who is funding it) The performative mode Where the documentary maker 'stars' in his/her own film, is also self-reflexive, such as in Kurt & Courtney (1998). While it is useful to keep all these styles in mind, many documentaries, even early ones, don't fit rigidly into a single category. The seminal Housing Problems, for example, is expository in that it includes interviews to the camera, and interactive in that it has several different voice-overs; it is also observational. Michael Moore's films offer further examples of this hybridity. ____________________________________________________________________________________ (cut) Permission Slip: Dear Parent/Guardian, Please take a moment to review the AP Rhetorical Analysis of a Documentary Film Assignment and the film summary with your child. Then sign below. Student Name:_____________________ _______________has permission to view and analyze the documentary film, Film Name: ____________________________________. I, Print Parent/Guardian Name: ______________________________, have read the assignment and the summary provided in this document and understand that the views presented in the documentary are the argument of the filmmaker and do not necessarily reflect the views of the teacher or Central Bucks School District. ____________________________________________ Parent/Guardian Signature ____________________________ Date Documentary Film Name:_______________________________ Student Name: ____________________________________ Individual Viewing Chart: Time (You will Technique Used need this for your clips suggestions at the very least) Specific Example from the Film Effect on the Viewer Individual Viewing Chart: Time (You will Technique Used need this for your clips suggestions at the very least) Specific Example from the Film Effect on the Viewer Group Work: Discuss these questions with your group members and record your group’s answers. What is the filmmaker’s purpose? What is the argument/thesis of the film? What assertions/claims are made? To what extent does the argument have validity? Are there fallacies? What is the attitude or viewpoint of the filmmaker? Tone? What cinematic techniques does the filmmaker use to make his/her point? (Think about the diction and syntax of the film). Look on your individual charts for this. How does the structure of the film help achieve its purpose? Your claim or thesis for your Presentation (Interpret / explain, in terms of your own thesis, why you think that the filmmakers made the particular compositional choices they did (i.e. #2) in an effort to forward their main argument) Clips needed for the Presentation: (Record the start and stop time as seen in Google Video) Clip start time Clip stop time Description of what is happening in the clip. Clip One: Script ideas for the Yak Track Clip Two: Script ideas for the Yak Track