Cornell Notes [without summary at bottom] for “Theme” Note: the purposes of taking notes on this assignment are 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. To become intimately familiar with the content of the source To modify our own thoughts on the topic To create a shortened version of the source material suitable for study To personalize the information provided in the source by making personal connections; Record your thinking about the content – don’t just copy; A good way of doing this is to make notes that include ideas about the stories we have read To practice note-taking in preparation for note-taking during lectures and presentations as well as during research in all subjects To practice using abbreviations that allow us to record ideas efficiently a. Note: Where I have used abbreviations I give the full word the first time I use them because I want us all to understand what is written below. You can start developing your own subject-specific abbreviations as you create notes for yourself; One effective method is to leave out vowels people can be abbreviated to ppl. Source: Literature: Structure, Sound, and Sense, by Laurence Perrine Topic: “Theme” as presented by Laurence Perrine [with a few extra thoughts thrown in] Cues and Questions Notes Intro Which joke has a theme? What is the definition? 3 parts What is the purpose of each type of story in 3a? When does theme exist? 2 parts What is theme the same as? Are all themes about all people? What determines the length of a theme statement? Two jokes – one with theme; one without o Kiss/wife o Boy stays late Body of the chapter 1. Perrine’s Definition in full: The THEME of a piece of fiction is its controlling idea or its central insight. It is the unifying generalization about life stated or implied by the story. 2. To derive the theme of a story we must ask what its central purpose is: what view of life it supports or what insight into life it reveals. 3. Not all stories have themes a. Examples: horror, adventure, murder b. Difference between escape and interpretive fiction 4. Theme exists only a. When an author has seriously attempted to record life or reveal a truth about it – or b. When an author has mechanically introduced some theory of life into a story, which he uses as a unifying element and which the story is meant to illustrate i. [E.g. Lord of the Flies] 5. In many stories (strs), the theme is the same as what it reveals about human character [our 4th question in determining theme: i.e. Who’s the protagonist (prot)? What’s his or her problem? How does he or she solve it? What does that tell us about people (human character)?] a. May be about individuals or may be about ppl in relationships b. Some themes are only about some ppl c. Others are about all ppl [more or less] 6. Some themes can be stated briefly; some at greater length a. Simple or short stry: brief theme statement b. Longer/more complex: greater length What is a characteristic of rich stories? How will we write a theme statement for a rich story? Are stories just there to generate a theme statement? What is the difference between implicit and explicit them statements? Why are most implicit? (3 reasons) Is theme the same as a moral? Why? 3 reasons Is it best to ask “What does this story teach?” What are the differences between “commercial” and “quality” stories. 6 for commercial and 5 for quality 7. A rich story will give several and complex insights a. For a rich stry, to write a theme statement, we must identify the CENTRAL insight: the one which explains the greatest number of elements in a story and relates them to each other b. In a good stry, theme is what gives unity [ties it all together] 8. Any good story is much more than just its theme statement a. A story’s purpose is not just to yield up the insight b. It is to make it come alive (to vivify it) c. Without the story it is just a dry backbone, without flesh 9. Sometimes theme is stated directly 10. Often it is implied (the theme is implicit) a. Purpose of a writer is to reveal life; not comment on it [i.e. not editorialize on it in a moralizing or preachy manner] i. If he has to be explicit ( tell the reader directly what he is saying), he hasn’t done job of a story teller ii. To have max impact, writer must avoid interrupting or making remarks iii. Doesn’t want to spoil the “fun” by explaining it [its like explaining a joke – the joke loses its “Aha!” effect] 11. Theme is usually not a moral a. E.g. Not a rule for how we should behave b. Moral is too narrow c. Not suitable for a story that reveals human character d. Moral and lesson are best avoided in the discussion of theme e. Examining theme is better because i. A story’s first objective is to provide enjoyment ii. It prevents us from oversimplifying a story 1. Prevents turning it into a platitude a. Platitude: a dull or commonplace remark; e.g. better late than never b. Flat, trite, dull iii. It gets at the writer’s purpose which is “to give us a greater awareness and a greater understanding of life” [isn’t this the purpose of all art?] iv. Best to ask “What does this story reveal?” rather than what does it teach? 12. Commercial versus Quality stories a. Themes may be identical but more often i. Commercial stories 1. Confirm reader’s prejudices 2. Support their opinions 3. Resonate with their feelings 4. Satisfy their wishes 5. Give us life as we wish it to be not as it is 6. Are generally widely held platitudes of life ii. Interpretive Stories 1. Observe life 2. Question life 3. Are creations of a sensitive and independent observer who collates all he or she has read and observed about life 4. Are not “pretty little sentiments” Why is it worth considering an author’s theme even if we don’t agree with it? Is finding the theme for a story best approached by being a bumbling idiot? What are the benefits of going through the process of determining the theme of a story? (4 parts) What are three ways we might approach the process of determining theme? What are the six principles we should keep in mind when developing a theme statement for a particular story? 5. May reveal somber (also written sombre)truths a. [Somber (dark, gloomy, dismal] b. Perrine suggests there may be more nourishment and deeper enjoyment in understanding and responding to these rather serious truths than in consuming a steady diet of sugary platitudinous escapist works) 13. Once we have read and understood the theme of a story, we do not have to accept or agree with the theme a. However, i. it is worth knowing how others see the world. i.e. it can expand our understanding of life and people ii. There is likely to be some worthwhile insight iii. Can appreciate the artfulness of the story iv. We will probably enjoy it more than a shallower, less integrated story with a theme we simply “like” 14. FINDING the THEME of a STORY a. A delicate task! i. Sometimes we will feel what the story is about ii. Often, the process of stating the theme will reveal parts of the story which we would not otherwise notice 1. Leads to a more thorough understanding 2. Tests our understanding of a story 3. Helps us see past our understanding of the events of a story (although this is an important first step) into what the story is about 4. Ensures we get the point [– the big “Aha!” – like when we get a good joke – our brains “light up”; ] iii. Sometimes the best way is to 1. Ask “In what way has the protagonist changed in the course of the story and what, if anything, he or she has learned?” [this is our like our four question approach] 2. Explore what the central conflict is and what the outcome of the conflict is. 3. Look closely at the title b. In all cases we should keep in mind the following principles i. The theme must be stated in a sentence; it is not enough to say the theme is motherhood, or loyalty. These are the subjects. ii. A generalization about life and people. 1. Do not use the names of characters or the events in the plot (except when you are giving examples of how the story demonstrates the theme) iii. But: Not too general – do not make the theme larger than what the story shows 1. Words like every, always, all, should be used cautiously 2. Words like some, sometimes, may are often more accurate What is the subtle and main focus of developing theme statements in grades 11 and 12? What if our theme statement does not account for all details? Can theme be stated in more than one way? Does Perrine think each person can come up with a different valid theme for a story? Does Mr. Albright? Who else has an opinion on this? What are the problems with clichés? 3. Only occasionally will the theme of a story be expressible as a universal generalization iv. ***Theme is the central and unifying concept of the story 1. It must account for all the major details of the story a. ***”If we cannot explain the bearing [relevance] of an important incident or character on the theme, either in exemplifying it or modifying it in some way, it is probable that our interpretation is partial or incomplete, that at best, we have got hold only of a sub-theme. b. The theme must not be contradicted by any detail of the story. c. The theme must not rely on supposed facts – facts not actually stated or clearly implied in the story. v. There is not one correct way of stating the theme of the story [this does not mean there are multiple themes or central ideas, only that there are different ways of stating the main idea 1. Good example on p. 123, para. 2 vi. The theme is not a cliché or a well-worn phrase that we have heard all our lives. [however, a cliché that comes to mind as an insight might be a signpost to finding the theme] 1. Clichés are shortcuts a. They actually stop thinking by summing it all up rather than leading us into a fuller exploration of the story’s meaning b. “When the reader forces every new [reading] experience into an old formula, he [or she] loses the chance for a fresh perception [about life and people].” vii. It is not prescriptive; it doesn not say People should do this or that. This is the end of Perrine’s chapter on theme.