Introduction to Literary Studies II Summer 2010 Mo 11.30-13.00; SR34D2/Attemsgasse 25, top floor Michael Fuchs 1. Syllabus March 1, 2010 Course Overview March 8, 2010 The Study of Fiction I: The Story-Level Primary: Ernest Hemingway: “The Killers” Raymond Carver: “Tell the Women We’re Going” 6-word narratives Secondary: Nünning 101-110 & 126-130 Additional: Meyer “Plot” (69-70), “Character” (117-118), “Setting” (162-164); Kennedy & Gioia “Plot” (13-15), “Character” (77-79), “Setting” (107-110) March 15, 2010 The Study of Fiction II: Narrative Point of View and Narrative Voice Primary: John Updike: “A & P” clips from Kiss Kiss Bang Bang and The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy Edgar Allan Poe: “The Tell-Tale Heart” Secondary: Nünning 110-123 Edgar Allan Poe: “Review of Hawthorne’s Twice-Told Tales” Additional: Meyer “Point of View” (188-193); Kennedy & Gioia “Point of View” (25-29) March 22, 2010 The Study of Fiction III: Narrative Voice cont. and Structure Primary: William Faulkner: “A Rose for Emily” X-Files episode “Jose Chung’s From Outer Space” (viewing) Woody Allen: “The Kugelmass Episode” Secondary: Nünning 124-126; Bedford Glossary “Frame Story” Jörg Türschmann “Die Metalepse” Werner Wolf: “Metalepsis as a Transgeneric and Transmedial Phenomenon” (excerpts) April 19, 2010 The Study of Fiction IV: Intertextuality Primary: Donald Barthelme “Bluebeard” The Simpsons episode(s) (tba) (viewing) Secondary: T.S. Eliot: “Tradition and the Individual Talent” Graham Allen: “Intertextuality” Margarete Landwehr: “Literature and the Visual Arts: Questions of Influence and Intertextuality” (Presentation or leading of discussion possible) April 26, 2010 The Study of Fiction V: Self- and Meta-Reference Primary: John Barth: “Life-Story” Robert Coover: “The Magic Poker” Supernatural episode “The Monster at the End of This Book” (viewing) Duck Amuck (viewing) Secondary: Werner Wolf: “Metareference across Media” (excerpts) John Barth: “Literature of Exhaustion” Additional: Dana Polan: “A Brechtian Cinema? Towards a Politics of Self-Reflexive Film” Terrance R. Lindvall & J. Matthew Melton: “Towards a Post-Modern Animated Discourse” (Presentation or leading of discussion possible) May 3, 2010 The Study of Fiction VI: The Bluest Eye: A Case Study Primary: Toni Morrison: The Bluest Eye Presentations: The Bluest Eye and Its Multiple Narrators Questions of Race and Gender in The Bluest Eye The Dick and Jane Primer May 10, 2010 The Study of Fiction VII: American Psycho: A Case Study Primary: Bret Easton Ellis: American Psycho 1 Presentations: Who is Patrick Bateman? Narration, Identity, and the Crisis of Masculinity in American Psycho Cannibalism as a Metaphor American Psycho: Setting and Meaning May 17, 2010 A Short Introduction to Intermedial Narratology: The Study of Graphic Novels Primary: Art Spiegelman: Maus: A Survivor’s Tale (only part I obligatory) Secondary: W.J.T. Mitchell: “Beyond Comparison” Roland Barthes: “Rhetoric of the Image” Charles Hatfield: “An Art of Tensions” Additional: Thierry Groensteen: “Why Are Comics Still in Search of Cultural Legitimization” Joshua Brown: “Of Mice and Memory” Hillary Chute: “History and Graphic Representation in Maus” Stephen Tabachnick: “Of Maus and Memory: The Structure of Art Spiegelman’s Graphic Novel of the Holocaust” Michael E. Staub: “The Shoah Goes On and On: Remembrance and Representation in Art Spiegelman’s Maus” (Leading of discussion possible) May 31, 2010 The Study of Drama I: A Short Introduction Primary: excerpts from dramas by William Shakespeare and George Bernard Shaw (see website) Secondary: Nünning 76-100; Kennedy & Gioia “Drama,” “Reading a Play,” “Theatrical Conventions,” and “Elements of a Play” (1108-1111), “Modes of Drama” and “Tragedy” (1133-1135), “Comedy” (1141-1143); Meyer “Modern Drama” (1252-1256) June 7, 2010 The Study of Drama II: Our Town: A Case Study Due: Title of your Paper to be blogged before the meeting Primary: Thornton Wilder: Our Town Thornton Wilder: Our Town performed on Broadway’s Booth during its Dec 2002-Jan 2003 run (viewing) Secondary: Hubert Zapf: “Die verspätete Gattung: Das amerikanische Drama der Moderne” Gerhard P. Knapp: “Verfremdungseffekt” Presentations: The Temporal Structure of Our Town Signifying Time (Symbols, Imagery, etc.) in Our Town Breaking the Fourth Wall in Our Town June 14, 2010 The Study of Drama III: We Bombed in New Haven: A Case Study Due: Preliminary Bibliography (e-mail before class); include at least 5 bibliographic entries and 3 types of sources (e.g. book by one author, article in an edited collection, article in a journal) – you don’t have to use these sources in your final paper! Primary: Joseph Heller: We Bombed in New Haven Presentations: War, the Military, and Meaning in We Bombed in New Haven We Bombed in New Haven and the Theater of the Absurd We Bombed in New Haven as a Meta-Play June 21, 2010 Writing Workshop: Peer Review of your Paper Due: bring part of your paper (ca. 1000 words) to class mail me the part of your paper no later than Sunday, June 20, 2010, 3 p.m. June 28, 2010 Exam July 15, 2010 Deadline for Paper 2 2. Course Material All short stories, dramas, secondary materials, films, TV episodes, and film clips will be made available online as pdf no later than 2 weeks before they are discussed in class. All pdfs are read-protected; the password is always “----” (if you’re in my course, you’ll know – check UGO). The same password is used for media files, which are packed into .rar files – you’ll need a rar-compatible extraction software, such as WinRAR or 7-Zip to open these archives. The videos will be put online in mpeg2 format (playable with any DVD playback software) and in some cases also in 1080p. You’ll need either a Blu-Ray-compatible software player (PowerDVD 8 or 9, ArcSoft TotalMedia Theatre 2 or 3) or a software player such as KMPlayer and the necessary codecs (e.g. CoreAVC or ffdshow). PowerPoints will go online before class – Sunday evening at the latest. There are ca. 15 copies of both The Bluest Eye and Our Town available in the library. We Bombed in New Haven and Our Town will be made available in digital form. You will have to somehow acquire Maus and American Psycho (see website for suggested editions). As you can see from the syllabus, only part one of Maus (My Father Bleeds History) is set reading; however, I suggest purchasing The Complete Maus – you won’t regret it. You probably already own An Introduction to the Study of English and American Literature by Vera and Ansgar Nünning. I will make sections from other introductory books available in digital form as additional material. Page numbers for Nünning and all the other books are provided for all sessions. Since these are sections from several introductory books, much of it is redundant. As such, the information from the other introductions is only additional material that you may want to consult, since there may be times when you find a definition from a writer other than Nünning more appealing or whatever. Plus, the sections from the other books are really short, so no harm in quickly reading them. What you find on the syllabus under ‘primary’ and ‘secondary’ are required readings/viewings; ‘additional’ material is on the one hand additional information from other introductory books as well as additional material for those interested; these are not required readings. There will be viewing dates for the films and TV episodes (clips are not planned, but if you want to) at the department – we’ll try to find a date for these in our very first meeting. Of course, if you decide to watch the film/episode(s) at home, there’s no need for coming to the viewing. Keep the unannounced quizzes (see below) in mind, however! The lower the number of people attending a viewing, the higher the probability … There’s also a blog for the course. Basically, you can post anything loosely course-related; you are, however, also required to do work online – see below. If you have any questions that may be of interest to more students, preferably don’t e-mail them, but rather post them on the blog. Suggested additional books: a) General Introductions to Literature Kennedy, X.J., and Dana Gioia. Literature: An Introduction to Fiction, Poetry, Drama, and Writing. 11th Edition. New York, NY: Pearson-Longman, 2009. Meyer, Michael. The Bedford Introduction to Literature: Reading, Thinking, Writing. 8th Edition. Boston, MA: Bedford Press, 2008.[9th ed. announced for Feb 2010] b) Introductions to Narratology Bal, Mieke. Narratology: Introduction to the Theory of Narrative. 3rd Edition. Toronto, ON: University of Toronto Press, 2009. Fludernik, Monika. An Introduction to Narratology. New York, NY: Routledge, 2009. Onega, Susana, and José Ángel García Landes. Narratology: An Introduction. New York, NY: Pearson-Longman, 1996. Rimmôn-Qênān, Šûlammît. Narrative Fiction: Contemporary Poetics. 2nd Edition. New York, NY: Routledge, 2005. Schmid, Wolf. Elemente der Narratologie. 2nd Edition. Berlin: de Gruyter, 2008. c) Introductions to Drama Pfister, Manfred. Das Drama: Theorie und Analyse. 11th Edition. Stuttgart: UTB, 2001. [English edition available from Cambridge University Press under the title The Theory and Analysis of Drama] d) Introductions to Literary Theory Barry, Peter. Beginning Theory: An Introduction to Literary and Cultural Theory. 3rd Edition. Manchester: Manchester University Press, 2009. Hölbling, Walter W., and Justine Tally, eds. Theories & Texts: For Students – By Students. Berlin: LIT Verlag, 2007. e) Histories of American Literature Gray, Richard. A History of American Literature. Malden, MA: Blackwell, 2003. Wagner, Hans-Peter. A History of British, Irish and American Literature. Trier: Wissenschaftlicher Verlag Trier, 2003. [2nd ed. announced for spring 2010] 3 f) Glossaries Murfin, Ross C., and Supryia M. Ray. Bedford Glossary of Critical and Literary Terms. 3rd Edition. Boston, MA: Palgrave Macmillan, 2009. Nünning, Ansgar, ed. Metzler Lexikon Literatur- und Kulturtheorie: Ansätze – Personen – Grundbegriffe. 2nd Edition. Stuttgart: Metzler, 2001. Suggested online resources: Literary Encyclopedia (http://www.litencyc.com) membership is US-$ 18.95 per year (currently ca. € 12.50); if you desperately want some entries from the encyclopedia and don’t want to pay the membership for an entire year, mail me PAL: Perspectives in American Literature – A Research and Reference Guide (http://www.csustan.edu/english/reuben/pal/TABLE.HTML) FindArticles (http://www.findarticles.com) open access scholarly articles eNotes (http://www.enotes.com) & BookRags (http://www.bookrags.com) complete membership is US-$ 14.95 & 13.99 per month or 49.95 & 49.99 per year, but you can also buy notes for one work only; what makes eNotes as well as BookRags better than CliffsNotes, SparkNotes, PinkMonkey, GradeSaver et al. is that they also provide access to secondary material Other University of Graz provides free licenses to citavi for staff and students. Though it may be a little overblown for the purposes of a single paper, if you already know that you want to pursue an academic career or already have your BA/MA/PhD thesis in mind, it is never too early to start using it. There may be better (and even free) programs around for individual tasks, such as integrating EBSCO links and the mere creation of a bibliography, but when it comes to the entire package, in my opinion, citavi is way ahead of its competitors (if there are any …). If some of you are interested in getting an introduction to citavi, I’m happy to schedule one or two additional date(s). I’ll provide an ‘Introduction to Research Tools at the University of Graz’ meeting before the Easter break, since this ‘field’ is incredibly neglected in our curriculum and it seems that even students at the stage of writing their theses do not really know what tools are available and how to use them. This meeting will not take place during the regular course hours and you’ll thus also not be required to come. However, I may mention right away that already at this early stage of your university career, I expect you to do some research as to what academics have written about ‘your’ topic and include some secondary sources in your papers. 3. Course Work & Grading Grading < 60% = Fail (“nicht genügend”) ≥ 60% = D (“genügend”) ≥ 70% = C (“befriedigend”) ≥ 80% = B (“gut”) ≥ 90 % = A (“sehr gut”) Grading Criteria 25% term paper 20% presentation or discussion leader 20% exam 10% quizzes 10% blogging 10% participation in class 5% minutes What goes into this calculation is not the individual grades, but the individual percent of the maximum points you got. Ex: 41/50 (= 82%) on term paper (B) 38/40 (= 95%) on final (A) 10/10 (= 100%) on quizzes (A) 18/20 (= 90%) on presentation (A) 9/10 (= 90%) on blogging (A) 8/10 (= 80%) participation (B) 9/10 (= 90%) on minutes (A) 4 Taking weighting into consideration, these individual performances equal an A based on average grade (1.35), but on the basis of percentages, this makes a B (89%), because the fact that this fictional student twice just barely got a B (paper & participation) as well as three times barely an A (presentation, blogging, minutes) is taken into account here. Passing the course does not depend on fulfilling all the criteria. You may decide not to do a presentation, not to hand in journals, not to come to the final exam, not to write a paper, etc., but – of course – this means that you’re willingly waiving your right to a better grade. Term Paper (25%) You are expected to write a paper or an essay (I will only refer to ‘paper’ in the following) on a selected narrative. “Narrative” is to be understood broadly; it can be a novel, a short story, a drama, a graphic novel, a comic, a film, an episode of a TV series, a computer game, a narrative poem, a narrative song, etc. You can write your paper with a partner, in which case the paper has to be a little longer (not twice as much, since co-authoring a paper involves a lot of work that writing a paper on one’s own doesn’t). If you choose to co-author a paper, both of you will, of course, get the same points on the paper. What I definitely don’t want in a co-written paper is immediately seeing that certain chapters were written by person A and others by person B, be that because of a difference in language, quality of analysis or whatsoever. If you’re co-authoring a paper, that means that the entire paper should be on one level as far as language, style, and quality of analysis is concerned (that’s what I meant before: co-authoring usually involves more work than writing a paper on one’s own). There are two central approaches to going about your paper: you may write a ‘holistic’ analysis of the selected work (analyzing characters, structure, setting(s), theme(s), central motifs and metaphors, etc.), but since this is the easier and usually more superficial choice, you will very likely not get an A for this kind of paper (still, you can come up with an incredible paper of this kind and prove me wrong); if you want an A, you’re rather encouraged to tackle a more closely defined topic of a single work in more depth, e.g. “Unreliable Narration in Fight Club,” “The Meaning of Time in Faulkner’s The Sound and the Fury,” or do a comparative analysis, such as “The Two Serial Killers in Red Dragon: Binary Oppositions, Doppelganger, or …?” and “Overt Narration in The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy (film) and Kiss Kiss Bang Bang.” You are, of course, welcome to analyze works we discuss in class, but be aware that the mere reconstruction of arguments that came up in class will not suffice for a good grade. I will not suggest paper topics. You are encouraged to come by before June 7 (the day when all topics are to be fixed) to discuss your topic. Since I can’t stand the unnecessary waste of paper, you’re more than welcome to e-mail your papers (if you don’t receive a confirmation of receipt within 12 hrs, your e-mail was likely lost somewhere in the depths of cyberspace). If you e-mail your paper, you’ll also receive the correction digitally (you can, of course, still come by to talk about your grade, etc.). Digital copies are to be submitted as .pdf (not .doc, .docx, .rtf, etc.) or .html. If you don’t have Adobe Acrobat or Word 2007, for which there is a free pdf plug-in available, there’s a number of free pdf converters available online – just google. If you hand in a physical copy (either in the secretary’s office or you give it directly to me), you’ll also get the correction on paper. Handwritten papers are not accepted! Unless I’m told otherwise, I will only mark very severe mistakes and add general comments; if you want more thorough marking (especially in terms of language), I’m more than happy to do it, but please tell me so (mention it in the mail or something). I should strongly emphasize that I absolutely detest sloppiness, which means that spelling mistakes, typos and such are very likely more problematic with me than most other employees of the English or American Studies Departments – most, if not all, of you will use word-processing software, so there shouldn’t be any typos. The paper is expected to be ca. 2,500 words long (ca. 3,500 in the case of co-authoring a paper), but quantity is no substitute for quality! An excellent paper on a narrowly defined topic may only need 2,000 words (less gets tough). If you submit a physical copy, please use at least 1.5 spacing; when submitting a digital copy, this is not necessary. In your paper, use quotes from your primary text(s) to support your arguments, but this should not amount to a mere summarizing, let alone paraphrasing, of the source. Papers are graded according to a scheme that considers a) language, b) organization, c) the formulation of a thesis, research questions and the related analysis, or (which will probably be the case with most of you) a thorough descriptive analysis, d) preparation and/or originality, and e) the use of sources, correct citation (for details concerning grading see appendix C). Points a) and e) are based on the performance of the class, i.e. if you are on par with the best student in language and/or documenting and integrating sources, you will get the maximum points unless the performance of the class is below a level where this approach is acceptable. The other factors are independent of class performance. For citations, you may follow the English department’s style sheet, MLA, Harvard, or Chicago Style, and use in-text citations and not foot-/endnotes (2 exceptions: a) digital submission in html format, in which case you should use (hyperlinked) endnotes; b) using sidenotes on the right side of your page – see the journal New Cinemas if you do not quite know what I mean) and stick to one style. The deadline for papers is July 15, 2010; paper copies have to be handed in on that day before noon, digital copies may be e-mailed until July 15, 23.59 CET (but you know, e-mails do get lost in cyberspace and if I don’t have the paper in my virtual inbox on the morning of July 16 [since e-mails don’t necessarily arrive within seconds] and see that it was posted before midnight, it will be counted as a late submission). You can hand in your paper until the end of July, but for 5 each week it is handed in late, 10 percentage points will be deducted from the total points you get on your paper (i.e. 10% for submission until July 22; -20% July 29; -30% July 31). Plagiarism is not accepted. No matter how you did in other aspects of grading, plagiarism (unless very minor, i.e. one or two phrases) in your paper results in failing the class. If you are uncertain of how to document sources or how to quote, please ask me. Both The Bedford Introduction to Literature and Literature: An Introduction to Fiction, Poetry, Drama, and Writing include sample essays and papers, some of which can be found on my website. Presentation/Discussion Leader(s) (20%) You may do a presentation in the ‘case study sessions’ as well as in the ones on intertextuality and meta-reference, respectively. Please do not summarize the entire plot of the primary work in question in your presentations, only include bits and pieces (including quotations) that are of importance to your presentation. In the sessions on intertextuality, meta-reference, and the study of graphic novels you may also, instead of doing a presentation, lead the discussion. Since leading the discussion involves more work than a mere presentation (a short ‘kick off’ presentation plus leading of the discussion, which also requires some background reading), you will get some bonus points if you do well. Presenters and discussion leaders are expected to provide structured handouts. Slides are not necessary, may, however, be used. Please e-mail me your handouts and slides so I can put them online for people who’ve missed the class. If you’re doing a presentation in a non-case-study-session or leading the discussion in one of the sessions, I urge you to contact me at least the week prior to the respective session so we can figure out whether there is something of importance that you may want to add or I should cover (of course, if you’re having one of the case study presentations, you may also see me before the actual presentation). If anyone’s willing to work on intertextuality (session on April 19), please see me before the Easter break to fix the Simpsons episodes that will be discussed; concerning the presentation/discussion, you can contact me during the break. Especially on your handout, but also during your presentation, indicate sources of arguments that are not your own and include a list of references on the handout. An aspect of presentations that should not be forgotten is feedback. Students are expected to give feedback and that includes negative feedback. If you already know you want to do a presentation on/lead the discussion of a specific topic prior to our first meeting, you can, of course, e-mail me right away. First come, first serve. I would prefer presentations to be done by individuals or pairs, but depending on the size of the group, trios may also be acceptable – check my website after registration has closed concerning up-to-date information on that issue. Exam (20%) The exam will consist of three parts: the first part will be terminology (based on the terminology list for the BA Fachprüfung; a list of terms for the exam will be distributed around June 15); the second one questions about the primary texts (What is the name of the main character in [enter title]?’ ‘Who wrote [enter title]?’ ‘When was [enter title] written?’ ‘Name a work that uses the stream of consciousness technique’ ‘Name two functions of metalepses in Maus?’ – no worries, questions of the latter kind will only be about things we discuss in class), including recognizing three works on the basis of short excerpts or images (there will be no questions on works from which only excerpts were read and clips watched, respectively). The third part will be a guided interpretation of a selected part of a work we’ve discussed in class. There will be one re-take date in the second or third week of July in case you are ill (medical certificate required) or other issues have kept you from coming, such as an accident (again, you’ll have to provide some official proof). Quizzes (10%) Depending on your willingness to do the readings and participate in class, there will be at least 3 unannounced quizzes (there will be three if you do your readings and are actively participating, more if that doesn’t work too well). These quizzes are short multiple-choice tests (ca. 5 questions) that deal with both the primary and secondary texts (including films, film clips, etc. – in short, what is listed as ‘primary’ and ‘secondary’ on the syllabus) scheduled for the day of the quiz. The worst result will be dropped (since there are reasons for being unprepared … once). If you’re doing well on all three (or more) of them, your quiz performance will find some reflection in your grade. There will be no repeat dates for unannounced quizzes (you’re allowed to miss one, anyway, plus it would eliminate the idea of an ‘unannounced’ quiz). The quizzes will always take place after calling the roll, so if you’re late … Blogging (10%) You are expected to blog response journals. Your output should amount to ca. 350 words per week (again, this is not about quantity). I want to stress that you are supposed to write these entries on a weekly basis and not half of them during the Easter break and the other half at the end of the semester. In the journals, you can write about your thoughts concerning 6 primary or secondary readings (this is the preferred option), skim through a glossary of literary terms and wonder whether you’ve understood a term correctly, reflect on issues that came up during class discussions, etc. The entries don’t have to be well-formulated or whatever, but one should be able to understand what you’re trying to say. Also, since I’m not lingophilic, all sorts of artistic responses are welcome if you think (that I think) they are equal to the workload of writing 350 words. And since these blogs are meant to stimulate discussions, you are supposed to read the blog entries of some fellow students each week and – if appropriate – respond (responses are included in the 350-word-workload). You will receive your usernames and passwords after our first meeting via e-mail. Participation in Class (10%) The success of this course is highly dependent on you. A productive and interesting class emerges from conflicts, disagreements, and debates. In order to create an atmosphere in which this is possible, you are expected to come to class prepared and participate in the discussions. To support preparation, I want you to keep short factsheets that include important information on major characters, local & temporal setting, narrative point of view/voice, structure, themes, salient isotopies, leitmotifs, symbols, and other salient features for each primary reading. These factsheets should also include references to page numbers to facilitate finding the information in the primary reading/s. I will occasionally check whether you have these factsheets ready (they may be handwritten, on your PDA, or whatever, but you have to be able to access them during class). This is a Proseminar, so you are required to attend the individual sessions. Missing more than 3 classes results in an F. Class starts at 11.30 sharp. Being late three times (which means coming after I’ve called the roll) or leaving early equals an absence. There will be no attendance lists for the film/TV show viewings, since you can also download them. Minutes (5%) Small teams keep minutes for each class. The minutes are due on Friday of the same week, so that I can put them online in time for people who’ve missed the previous class to see what we’ve done. Minutes are result-based, so do not include information on how we came to a certain conclusion, but only the conclusion and focus on the most central points of a session (max. 2 pp.). Minutes ought to include the name/s of the person/s taking the minutes, course number, course title, date of the class, and, as mentioned above, the central points of discussion, which should be structured like chapters, e.g. 1. Analyzing the Story-Level; 1.1 Plot; 1.2 Characters; 2. Analyzing the Discourse-Level; 2.1 Narrative Voice, etc. 4. Varia Problems If you have any pressing needs, difficulties or frustrations related to the course, I urge you to see me. This is the first time I’ve taught a university course and I welcome all suggestions as to how the course can be made more enjoyable (I will, however, not drastically reduce my reading requirements). Voice your Opinion I am definitely not the infallible expert in the field of literary studies (if you claim you are, you’re ignorant, anyway …). If I make any mistakes, or if I say something that seems odd, draw my attention to it. If you’re of a different opinion concerning e.g. the interpretation of a work, voice it! Reaching Me Although I do have official office hours (Monday after class, Friday 10-11), I follow an open-door policy. You should be able to find me in my office between 8 a.m. and 1 p.m. on weekdays (exception: Wednesday only until 11 a.m.). Of course, you can also e-mail me at m.fuchs@uni-graz.at – I usually respond within a couple of hours, also on weekends, during the Easter break, etc. If you don’t receive a reply within 24 hours, your mail probably didn’t reach me. 7 Sources/Quotations Preparation, Originality, Theories Analysis Thesis Formulation and Support Organization/Structure Grammar/Punctuation/Style Grading Criteria Appendix: Grading Grid 8 Sufficient (2 pts.) Satisfactory (3 pts.) Good (4 pts.) Excellent (5 pts.) Insufficient (0-1pts.) essay has no major grammatical and punctuation errors and very few minor errors minor errors do not interfere with the understanding of the essay uses right register throughout a few major errors and multiple minor errors, but almost all sentences are clear and understandable style is appropriate clear, logical, and very organized around a developed thesis clear structure which aids the aim of the paper a number of basic grammar and punctuation errors but the meaning is relatively clear a number of stylistic problems follows a logical organization, but sometimes drifts from the thesis structural deficits minimal many basic grammar and punctuation errors limited understandability as a result acceptable organization and a basic thesis statement structural deficits are only evident in parts of the text or they are relatively minor, not impeding general reception highly original and encompassing thesis (or a number of them) every point is clearly supported by strong evidence very few major errors some minor errors ok as long as they do not interfere with understanding few stylistic errors (register, fluidity, etc.) many points are ambiguous high degree of structural deficits make reading the text difficult relatively encompassing thesis, supported with some evidence strong and encompassing thesis evidence to support almost every point no organization incoherently structured that thesis and/or argument are hard to follow no support of thesis or the evidence provided does not support (also negatively) thesis analysis links thesis and evidence analysis shows a strong relationship between evidence and thesis analysis is clear and consistent throughout use of evidence is minimal, but it does support the thesis Or: thesis provided is insubstantial or relatively weak very high degree of preparation and originality use and application of theory is extended and highly original minimal or flawed analysis Or: analysis stretches its meaning in an attempt to support the thesis quality of the text is due to noticeable preparation characterized by substantial originality highly relevant theoretical sources are applied in a consistent manner clear and consistent quoting throughout thorough research of sources evident no attempt to explain how the content relates to thesis Or: analysis has no relation to thesis preparation is sufficient but minimal Or: only minor originality Or: only minor theoretical quality noticeable preparation a number of original aspects (arguments, engaging with secondary literature, etc.) some complex involvement with theoretical sources clear and consistent academic quoting most important academic sources have been consulted academic academic quoting and bibliographical work have only minor flaws a number of important sources used analysis explains how the evidence supports thesis Or: analysis highlights a number of highly interesting aspects which would otherwise go unnoticed preparation for essay is insufficient (no secondary lit) quoting and/or bibliographical work is highly flawed quoting and bibliographical work show a number of errors Or: misses some central sources or uses irrelevant or minor sources